: / sorry to hear that.
thanks. I'm sure I'll survive..... maybeOh no!! Wishing you the best of luck until then!!!
You got this!!!!! Sounds almost like a zombie apocalypse over there some days!!: / sorry to hear that.
thanks. I'm sure I'll survive..... maybe
Ughhhh, only another hour to go but I just got slammed by the People of Walmart, and probably am gonna have to stay late to cleanup since Doctor has appointments scheduled in the morning.
Oh my!!!If you could see some of the customers I deal with-- it looks like a zombie apocalypse sometimes-- smells like one too
Zombies dog pile the elderly greeter.Oh my!!!
With Walmart anything is possible! Actually now that I think about it...a Walmart themed zombie movie would be pretty funny!
Sadly thing is it's 100% true. When we had a scare at my store, I was trying to usher my associates and the customers into a room we could lock, and one of the customers started complaining about her grocery cartOh goodness!!
This reminds me, we need to bring back CF singles stories! Or whatever that thread was called!
Oh no!! Wishing you the best of luck until then!!!
Aww!I hope everyone stays safe and recovers speedily.
Thank you kindly!!
And wishing you the best in your meet with her!
Going by what I remember from my elementary school English class, it wasn't run-on sentences by definition that I had an issue with. I mean, I still connected thoughts together in the same sentence with what I believed was appropriate comma placement and the use of a connecting word like "and", "or", etc. But still, they were often just too long to read and grasp all at once, when I could have found a way to separate them into two or three smaller sentences. It especially didn't help that with RPGMaker 1, in-game you could only see three lines in the dialogue box at a time (each line being about forty alphanumeric characters), so if a sentence was longer than that ... well, for the reader that can easily get them lost after going to the next box.
A guy we knew and I had met a few times in person over the years from RPG Maker Magazine actually did a stream on our game on Twitch a few years ago, and he read every bit of dialogue out loud during the playthrough. And oftentimes throughout, he had to stop and collect his breath or take a drink. ... Not the worst sign of a man's writing skill, but certainly not the best either.
here's one part of that stream I spoke of that our friend did of our game Arc Arath a few years ago, where I can see how my writing was a bit wordy and repetitive.
What a day! 
