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Publishers Employing Sensitivity Readers

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Watching a video about the expenses involved in self-publishing, I discovered the existence of sensitivity readers,

"Like fact checkers or copy editors, sensitivity readers can provide a quality-control backstop to avoid embarrassing mistakes, but they specialize in the more fraught and subjective realm of guarding against potentially offensive portrayals of minority groups, in everything from picture books to science fiction and fantasy novels."
 

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Watching a video about the expenses involved in self-publishing, I discovered the existence of sensitivity readers,

"Like fact checkers or copy editors, sensitivity readers can provide a quality-control backstop to avoid embarrassing mistakes, but they specialize in the more fraught and subjective realm of guarding against potentially offensive portrayals of minority groups, in everything from picture books to science fiction and fantasy novels."
I think these used to be called 'editors' and they checked for grammar and a bunch of other things in the process.
 
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I think these used to be called 'editors' and they checked for grammar and a bunch of other things in the process.
This is something beyond traditional editing. One writer noted that if you are straight but have an LGBT character in your book, then your book would benefit from a sensitivity reader.
 
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I wonder about this in the same way that I wonder about all similar a priori measures. If we take the story as published at the link to be a reflection of reality, it seems that the original review of the book was positive, and was (importantly...or so you would think to the people complaining about it, given the substance of their complaint) penned by a Muslim woman, at that.

So I just wonder, then, if the publisher's giving in to what seem to be a large number of social media comments from people offended by the idea of the book is really doing anyone that much good. Certainly the author's side is represented in the story, and the sensitivity reader's, but all we hear from the audience is from the segment who were offended that the book even exists. What if they are a very small number, and even more to the point, what if even within the number who might have found the idea offensive, there could be some (maybe even the majority) who could find the book enriching even if they still didn't like the idea of it? It would be hard to have that last result come to fruition if the book is sanitized beforehand in the name of appeasing a possibly inflated number of disgruntled perhaps-not-even-readers.

I mean, think about it logically for a second: If someone were to describe any number of seminal works of modern fiction according to the most distressing aspects of their story, then they don't seem like the kind of books that anyone would want to read or buy, and yet -- as shown by their durability on the market and perennial inclusion in basic courses on western literature or broader lists of books essential to the modern Western and/or American canon -- they have proven themselves to be very influential and helpful to generations of readers.

  • "A woman is humiliated for the crime of having a baby of unknown parentage" (The Scarlet Letter) smacks of sexism, loose woman-shaming (really, auto-filter? I didn't invent the term, and I find it gross, but that's the term that people have come up with), and so forth
  • "Lots of idiots hate and oppress and harm black people" (To Kill A Mockingbird, Uncle Tom's Cabin, and a million other titles) is obviously racist and offensive
  • "The mentally disabled are better off in the long run living in state facilities, rather than striving to better their lot in life" (Flowers for Algernon) is totally abelist or whatever
etc., etc.

And I know that one possible response to this line of thinking is that society is changing and so what is acceptable to it in its consumption of art is changing too, and these books are old examples from times when people were 'less enlightened' or something, which...fine, I guess, but my point is more how do we ever expect to get anywhere in life by deciding beforehand that because these great works can be summarized in ways that offend us (or, heck, can be actually offensive, not just in summary), therefore something must be done to make them more palatable?

I just wonder if it has ever occurred to the people who feel that rewriting works so as to soften them is the best solution that part of makes for truly revolutionary and thought-provoking work is that it has its hard edges, and that these have their reasons for being there, such that if you take them out, they don't work to stimulate discussion. Remove the mental retardation aspect from Flowers for Algernon or the racist climate from To Kill a Mockingbird, and how can they even teach the same lessons as they did when they forced the reader to look at these aspects of life that make them uncomfortable?

You've got to step out of the bubble sometime, folks. There simply aren't enough jobs as "sensitivity editors" out there...and there will conceivably be even fewer in the future if the concept really catches on outside of YA novels. (Though I would say it is suspect enough even if limited to mostly or only that. I read all the books that I mentioned above while I was in junior high and high school.)
 
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This is something beyond traditional editing. One writer noted that if you are straight but have an LGBT character in your book, then your book would benefit from a sensitivity reader.
Life was once so much easier.
 
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Life was once so much easier.
It seems certain ideas are a no-go if an author goes with a traditional publisher. Even editing in Grammarly, it has a sensitivity checker. It flags "freshmen" as insensitive, suggesting "first-year" instead.
 
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I play computer games from time to time and one thing that bothers me about the game Arma 3 (a first person shooter with realistic ballistics and an open-world setting) is there are no female character models in the game. It's supposed to be about the future but there are no women (not even civilians), despite the fact that most developed countries have had women in at least support roles in their militaries for decades. This would not have happened if the team that developed the game were American, rather than Czech.

So, I can appreciate where this impulse is coming from. It can help people spot glaring flaws in their artistic works. Isn't that a good thing?

BTW, attempts to raise consciousness about this situation in Arma have resulted in Gamergate style accusations of "political correctness" and emotional reactions that result in banning discussion of the topic. The new culture war is not about religion, but "political correctness". As a progressive minded gamer, I find the situation disheartening because lack of diversity of perspectives really does hurt artistic works.

  • "A woman is humiliated for the crime of having a baby of unknown parentage" (The Scarlet Letter) smacks of sexism, loose woman-shaming (really, auto-filter? I didn't invent the term, and I find it gross, but that's the term that people have come up with), and so forth

Actually, Hawthorne's goal was just the opposite, to humanize an adulterous woman and to criticize Puritan religion. If anything, he was bringing unusual sensitivity to an issue that traditional society considered not worthy of such sensitivity.
 
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