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Something's not right. Why do I feel uneasy? John whipped out his cell phone, and called Alyssa to see how things were going. She wasn't picking up.

"This is not good; if she isn't picking up then something happened." John rushed out of the door.

I just hope I can make it in time. I will NOT lose her!
 
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"so...yur ALL alone this time r u not?"e.b. asked her w/ an evil smile."yes....i am...& i want 2 be..i want u 2 kill me.please!"he looked @ her like she was crazy & thought it was a plot.he looked around & then saw she had no wepons.

"ok then."he said smiling again."this is what ive wanted all along."he smirked."i no....i just want it 2 end."she said w/ a few tears in her eyes.

"ok then,fine by me."he went over & draged her 2 a building & started 2 abuse her.he then pierced his nails in2 her skin as deep as it would go.she screamed a little bit.quietly.

"haha.this is poision thats rushing in2 yur body.yull have 3 days 2 live.u will die slow & very very very painfully."an evil smile grew on his face."i...i dont care anymore....as long as i die....ill be fine.."she said trying 2 hold bk tears.

he took his nails out after 3 mins & hit her as hard as he could outside her head,threw her against the wall & kicked her a few times & she sliped in2 unconciousness.e.b. walked off laughing evily.

alyssa was covered in bruises,gashses from his knife,& scratch marks.she was lying in a little pool of blood.enough 2 soak a whit shirt & make it red by cleaning it all up.she layed there unconcious,just waiting 2 die.
 
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John got there.

"NOO!!! ALYSSAAAA!!!" He leaped up there, grabbing her in his arms, then bolted off of the rooftop, almost stumbling upon contact with the pavement. He ran, moving as fast as he could possibly go.

I can only hope I can make it. I will not lose her! I don't care how bad she may feel about this, she's my friend and I will NOT LET HER DIE! John fought back tears as he raced back to his apartment. Damn, this is my fault. I knew something was wrong, I knew it! I didn't make it in time. I... it's my fault...

He raced back to his apartment, put her on the ground. She still had a pulse. John prayed, laying his hand on her. He continued to pray, mustering up all the strength he had to revive her. As time passed, John kept praying. Until, at last, some of the wounds began to heal.

"Lord, this is in your hands... I... can't do it... I can't..." With those words, John passed out next to her.
 
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"He better savor his last breaths... he's not going to have many of them left!" John, in a rage, immediately ran out of the door around the time Alyssa was just waking up.

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"Hmm, I wonder if she died yet..." E.B. sat there, cleaning his blade. A shadow appeared behind him. "No need to disguise yourself, X, I know who you are."

"It's over. There's nothing you can do to stop me. There's no way to discourage me from what I'm about to do. There's nothing that would stand in between me and your destruction! E.B, THIS ENDS HERE AND NOW!!!!" John leapt into the air, levitating. He stood there, eyes closed, and began to glow. The glowing emitted heat, a searing wind that began to encompass the area. Everything aorund him began to burn, or to glow from the immense heat being generated. Nearby flammable objects lit on fire, exploding. E.B. began to groan from the immense heat, trying to run away. John opened his eyes, seeing E.B. run. He stretched out his hand, and dove right at him. "EARTHBREAKER!!!" He hit E.B. dead on, causing a huge explosion, leaving a miniature crater where the blast lay. John stood there.

"It was either you, or my friends. I choose my friends." With John's glow dimming, he walked away from the wreckage.
 
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"hey hey hey hey hey!why u yellin @ me?!she asked me 2 do it!said sum cr*p about killing herself & stuff.i just did what she said!so dont be yellin @ me 4 it!its her fault!"
 
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"Please. You've put her through enough. No wonder she wants to die. YOU DID THAT TO HER!!!" John whipped out his saber, pinning E.B. to the ground using it, right through the chest.

"And, I hope you do realize that you're going to die from that blow I did, right? Your body is decaying as we speak. Within an hour or two, you will be nothing but dust in the wind. I know killing is wrong, but to not kill you would be to destroy the many innocents that YOU would kill. Enjoy your last moments." John resumed his walk back to his apartment, to check on Alyssa. E.B. pulled out the sword in his chest, and attempted to rush John, but John dodged to the side. Holding his hands outward, he shot a beam of light that went right through E.B. E.B. fell to the ground. It was over.

(I have to leave, I got class at 5:00. BBL.)
 
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alyssa was sitting @ the window staring outside @ the sunsetting horizion."2 more days..."she said 2 herself.all of a sudden john walked in & found her.alyssa payed no attention 2 the opening & closing of the door & blinked once or twice.
 
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"Oh, you're awake. You feeling better?" John spoke up as he entered the door. She didn't move from her spot.

Darn it, I never know what to do in these situations... John sat there and thought of what to say. "He said what had happened. Why? Why would you want to throw away your life like that?"
 
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"So, you're just going to accept it? You're not even going to try to live?"

"Why should I?"

"...you'd rather throw your life away, when there's so much you can do? To laugh once more? To smile once more? To be happy? To enjoy life? Please, Alyssa, there's got to be something you love in life. Something worth living for. Something worth fighting for. Something you love in life." Alyssa turned her head away. "Why throw away life when there's so much more that you can do? So much fun you can have with your friends! Enjoy life to the fullest! You have things to live for, is it really worth it to die and throw it all away?"
 
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she got up & walked a tad 2wards him,"well.....even if there is,i cant do anything about it!e.b. put sum poision or sumthing in me & in 3 days i WILL die!wether i want 2 then or not!so i have no choice!i cant take it bk anymore!I WILL DIE!theres nuthing i can do about it!"she turned away 2 hide the little tears that fell down her face.she let out a soft sob.
 
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"But, there is a Doctor out there who can." John sat down and started praying, that the curse be lifted off of her, that she'd be restored back to normal, that the hurt she had received mentally, spiritually, emotionally would go away, etc. He stood up.

"Well, you won't be going before your time, let's just say that. I don't believe it's your time to go, and I'm sure God doesn't either. Want something to eat? You have GOT to be hungry after all that." John walked over to the kitchen.
 
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"no...im not hungry."she went 2 the door & walked out slamming it behind her.she ran down the stairs 2 the entrence,she ran home slammed the door,locked it & the windows & layed down on her bed crying heaveyliey."no....NO!why did he have 2 do that?!....WHAY?!I CANT TAKE IT HERE ANYMORE!....i ca-a-ant....."she layed there 4 5 mins & then relized what she had.she ran in2 the bathroom & locked the door behind her & opened the cabinit takeing out a razor.she looked @ it smiling @ it weakly."hi there my little friend...."she said 2 it.
 
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John had an expression that said o_O;; all over him. Oooookay, not hungry? And slamming my door? Sheesh. He picked up the cell phone to call her to make sure everything was okay. Once again, no response. I hope I got it through her head. Last thing I would ever want to hear is her getting in trouble again. This reminded John of the whole E.B. issue, which got John angry again over what he had done. He got sober, realizing how he eventually wound up having to kill him, which put him into a sad, depressed mood again. Why? Why do I even bother? Why do I fight? I know it's because I care for her, but what's it all worth? Is she just going to get hurt again? O M G, is she all right? John picked up the phone again, once more to no avail. I know I shouldn't be worrying about her, but in a sense she's like my sister. I don't want her to get hurt, like I wouldn't want anything to happen to Gabrielle. Why do I, though? Is it because we're a lot alike? ...ah, I'm thinking too much. John went and turned on the TV. The news reminded him of the disaster he had caused downtown. "Wonderful, now I'm wanted for that mess. What to do now..."
 
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alyssa looked in the mirror @ her pale skinny face & then took all the braclets off her wrist & examined the scars running over them w/ her fingers.she then took the razor & made sum more gashes in2 her wrist.her vision went blury 4 a moment & she sat on the toilet lid & looked @ wrist again crying heaviley.she was singing a song 2 herself:

"Get the feeling that you're never
All alone and I remember now
At the top of my lungs in my arms she dies
She dies

At the end of the world
Or the last thing I see
You are
Never coming home
Never coming home
Could I? should I?
And all the things that you never ever told me
And all the smiles that are ever gonna haunt me
Never coming home
Never coming home
Could I? Should I?
And all the wounds that are ever gonna scar me
For all the ghosts that are never gonna catch me"

"ill miss u my friends,itll be better w/out me though....i promise...."

she got up & sat against the wall.she then took the razor & cut real deep 1 last time in2 her wrist making her slip in2 death as she drew her 1 last & final breath.

(i must go but ill be bk on 2marrow.i promise!)
 
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(i dunno.my brain works like that ya no?!hehehe!^^its a cliff hanger!whoooooooooo!*waves hands in air while saying it*youll just have 2 figure out sumthin!oh!nm!i no!hold on,ill put it in the next post.*gos 2 post the next thingy ma bob*)
 
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(ok,here it gos....here gos nuthin!)

the next day had come & it was 2:00 pm.he hadent heared from alyssa.normally he would have by now.@ least 2 times by now.he called her cell.no answer.he tried again.no answer.he tried her house twice.no answer.he started 2 get a little worried on what happened when she left his apartment the other day.he started 2 walk 2 her house but said that he was being silly & that she was ok.but then all of a sudden,....
 
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Ryou came running up. "John! Something's happened to Alyssa, she won't open up. I'm getting worried, she's been like that for a few hours now."

"You can't be serious... let's go!" John and Ryou went running over to Alyssa's house. John knocked. "Alyssa, it's me, everything alright?" No reply. "Alyssa! Are you there?" Once again, no reply.

John whipped out his cell phone. "Alyssa, come on, pick up! Please! We're getting worried, are you alright? Just pick up the phone, let us know you're okay..." He waited for a second, she didn't pick up.

John looked at Ryou. "I know she's gonna kill us for this, but we're gonna have to break down the door."

Ryou shot a glance back at him. "We?"

"Fine, whatever..." John slammed into the door a few times, eventually taking it off the hinges, and making it fall. The two ran inside.
 
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