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alyssa was still examining the unconcious bodies.what happened 2 them?she picked up johns arm.no reaction.o m g....she bked up.r-.....r they dead?she checked both pulses.no....there not dead....then what happened 2 them?she kneeled beside them both & hung her head,closed her eyes,& clasped her hands 2gether.

dear God,
please bring these 2 bk safe & sound.please let e.b. learn his lesson & have him leave us alone.please let there scars heal & bring them bk from uncociousness or whatever trance thier in.please help john become strong in defeting e.b. when he gets bk from his trance.please let e.b. become unevil & please help them be strong 2gether in beating naraku & destroying him 4 gd.please help me become strong in helping them out w/ beating naraku & help me become alot less of a whimp & deal w/ the pain anything falls upon me.please Lord,help them become better.i love them & dont want them 2 become hurt.in yur name i pray,
amen.

she opened her eyes & watched them both waiting till they came out of the trance.
 
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...how do I get out of here? John walked around, trying to find some way out, until he disappeared.
__________________________

John opened his eyes. He tried to push himself off of the ground. Alyssa heard him getting up.

"O M G are you all right?!" Alyssa ran up to him. John was fine, other than the pain from the wound he had received earlier. He dusted himself off a bit, then went over to E.B., who was lying on the ground, cloak still on.

"He's alive, he's just unconscious. I took his pulse."

"Hmmm... was I like that?" John rubbed his eyes. Alyssa nodded. "Sorry about that. Didn't want you to worry. What I'm wondering is... what the heck just happened?"

"Well, what did happen?" Alyssa asked. John explained to her. "That's weird. Some kind of alternate universe thingy?"

"I dunno. All I know is that E.B. is probably still there. Thing is, what should we do with him? I don't want to kill him, especially since he's unconscious, but we can't let him carry out his plans." John sat down, thinking.
 
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alyssa noded in agreement."true.""then what can we do?"asked john.

"we could save his soul tonight, please save his soul.

can you take this spike?
will it fill our hearts with thoughts of endless
Nnght time sky.
can you take this spike?
will it wash away this jet black now?

& as these days watch over time,& as these days watch over time.
& as these days watch over us tonight.
& as these days watch over time,& as these days watch over time.
& as these days watch over us tonight.

i'll never let them, i'll never let them.
i'll never let them hurt you not tonight.
i'll never let them, i can't forget them.
i'll never let them hurt you,i promise.

struck down, before our prime.
before, you got off the floor.
can you stake my heart?
can you stake my heart?

can you stake my heart?
can you stake my heart?
(& these thoughts of endless night bring us back into the light & this venom from my heart)

can you stake my heart?
can you stake my heart?
(& these thoughts of endless night bring us back into the light kill this venom from my heart)

can you stake me before the sun goes down?

(& as always, innocent like roller coasters.
fatality is like ghosts in snow and you have no idea what you're up against
because i've seen what they look like.
becoming perfect as if they were sterling silver chainsaws going cascading...)"

"what?"john asked.
"oh....nuthing.sumthing i learend a while ago."she walked quickley 2 e.b.& knelled down & put her hand on his forehead.

i wonder why hes still unconcious.why he didnt come bk like john.she examined his trench 4 a clue.anything that could tip them off of what happened.nuthing.she looked bk @ john who was examining his sword & fixing it 4 the next battle.she looked bk @ e.b.thats wierd,because johns fine.like normal.e.b.s not.i wonder why he didnt come bk like john.....i no i dont like him very much but hes gotta become concious.who nos what will happen if he doesnt.

she sat down still hovering over him.all of a sudden his eyes shoot open while she had her hand on his forehead 4 a moment.she screamed in fear & john looked over."u scared me!"alyssa said."get off me mortal!i have no time 4 u!& U no i dont like it when u touch me!"e.b. pushed her away & weakly got up.

"oh!i c how it is!"alyssa yelled getting up.

"dont alyssa."john said.

"all i did was worry & wait 4 u 2 wake up & be concious again & this is how u repay me?!by shoving me 2 the ground & yelling @ me?!I DONT THINK SO!"alyssa screamed.

"dont!"john said.
"shut up!"e.b. stated.

"i dont apreiate yur attitude!all i did was pray & worry & all that & wait 4 u along w/ john!but noooooooooooooo!that aint enough 4 u!is it?noppers!not 4 e.b.!hes the mightest 1 of them all!lets all worship him!no!i want U 2 appoligize,thank me & say yur sry!& then,...."she got caught off by a sword rushing 2ward her & hitting her directly in the leg makeing her fall & cringe in pain.

"i told u 2 shut up!oh.....& u look gd on the ground.STAY THERE!"e.b. yelled @ her.alyssa couldnt get the sword out of her les & her eyes had tears but she held them bk.

"1st...i will destroy yur boyfriend....then i will destroy u!& i mean completeley kill!"he laughed evily.
"he.....hes NOT my boyfriend!g-get that through yur t-thick skull!"
e.b. walked over 2 her & took out a pocket knife & stabed it in her arm making it go as deep as it would go.

then he made a gash from her eyebrow 2 the crease in her lip on her left side of her face.she screamed trying 2 bk up.
"dont worry.dont cry little alyssa.itll only hurt 4 no more than an hour!"he smiled evily,laughed & got up.

"i am sick of u demon!"john siad."im sick of u hurting me & hurting my friends!QUIT IT!IVE HAD ENOUGH OF U!"he yelled.he rushed @ him w/ his blade in hand accidently missed & slashed alyssas chest.
 
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"No! Alyssa!!!" John rushed over, dropping his sword. He immediately put his hand to the wound, closing it up. "Ohmigosh, I'm so sor-"

"John, BEHIND YOU!!!" Alyssa screamed.

John turned around. As he did, E.B. brought his blade up, and tore off a portion of John's shirt, making a huge slash across his arm. John gave himself a quick recovery, grabbed Alyssa, and the two darted out of the alleyway.

"ARE YOU CRAZY?! YOU COULD'VE KILLED ME!!!" Alyssa screamed as they ran.

"Fine, you may feel free to slap me in the face all you want when this is over. Just run!" As they ran, E.B. appeared in front. John leaped into the air, landing on E.B., knocking him over, and using him as a skateboard for a few seconds before jumping off and catching up with the incredibly fast Alyssa.

"Oh no you did not!" E.B. leaped up and warped out.
 
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e.b. grabed alyssa & pulled her 2wards himself."come any closer & shes gonna die."he took out a knife & held it 2wards her neck.john had no idea what 2 do but then alyssa got an idea."bk up john!"she screamed."ok?"he bked up."u 4got 1 thing e.b.!"she said."whats that?"replied e.b."u 4got 2 s.m.i.l.e.!"she commented."what the?!"she hit him in the stomach,hit him in the face,pounded his foot,& hit him right where it hurts most.he fell in pain."RUN!"alyssa yelled 2 john running up 2 him.both were running away now.
 
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"thanx.......where do we go now?"alyssa asked.
"i dont no yet."john commented bk.
alyssa triped & rolled her ankle.
"cra*!"she held her ankle."i-....it just needs a few mins."she cringed in pain huddling over her ankle in a ball.
 
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"im sry bout that.i dunno why that happened!"she was holding her ankle still."i play rough!"she quoted."its ok."john said 2 her.they got sumwhere & sat down."i think we lost him."john said.alyssa just nodded.

uh!i cant belive that happened!im ALWAYS slowing him down!i should just give up.....i dont no what 2 do.i cant keep him slowed down.im the 1 mostley always getting in trouble.i wonder if i sacrifice myself 4 him & my friends that he'll go away along w/ naraku......this is hard.i dont want him 2 get hurt anymore & i dont want him 2 worry about me anymore......

she looked around 4 a moment.....i must keep my soul like a secret in my throught.i dunno what 2 do.i cant keep slowing him down like this.its bad.thats it,i just need 2 deal w/ the pain & all of that stuff.i cant slow him...

"yur aufally quite."john said interupting her thoughts."oh.what?yeah.sry....just thinking.....just....thinking..."she looked @ john & then around.she got up & limped over 2 a ladder that was on the wall."i have an idea john.follow me."john followed her up the ladder on2 a roof top.

"he cant get us up here.we gotta think of a plan.what r we gonna do?we cant just keep running away from him 4ever."alyssa said siting down.
 
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"I know. But what can we do?"

The two sat there and thought for a bit.

John turned around. "You sure you alright? You seem a tad depressed."

"Yeah, don't worry about it."

"Alright then. ...well, at least we see a sunset." The sky had grown a golden color, as the sun began to go away. The two sat there on the low-slanted rooftop, staring at the sky.

"You know, it's kind of odd. How we always get into messes but everything always ends up somewhat fine and we get to enjoy our time." John layed back, head resting on his hands.

"Yeah, I guess so." Alyssa sat there.
 
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she looked around 4 a moment.she then looked @ john.she then sighed.....

should i leave him & let him do this by himself or not?

she looked @ the sunset & got a cold chill & jumped up."oh my....."she exlaimed.
"what?"john asked getting up.
"n-nuthing....just a simple cold chil."she looked around franticly.
"doesnt seem like nuthing."john replied.
alyssa saw e.b.i new it!hes here!hes sensed my blood!great!
"nuthing.just stay low....."she got up & went 2 the edge of the roof."ill be bk in a few."
she hung by the edge of the roof & jumped off.
"ok.gd luck...i guess."he replied.
 
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Something's wrong. Lay low? Doesn't sound like nothing. I'm following.

John went off of another edge. It suddenly hit him that he dropped his sword while running. Wonderful. Lord, can I have my sword back? The sword reappeared by his side. Thanks, won't happen again. Also, can you change it to a handgun for now?The sword disappeared and a handgun and holster appeared in it's place. You're so awesome, thanks so much. John thought with a smile.

He eavesdropped on Alyssa jumping off, hearing her land. She sounded okay, until...

"So, where are you going?"

It was E.B.

John rounded the corner.

*click* "Freeze. One move towards her and I fire at you like no tomorrow. This is a Wolfram P2K, I can empty a clip into you in seconds. BACK OFF!" John held the handgun without hesitation at E.B.'s face.

"Sheesh, always the pushy one." E.B. reached for his sword, John fired. The shot hit the handle of the sword, shattering it into pieces.

"Some sword. Anyways, back off. If it can do that much to steel imagine what it can do to you. You may be immortal, but that just makes the pain from this gun eternal."

"...fine. I will be back." E.B. walked off.

Alyssa sat down where she stood. John had the gun converted back to a sword and put it away. "Why didn't you tell me?"
 
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"i didnt want u 2 get hurt anymore.& besides,im the 1 always getting hurt,& wanted 2 prove myself more,so,i went 2 go find him.i new he was close cause i could see him....i could sense him also.i dont want my friends getting hurt in sumthing i caused & or started anymore.im the 1 hes after...& i cant stand 2 see my friends hurt anymore,or fight w/ sumthing i caused anymore.ive known him since i was 8....& the pain of knowing my friends r fighting & getting hurt because of this....stupid reason,is tearing me apart & killing me from the inside out...killing slowly & very painfully.i....i just couldnt take it anymore....i dunno what id do if i lost another friend...........its happened 2 may times already & i cant stand it anymore."she said sitting & staring @ the ground making marks w/ a stick in the dirt on the ground."i just cant take it...i wont take it..."she said.
 
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"...first off, I don't want you to worry about me. I got my own agenda, I'll figure something out. You're not a hindrance to me, got it? About proving yourself, you've already done that. Remember our old sparring matches? (referring to Pillow Fight) If anything, I was the one who lost to you. So, quit worrying about me, doubting yourself, and blaming yourself for things that aren't because of you. It's not about you. It's about him. He's a psychotic madman, like Naraku. Just because he chases you doesn't mean you're the cause of all this, got it?

"I don't want you to feel like your doing any harm to me. These are my friends, too. I'm in this battle, end of story. This isn't because of you. You're not hurting me at all because of this situation. Don't worry about it." John put out his hand, Alyssa grabbed it and got up. John gave her a biref hug, she cried a bit, then they went off their separate ways.

"Be sure to call me if you need me." John walked back to his apartment.
 
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she satrted 2 walk in tears away singing 2 herself.

"Hand in mine, into your icy blues
And then I'd say to you we could take to the highway
With this trunk of ammunition too
I'd end my days with you in a hail of bullets

I'm trying, I'm trying
To let you know just how much you mean to me
And after all the things we put each other through and

I would drive on to the end with you
A liquor store or two keeps the gas tank full
And I feel like there's nothing left to do
But prove myself to you and we'll keep it running

But this time, I mean it
I'll let you know just how much you mean to me
As snow falls on desert sky
Until the end of everything
I'm trying, I'm trying
To let you know how much you mean
As days fade, and nights grow
And we go cold"
she sniffled & sat down against a wall.

i dont care anymore.if he wants 2 hurt me..if he wants 2 kill me.ill let him.ill leave my self wide open.she took out her sowrd & droped it on the ground,got up & sat up on a roof top.she sang the part of the song again & then cried herself 2 sleep.
 
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a few hours later she woke up.still on the roof top of the building.she looked @ the sky.it was a cold morning & the sky was still dark.she got up & jumped down from the edge.she noticed she still had her sash where she held her sword & other wepons.she took it off & droped it 2 the ground.

e.b.please.....please come get me soon.i cant take it here anymore.i just wanna end it all.end it 4ever.

she started 2 walk around & finally came 2 a stop when she noticed a shodowy figure in front of her.it was e.b.
 
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