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john agreed.
"thats gd"nin said.
john went & picked alyssa bk up bringing her 2 her room & laying her down on her bed.

"why does he always pick on her?"ryou asked.
"because hes a stupid head."john said."she doesnt deserved 2 be picked on.shes had enough of it.scince she was 8 she said....& theres still nina 2.along w/ naraku & kaugra."john said.
"yikes."ryou said.

john looked @ the clock.it was 2:25 am on tuesday morning.
"u can go home..."john said 2 ryou."if u want 2 that is.its my day 2 watch her.u should go get sum sleep."he suggested.ryou nodded,gave alyssa a hug & walked out.
"bye guys.see ya 2maroow."he waved & walked out.

john waved bk & sat on the mini couch in the room.he ran his fingers through his hair & let out a breath.he then got up & covered alyssa up under the covers.

"sweet dreams."he said 2 the sleeping alyssa.he sat bk down on the mini couch.
 
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An hour later, John was sitting there, playing his GBA. Out of frustration at Fire Emblem, he shut it off and put it back in his pocket. His phone, which was on vibrate, went off. John stepped outside and took the call.

"Tirado speaking. Oh, hi Ninjitsu. I can't, it's my turn to watch Alyssa. Yeah. Okay, well good luck. See ya. Bye."

John yawned. Hmm... someone's causing some trouble downtown? Hope everything'll be alright. Really wish I could go... John fell alseep on the couch.
 
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Nin watched as Alyssa went back to sleep. Then, the hat on top of Link's head spoke. "We have to find the Triforce so we can infuse it's power into the Picori blade and save Princess Zelda!" yelled the hat, named Ezlo. "Okay, okay...." said Link, repositioning the hat on his head. Once everyone (including Zolo and Nin, who had conked out in the corner) he jumped out the window, and snuck out into the field behind the hospital.......

The moon was beautiful. The moonlight alone completely illuminated the field of dandelions. A figure with white long hair wearing a hood was walking through the field, and had a strange, metallic looking object on his right wrist. Link bumped into him. "Oh....s-sorry sir...." said Link. The figure growled, and moved past Link, heading towards the hospital. "How rude!" growled Link, as he walked off on his quest for the Triforce......

There was a loud bang. Nin opened his eyes. He racked his brain, trying to remember where he was. The door was busted open, and there was a white-haired figure standing in the room. He motioned towards Alyssa asleep, and three figures appeared in the doorway, nd grabbed Alyssa. The white-haired figure laughed, and said 'Come to the Domino Staet Building if you want your friend back. He threw a smoke bomb on the ground, and he was gone. Nin gasped, and woke everyone up. "Some white-haired idiot just kidnapped Alyssa!!!" he screamed in everyone's ear.
 
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"nngh... dude, it's 5 in the morning, what the heck..."

"John, Alyssa's gone!"

John leapt off the couch and ran out of the door. Ninjitsu sweatdropped. "That worked." The others followed him.

"Ninjitsu, where are they at?"

"He said Domino Pier."

"Every bad guy loves that pier, huh?"

"Apparently."

John noticed Link wasn't following. "Ninji, where's Link?"

"I dunno, probably had something he had to attend." They finally made it to the destination. John saw Alyssa, sitting a little ways down the path, on the ground. He ran to her, when a voice shouted out.

"Don't make a move, swordsman. You wouldn't want to lose her, would you?"

John turned around, noticing the guy in the cloak. "So, you're the new bozo who wants to kidnap Alyssa. How do you want your defeat, quick and easy or slow and painful?"

"You're quite bold for someone who's at a disadvantage here." The three figures that had showed up earlier teleported around the three warriors. "Are you all ready to die? Heh-heh-heh..."

John, Ninjitsu, and Zolo all stood, backs towards each other. John smiled. "Time to party."
 
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Nin drew his katana, and lept into the air, jumping downwards with his sword pointed towards the goon. The goon jumped back, dodging the sword strike. Zolo put one of his swords into his mouth, and held the two swords in his hand over his right shoulder. One of the goons ran towards him. "Tiger......" siad Zolo, through clenched teeth. the goon lept, holding his knife towards Zolo. ".....HUNT!!!!!" shouted Zolo, throwing his swords down in a slashing motion. The goon went flying through the air,a nd landed in the ocean.


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John drew his rapier, and made a stabbing motion towards the goon he was fighting. The goon sidestepped backward, and grabbed John by the shoulder. Throwing his weight, the goon tossed John backward over his shoulder. John skidded, and landed near Alyssa. She was breathing heavily, and looked like she had been roughed up a bit.....the light John saw in her eyes was no longer there, like, she was still alive, but something had been taken from her. John stood up, and charged towards the goon with gritted teeth. He spun, as he slashed at the goon. "Whirlwind Slash!!" shouted John.


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Nin had been pinned on the ground by the goon he was fighting. "Heh......Lord Dartz is going to enjoy stealing your souls....." siad the goon. Nin growled. "I've wasted too much time fighting you already!". Nin began seeping into the ground. "What the?!" said the goon. Nin appeared behind him. Nin's eyes glowed red. "I hope you enjoy the different dimension....." he said. The goon screamed. "No, no, NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" he said. His eyes rolled back into his head, and his lifeless body fell to the gorund. Nin felt dizzy. He grabbed his head. "Uh.....what happened?" he saw the goon's lifeless body before him, and saw that everyone else had taken down their goons as well. Nin walked over to John and Alyssa. "Alyssa? Can you hear me?" said John, shaking her shoulders gently. She looked away from him, as if staring off into space. Alyssa finally managed a grunt, and mumbled the words "My heart....." before she fell into John's arms, unconcious. "Alyssa?! Alyssa!!" shouted John.
 
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(Wow, you're good at this.)

"Alyssa, answer me! ALYSSA!!!" John slammed his fist into the ground, breaking the wook plank in front of him. "This can't be happening..."

Nin came over and put his hand on John's shoulder. "It's all right, we'll find Dartz. He can't be too hard to locate around here. She'll be fine, don't worry."

"...why does this always have to happen to her? WHY?!" John stormed off. "I'm outta here, I'm going to find Dartz. Zolo, take Alyssa and bring her back to her apartment."

"Sure. If you find Dartz, call me immediately." Zolo picked Alyssa up carefully and went off.

Ninjitsu turned to John. "Let's go." John nodded.
 
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Leaping up into the nearby rooftops, Nin called down to John. "I'll search for them up here, and if I find them, I'll come find you.....". Nin ran through the rooftops, spotting Dartz. Leaping down, he tackled Dartz. "Let Alyssa go!!" he said. "Okay.....alright.....I'll never do this again...." said dartz. Releasing Alyssa's soul, it flew back to her body. Dartz disappeared in a flash of light. "Well, that was easy......" said Nin. he ran back to where John was. "I stopped Dartz. he relased Alyssa's soul back to her body. He seemed pretty scared......" said Nin.


(((I have an idea! We could get all of the villains from different anime come and attack us, and then, the good guys from the anime shoiw up, and it turns into an all out battle!)))
 
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"Phew... good." John's cell phone rang. "Tirado. Yeah, Zolo, Ninji just beat the snot out of Dartz. Good, she's okay? Great. I'm heading over there now. Buh-bye."

John hung up, Ninjitsu leaped off of the rooftop he was on, and they went off.
 
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they got 2 alyssas apartment.they walked inside 2 where her bedroom was.john got a cold chill glancing @ the bathroom door.he looked bk over @ alyssa.

"hows she doing?"he asked.
"not really sure yet."zolo said.
"oh....ok."he said sitting down on the edge of the bed by alyssa.
"i hope shes ok."nin said.
"i cant stand them picking on her anymore.she didnt do anything 2 them!what do they want?!...."he was mad.he thought 4 a moment.
"i WILL find out & i WILL defeat them & make them apoligize 2 her!they will regreat what theyve done!"he said yelling.
 
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"But, whya re people after me?" asked Alyssa. "I dunno......" said Nin, "...but I feel a dark force at work here.....". Just then, there was a gold flash behind them. The light from the window had reflected off the Mileneum Ring around Bakura's neck. "Oh, it's just you, Ryou...." said Alyssa. Bakura grinned, and walked towards her. "I can tell you why people are after you....." said Yami Bakura. "Oh, it's you, Bakura...." said Alyssa, "What do you want?" she said. "What do I want? I want to see you happy!" he said. "You mean, you can really tell me why everyone's after me?" she asked. Bakura nodded, and grinned evily. "Don't trust him!!" siad John. "Wait! Maybe if we know why everyone's after her, we can stop it!" said Zolo, holding John back. "Maybe your right....." he said. Bakura's Mileneum Ribng flashed, and Alyssa disappeared inside his Ring. Bakura flew into the Ring as well, and the Ring clanked on the floor. "So, do we just wait here.....?" asked Nin.

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Inside Bakura's Mileneum Ring, Alyssa and Bakura floated above a baby covered in a blanket in a large church chapel. "Is that me?" asked Alyssa. Bakura nodded. Alyssa floated down to where she was floating just above her baby self. A figure ina black trench coat walked towards Alyssa's baby form. The man held a green jewel on a necklace in his hands. Looking around, he put the necklace around Alyssa baby's neck. Alyssa grabbed the necklace wrapped around her neck.....they were exactly the same! "Is....is this what their after?" she asked. Bakura nodded. Alyssa blinked, and they were back in her room, but, Bakura was gone. "Wait.....what does my neckl;ace have to do with people chasing me.....?" she asked to no one in particular.
 
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there was no answer.just the group stareing @ her.
"what he say?"john asked checking 2 see if she was alright.
"he said that my necklate is whats causeing this.i-i dunno why though.i saw my baby self & when i got the necklate.&......& then we came bk here.but that doesnt explain anything."she said weakley sitting down.she still hadnet fully recovered from the suicide incident.

"there after my necklate....but why?"she asked herself out loud.she took it off & examined it."sum1 wants 2 get me killed.sum1 gave me this on that day 4 a reason."she said.

she got a flash bk of that day.there was a note that they left.her mom read it & cried.a few laters @ the age of 7 her parents died in a car crash & she found the note left w/ the necklate.she remebered what she did w/ it.she remebered the day e.b. entered her life causing nuthing but torture & mayhem.she got out of the flashbk & ran in2 the living room & went through a drwer quickley.john followed.

"what?"he asked.
"i just rembered sumthing."she said.
she found the note in the envelope & took it out."ah ha!"she cried out sitting from weakness again.

she read the note over.quickley.she stared @ it.
"whats the date?"she asked quickley.
"why?"john asked.
"what is it?!"she determined.
"its sept 18,2005.why?"john said.
she took a quick breath.she handed him the note.
 
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John looked at it. "It makes sense. There's a power in the necklace they're after. I wonder why they would attack YOU, though... and why they didn't take the necklace before. Unless... they need you for something to do with it."

"Maybe..." Alyssa sat, in thought. Everyone else did, too.

"Either way, there's something in the necklace. Some embedded power that they want. I don't know why they want it, but they must. And they also need you." Ninjitsu and John looked at her.

"But... why...?" Alyssa closed her eyes, and thought about it for a bit.
 
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"i dont get it."alyssa said opening her eyes.
"who nos.it could be 4 any reason."nin said.
"OH MY!CRUD!I 4 GOT SUMTING!"alyssa shouted.
"what?!"john asked.

"i need 2 complete the schooling thing!member?!"she stammered a bit that time.
"oh yeah!i tottaly 4got about that."john said.
"what?"nin asked.
john told him what happened.
"what day is it?!"alyssa shouted again.
"monday."john replied.

"oh my goodness.....i missed a day of achooling!im gonna fail!i missed thursday!oh no...this aint gd!"she said panicing & paceing around the room.she then gasped
"& I STILL HAVE HOMEWORK!"she ran 2 the couch & grabed her homework & bookbag & sat in the middle of the floor trying 2 figure out the math questions.
"its ok!simmer down!"john said.

"well figure this out!besides we have more imporatnt issuses 2 deal w/ than yur schooling.if we defeat naraku then u dont have 2 hold up yur end of the deal."john said sitting next 2 her.every1 else completed the circle sitting.
 
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"So, basically, we beat the snot out of Naraku, and she gets out of the deal." Nin thought out loud.

John sighed. "You know, why should we even be listening to him? All it is is a stupid threat! In exchange for him holding back on Alyssa, she had to take high level classes."

"Definitely sounds like a threat to me..." Zolo said.

"Okay, so on our list of things to do, we beat the daylights out of Naraku." John looked around.

Link, who had come recently, spoke up. "Then what? We still have the problem with the necklace. There are others who will be coming after her."

Nin looked at Link. "Well, for one, we can't let them have the necklace. The note said it contained a great force. It needs to be kept safe. The thing is, it's Alyssa's heirloom. We can't just give it to somebody. She needs to hold on to it."

"So, I suppose that while she may be pretty strong, we should protect her in case something were to happen." Zolo took a sip of water from a bottle.

John looked at him. "Exactly. Another good idea would be to figure out the significance behind the necklace. We know a great force is contained in it, but what? Why are they going after it in the first place? We should probably try to research it, find out its mystery."

Alyssa sat up straight. "I wonder... well, this definitely has something to do with the incident that happened when I was little. I wonder who that man was..."

Ryou looked at her. "I suppose there's some ways I can find that out. I was able to retrieve the memory through my Millenium Ring, perhaps I can retrieve information on this man too."

"Hopefully by researching the necklace, we can either unlock the power if it is good, or destroy the power if it is bad," Link suggested.

"That's exactly what I was thinking, Link. Okay, so we need to get a list of things to do. John, could you get a pad and pen?" John returned quickly. Nin resumed, with John scribbling down notes. "First priority is to trash Naraku. End this little game he wants to play. Next, we research the necklace, find out what we can. In the meantime, if other power-hungry losers want to get at Alyssa and the necklace, us six take them out. Afterwards, once we determine whether the power is good or not, we deal with it. That sound good?" Everyone nodded. "Great. Now, time to sleep. It was a rough night, we need rest." Nin looked at a nearby clock; it was 9:30 AM. "Besides, I don't think any bad guys would want to fight at this time. We'll meet up later." With that said, the six of them split up and went home.
 
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alyssa was still sitting working on the problem.she had just figured out what 2 do & didnt really pay attention 2 anything any1 had said.she was almost finsihed w/ the math hom,ework & still had history & engilsh left 2 do.john stoped in the doorway.

"alyssa,please,stop doing homework & get sum sleep.dont worry about the 11th grade schooling & get focused on getting sleep.u need sleep the most out of all of us."he walked over 2 alyssa & took her books from her & left w/ them."ill see ya 2marrow ok?"john said.

"ok.bye."alyssa said.she got up & locked the door.she went 2 her room & walked in2 the bathroom.she picked up the razor & cleaned it off & put it in the cabinit again.she then cleaned up all the blood from b4.she walked bk in2 her room & grabed sum clean clothes.she went bk in2 the bathroom & took a shower.she got out & dried off real well,brushed her teeth,brushed her hair & went 2 her room.she threw her dirty clothes in her dirty clothes basket & went 2 bed.

28 mins later she fell asleep.7 mins after she fell asleep a person walked in & kidnaped her & left a note on her bed.
 
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the next day john came 2 her apartment.he knocked on the door.no answer.he tried again,still no answer.he noticed that the house had been broken in2 & the door was unlocked.he walked in & looked around.she wasnt there.he ran 2 the bathroom just in case.she wasnt there either.he then saw the note on the bed.he picked up the note & read it.

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dear john,
hi.u have probley noticed that alyssas missing.thats because she is.i have taken her & she will be forced 2 marry me @ 12:00 am 2marrow.u do not no who i am but i no who u r.i no everything about alyssas life.since she was a very little girl.if u wanna stop me,try as u will,but i will probley kill u.gd luck though.u will figure out who i am when we meet.see u later.

anonymous
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john stuffed the note quickley in his pocket,figured where alyssa was w/ his satlight & tracked her down.he ran 2 an old abondened building where she was @ & ran inside.
 
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"So, you've come to die, have you, X?"

"Not really. I came for Alyssa. Who are you?"

"Wouldn't you like to know?" The person stepped forward. He had a hooded cloak on, hiding his face and body from view. "My name isn't really important. What's important is that you and your friends are dead. You know very little about what's to come, young lad. We have the ultimate power, that necklace that Alyssa wore..."

"HEY, GIVE THAT BACK!!! DARN IT!!!" Alyssa tried to wriggle out of the chair she was in, but it was no use, she was stuck for the time being.

John looked at the shady person. "You do realize I'm going to take you out just like everyone else that lays a hand on my friends, right?"

"Interesting... hahaha... I like the sound of that, the fire coming from within you. The passion, the burning within you. The urge to fight, to kill. Heh."

"Oh, don't get me wrong, Slim Shady, I'm not out to kill. I came to beat your face in, rescue Alyssa, retrieve the necklace, and get the heck out of here."

"Quite greedy, can you really accomplish that all by yourself? I think not."

"Who said I was alone?" John whipped out his cell phone, but there was no service.

"Oh, I forgot to remind you, the walls are concrete. The chances of you getting reception is like a snowball in hell. Zero."

"Fine, looks like I'm going to have all the fun to myself then!" John whipped out his blade, and swung at the person, only for the person to fade out. He reappeared right by John's side, and grabbed him by the shoulder which he was holding the sword in. The pain surged through John, forcing him to his knees.

"How does it feel? The pain surging through the very fibers of your being?" The man squeezed even harder.

"I should be asking you that!" Alyssa's eyes glowed, as she used telekinesis to fling a pole at his head. The man reached inside the cloak, feeling his head. Some blood appeared, but not much.
 
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