Jurassic Park Add-on Story!!!

[Boy Wonder]

(I suppose I better get my dino a name just so it can be easier to write with 'em... He'll be nicknamed 'Velo' )

Velo lurked in the undergrowth, and as he watched the Humans he let off a few shrill crys. He ran after them. His group following him, and waiting for another chance to attack.

 

[CJF]

Hey there BW!

 

[Boy Wonder]

Hey!

 

[CJF]

How are you?

Kathy glanced to her right, and noticed more figures and eyes. They were still being followed. Kathy didn't want to die. And if she did, she didn't want to die by being eaten by a velocaraptor. She kept running, trying to to think about their followers.

 

[Boy Wonder]

Good...

This was a really cool idea, I really like being a raptor!

 

[Die Kaiserin]

Ethan ran in the back with a torch in one hand, and his shot gun in the other. Fending the remaining raptors off, he finally joined the rest of the group. Falling in line next to Kathy, he breathed out.
"I...I'm sorry for not helping back there...are you okay?" He didn't expect an answer, but he hoped that she was. He looked at her face, still partially muddy. She was still beautiful...that feeling returned...the feeling that he constantly tried to avoid. The only feeling that he felt...around...her/i]...No others produced this feeling...

 

[Kookaburra]

/me arches her eyebrows.

/me doesn't like too much romance.

/me runs away.

~~~~~

Consuelo was glad none of the others in the group had seen her pistol. They might have been curious, as it was well-kept but had evidence of being used quite a little. Also, she had the feeling she'd need it later. She'd seen several people shooting her hostile glances, and she was accostomed to deal with trouble, no matter how fragile she looked.

She limped along slowly, trying to keep in the little yelps that rose in her throat. She wouldn't be able to go on much longer. The boy, Fernand, had vanished, and she feared him dead.

At one point, she fell behind so far that the remaining velocrapters judged her safe to attack and they did, surrounding her and shrieking and baying her. Cornered, she lifted the pistol from the folds of her divided skirt, pointing it more with luck than skill -- straight at Velo -- who looked like he knew what it was, the slim and dull piece of metal that lay heavy on her palm, her finger poised on the trigger. With a disgruntled snort and switch of his tail, he vanished into the undergrowth.

Sighing, she shucked the gun and caught up her crutch. She dared not cry for help -- more dinos would zoom in on her. Instead, she hobbled unsteadily for a ways, now and then seeing a blur in the darkness, reminiscent of the wildcat eyes back home. Of course, dinos weren't the only animals living on Nublar's islands.

There was firelight ahead of her. Apparantly dinos were afraid of fire. She came to the fire and everyone stared at her, then to the pistol still clutched in her hand. From that moment she was no longer considered inferior or not able to survive. She'd just proved it -- to Celine, who was watching her interestedly, and Kathrina, who had been sceptical and thought her fragile, to Ethan, who'd thought it foolish to bring her along. Only Dr. Allen was satisfied fully -- he knew her history and would tell no one else.

 

[CJF]

Kathy was suprised to see Ethan standing next to her all of sudden.
"I-I'm fine. A little muddy, but hey. It's better than dead." There was a brief pause. Wanting to lighten up the moment, Kathy ventured a question. A mischevious grin on her face, she asked, "Ethan, why did you die my coffee green that day ten years ago? You know, it turrned my teeth green for a week? I had to have green teeth for my Birthday." she said, looking at Ethan. The look on his face, clearly showed he was a little suprised to hear her ask him that question.
"Don't get me wrong. I actually wasn't mad. A little embarassed, but um I actually kind of enjoyed it."
"You enjoyed having green teeth?"
"No, it was just...fun, to look in the mirror, smile and then gasp at my horribly ugly, perfectly straight green teeth. I guess I had never had a real prank played on me before, so it was a new and rather, odd exsperience. It was fun though."
"You're wierd." Ethan said, shaking his head with a laugh.
"I know. It's a privilage. No, but seriously. I was nine, turrning ten. I had green teeth. On my Birthday. No one really noticed which was the sad thing. It was as if I had green teeth all the time. Only Sara noticed. She was so mad. For these ten years I've tried to convince her that it wasn't that bad. She still resents you. I've been rambling this whole, time and haven't given you a chance to speak. I'm sorry. So anyways, why did you die my coffee green?"
"Because they were all out of blue." Ethan said, smiling. Kathy just smiled and rolled her eyes.

 

[Boy Wonder]

Velo and his group still stalked the humans, they almost had the lame one. He watched the other part of his group, surrounding the camp. They were going to wait till the humans started to sleep, and until then, they were going to try to trick the humans...

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Velo let off some cries, and a few of the raptors ran away from the camp, making it seem as if the whole group left, while the rest -- including Velo -- lay in wait, unmoving.

(sorry if my writing isn't what it used to be... I'm out of practice)

 

[Kookaburra]

Your writing is great! Sorry I can't post now, but why don't you give 'velo' more human characteristics? Since you've already started to personify him and give him a personality . . . .

 

[Boy Wonder]

Okay... But what do you mean by that? *scratches head*

 

[CJF]

Like, what he thinks and stuff maybe. I'm not sure if that's what she meant, but that's just my thoughts.

For a while the group walked in silence. Kathy kept thinking about home. A certain memory popped up in her head. Like a movie, it played in her mind.
Kathy ran from the car, and into the hospital, her dad not far behind her. Allen took her hand, and led her into a small room, with a bed in the middle. There, her mother layed. Kathy took her mothers hand. There they stayed for three whole days. When Kathy and her dad got home that day, the phone rang. Kathy could hear her dad hang up the phone. He walked into her room.
"Kathy," he said sitting on the end of the bed. Kathy, with her kegs crossed and tuched under her chin, looked at her dad with eager eyes. Allen continued. "It's just you and me." Kathy, in her age of thirteen, crawled to the end of the bed, and cried on her dads shoulder. Now, six years later, Kathy was with her dad on the Island of Isla Nublar, Jurassic Park, being surrounded by Veloceraptors. Kathy blinked, and realized she was crying. Wiping the tears from her eyes, she focussed on what was happening around her.

 

[EspressoDuck]

Celine wandered through the camp, feeling as if something was watching her, like some horrible eyes were boring right through to her soul. She took a deep breath, looking around. It must be my imagination... she thought, trying to keep calm. Suddenly, she heard something crash through the trees behind her. Two claw like hands gripped her sholders, and without thinking, she screamed bloody murder. She whiriled around, and gasped in releif and delight to be looking not into the face of a raptor, but rather the face of an unusually grey-blue edmontosaurus. A look of joy was in the creature's dark blue eyes. They seemd to sparkle with excitement. Celine shrieked with joy. "DUCKIE! Oh, my darling little angel baby dinosaur! Ohh....Cellie missed you! You got sooo big! You's a big dinosaur now, isn't you, you silly, pweshus baby!" Celine danced around with the large dinosaur, and Duckie seemed to be enjoying it. Celine ran to everyone in the camp, introducing Duckie and explaining that she was a friend from the last time Celine had visited the island. Then, she had been just a little baby. They had grown close, and Celine had cried when they had to part. Now, she was positively overjoyed to be back with her sweet dinosaur freind. There was a lot of kissing and happiness between Duckie and Celine for the next hour.

 

[EspressoDuck]

BW.. I think she means eally show it's personality, show what it thinks as it does these HORRIBLE things, what it thinks of everyone else, why it does what it does, etc.

 

[Boy Wonder]

Okay... I'll give a quick shot at it...

Velo watched Duckie, and had one thing on his mind Food...

How was that? Got to go to bed now!

 

[CJF]

The group stopped for the night. Five guards were told to keep watch. Dr. Grant was one, a tough kid named John, and his brother Quincy. Two other guy's were also assigned night duty. Kathy couldn't sleep. But not many people did. Kathy was scared. Dead scared. Somehow, she managed to drift off into a dreamless, but deep sleep.

Dr. Grant looked around camp, and gasped. A few Raptors had made their way into camp! Dr. Grant looked in front of him, and saw more shadows moving in. They were surrounded again! Dr. Grant took one more good look around. He counted three in the camp. Oh no, Kathy wake up! Allen thought looking at Kathy, who was indeed, asleep.

Kathy opened her eyes slowly. Her vision was slightly blurry. It looked is if something was in front of her face. She rubbed her eyes, and looked again and gasped. There, right in front of her was a Velocoraptor. Kathy was paralyzed with fear. It moved in closer, and slowly inched it's way closer to her. Kathy tried to move, but couldn't. Cover your face Kathy! C'mon cover your face! No, reach for your pistol! Where's your pistol! Fine, cover your face! No, you need the pistol! Kathy looked next to her, and realized her pistols where next to her bag. Where was her bag....? Kathy spotted the bag, next to her dad on the other side of camp.
Nice move Kathy! Real nice move! The Raptor didn't seem to notice her fear. It sniffed her hair, and backed up a little. Then, the twinkle in it's eyes said, Time for a snack. Kathy was just able to cover her face, before the Raptor attacked.

Dr. Grant stared in horror as the Raptor lunged. Kathy had covered her hands, and had currled into a ball, trying to protect herslef. Just as Allen was about to run and help her, Raptors attacked from his side. He shot any Raptor he could see clearly. They had planned this attack. And well. Dr. Grant tried to get a shot at the Raptor who was attacking Kathy, but there were too many.

Kathy had to protect her head and her neck. She tried. She was able to cover her neck and head well for a while, but soon the Raptor would throw her around a bit, and she would uncoil out of her safety ball. Kathy looked around through her arms, for anything that could be used for a weapon. Nothing. This Raptor is playing with me! I should be dead by now. He could easily rip both my arms off, and he hasn't. The Raptor started to get a little more agressive. Kathy felt blood dripping down her arms, legs and back. Her scratched stung, but she was willing to go through them, she just didn't want to die. "Oh dear God, please don't let me die! Not this way!" She whispered.

 

[EspressoDuck]

Celine was snuggled next to Duckie, warm and comfortable. Duckie had a look of perplexed contentment on her face as she slept. But suddenly, she bolted upright, her eyes glazed with fear. Celine sat up. "Duckie, what's wrong?" But she saw what was wrong. Veloceraptors were every where, throughout the camp. And one was looking very hungrily at Duckie, and it looked like it was about to make a move. The raptor's eyes had a sick intelligence about them. There were wheels turning inside it's head, but there was no compassion. Just raw hate. Celine screamed, terrified the raptor might kill Duckie. And then, as she grabbed her pistol, her eyes moved to Kathy. She was being brutally attacked, almost played with, by a large raptor, the largest of them all. And Celine was faced with a horrible decision. Save the sweet dinosaur she had known since it was born, and had grown very close to, or save a human being she hardly knew. Either way, she had to decide. She was running out of time. A few raptors were becoming interested in her as well.

 

[CJF]

Dr. Grant tried to move closer to Kathy, but failed misserably. He kept glancing over at his daughter, who was still trying to fight off the Raptor that had made the decision she was to be is chew toy. Dr. Grant tried to help her, but again, the Velocoraptors made it so that he was surrounded.

Kathy reached for the nearest rock she could. She threw it at the Velocoraptors head, hitting it. The Raptor became quite angered. It backed away, giving Kathy a chance to mae a run for it, but then attacked her again. Suddenly, the Raptor let out a screatch and staggered off. Kathy stood, and wipped the sweat from her forhead. She looked around, and saw that Ethan had been able to shoot the Raptor off. She smiled through her tears and mouthed, "Thank you." He smiled and nodded. Kathy somehow made her way to her bag, and got her pistols, and started shooting att the Raptors. Soon, ebough had been killed that they were scared off.

 

[Kookaburra]

Consuelo lay there, her leg swollen to twice its normal size, her pistol underneath her palm and ready to be fired. Someone had set her leg -- who, she did not know, everything was a daze -- and it ached terribly. She felt the cool sting of the night breeze on her forehead and knew it would not be long before dawn brought it's sunlight but no relief.

~~~~~

K-zee and Zabee both circled the fire, wary yet starving. Lately the lesser Archaeopteryx had been avoiding them, and they stooped not yet to attack velocrapters, one of the easier prey. They, too were starting to take evasive maneuvres.

K-zee tilted her great head and tested the wind. She knew the might of the humans -- she was older and had been raised by one, ridden by one. Rash Zabee might be, but he was not stupid. Wherever humans were, other animals would be. And she could almost taste velocrapter.

Blood hung heavy on the wind, and K-zee's eyes glinted in the firelight. She advanced into sight, looked over the entire camp, and then her inventory. The dead velocrapters had not been carried off as of yet, and she hooked one and dragged it back into the bushes. It had been this way always and always would be.

The humans knew her instantly as a greater Archaeopteryx and subsequently avoided her. It was just as well.

 

[EspressoDuck]

*sighs*

Celine was relieved that Ethan had saved Kathy, although she was quite sickened at the very sight of them , it was too babyish and, for lack of a better word, syrupy. But she had better things to think about at the moment. She swiftly grabbed a stick and lit it with the campfire, and then chased away the raptor that was eyeing Duckie. She had yet to kill one, she was content just scaring them off. She scared the few off that were surrounding her, and then ran to help the others.