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"I want you to live"

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The piece below is part of some dialogue from a conversation between two people in a story I have. It's totally open to interpretation, and while I do have a set meaning in the context of the story itself--I've kept it somewhat vague on purpose to keep people guessing as to the message of this short excerpt.

The person speaking, by the way, is a very horrible person.
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Can you honestly say that you could truly care about a total stranger?

If you could peel back my skin, take a glimpse into the darkest corners of my mind, take a sip from the cup of my knowledge and ideals...could you still then say that you wish to save me?

Would I not become burdensome to your way of living? A 'danger' looming ever-present in the background of your happily ever after?

Or would you cast me out into the void? Would I cease to exist as a being worthy of all the same things you are the moment you discover that I am not like you, or would you embrace me with open arms wearing your heart on your sleeve like you always said you would?

...Of course, you wouldn't.

You're not stupid. You aren't as naive as when you were a child. You realize that in this world, it is eat or be eaten; there will always exist an 'us', and to 'us' there will come a 'them'. Just like good and evil cannot exist without one another, for every noble cause there must exist opposition; an opposition that needs to be snuffed out.

Yet, the illusion lies within the nature and subjectivity of things such as nobility and piety.

Are you really right to think the way you do, or have you been wrong all along?

To answer that question is to make a commitment, and that commitment will be fulfilled in blood by the trembling hands of those that judge.

Instead of saving me, you should have saved yourself. There is no mercy for the damned.

Looking at it that way...we're not all that different, are we?
 

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I am absolutely convinced that there is mercy and forgiveness for all who are willing to accept it. The unforgivable sin is UNFORGIVENESS. I believe that God would forgive even Satan if he repented.

in love
Jay
 
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Dang, that's pretty cool. I can believe you when you say the character speaking this excerpt is a horrible person.

There seems to be a lot of layers as to what this character is saying to the other, like a multi-layered jab at everything the other character believes in. It seems like they're trying to shake the other character's resolve, make them question their convictions.

Without the context, there's a lot of ways the character can be interpreted. The character could be saying this bitterly, or maybe they've come to terms with their beliefs. Maybe they're a fanatic on this worldview, or maybe they stopped caring a long time ago. Maybe they're saying this to hurt the other character, or maybe they're saying this to get the other character to see their way, or maybe both. It's pretty interesting overall.
 
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Dang, that's pretty cool. I can believe you when you say the character speaking this excerpt is a horrible person.

There seems to be a lot of layers as to what this character is saying to the other, like a multi-layered jab at everything the other character believes in. It seems like they're trying to shake the other character's resolve, make them question their convictions.

Without the context, there's a lot of ways the character can be interpreted. The character could be saying this bitterly, or maybe they've come to terms with their beliefs. Maybe they're a fanatic on this worldview, or maybe they stopped caring a long time ago. Maybe they're saying this to hurt the other character, or maybe they're saying this to get the other character to see their way, or maybe both. It's pretty interesting overall.

Sorry--I actually meant to reply to this earlier, but got caught up debating in the conspiracy section of the forums and didn't remember until I saw your screenname pop up in the recent hitler thread LOL.

You actually hit the nail on the head, just about. I'd explain in more detail the character, but I want to leave it shrouded in mystery in case someone finds this thread someday. I don't want any of my explanations to spoil the fun of thinking up a meaning for the dialogue :3
 
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Sorry--I actually meant to reply to this earlier, but got caught up debating in the conspiracy section of the forums and didn't remember until I saw your screenname pop up in the recent hitler thread LOL.

You actually hit the nail on the head, just about. I'd explain in more detail the character, but I want to leave it shrouded in mystery in case someone finds this thread someday. I don't want any of my explanations to spoil the fun of thinking up a meaning for the dialogue :3

Oh cool! Glad to see my noggin's still working. :p
I agree with keeping it a mystery for now. It'd be fun to see what other people come up with. ^^
 
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Oh cool! Glad to see my noggin's still working. :p
I agree with keeping it a mystery for now. It'd be fun to see what other people come up with. ^^

Yeah! To add to that, the story the dialogue is from is actually a game I'm working on--so if you're interested in this kind of thing, you might like the finished product. Lots of interactions to analyze.
 
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Yeah! To add to that, the story the dialogue is from is actually a game I'm working on--so if you're interested in this kind of thing, you might like the finished product. Lots of interactions to analyze.

Ooo, that does sounds interesting. What kind of game is it?
 
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Ooo, that does sounds interesting. What kind of game is it?

It has the appearance of a pixel RPG, but the functionality/gameplay is a little different. It is very character-interaction heavy, with many, many characters. The kind of relationship you build with each character will determine how things play out.
 
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It has the appearance of a pixel RPG, but the functionality/gameplay is a little different. It is very character-interaction heavy, with many, many characters. The kind of relationship you build with each character will determine how things play out.

Neat! I think I'd be interested in playing it then. :ok:
 
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