write something nonsensical, surreal, silly. (3)

[FredVB]

The creatures that were led came to a great and strange structure, it was round and shiny, and resembled the sky, there was an open gate, and they were led to it. "Come within, dear creatures, this way to a new home for you," Yahweh spoke to them. There was hesitation. "I have never seen anything before for me to enter," said father giant raptor.

 

[fleamailman]

"...interesting, I'm following the storyline there..." went the goblin who was also somewhat perplexed at the choice between hillery or trump even if that choice was not his to make though, sighing "...where is there a promise that they ever keep today, moreover, if you and I know that they can't raise interest rates without sending the economy into tailspin debtwise then why do they even pretend that they can still raise the interest rates as if 15trillion dollars debt didn't exist..."

 

[FredVB]

"You are yet young, you have forever ahead of you, and you will yet do many things you have not done before," Yahweh said for all of the creatures there. "You have no reason to doubt what I provide for you, so go on in, for coming to where I would bring you."

So they went in, according to the pairs of creatures that they were, two by two of the types of creatures. There were fifty pairs, and so a hundred of these creatures that had communication among each other. Within this structure there was a great bath of water in the midst, with the floor of the structure being a concavity, and yet it was large enough to give all of them plenty of room among each other.

"You all had a time of communication with the man and the woman in the garden," Yahweh told them, "but with their rebellion their mind is terribly corrupted, I cannot have you being in such relationship with them anymore. You will miss them a bit for awhile, they will surely miss the communication that there was among you, and they will speak of it among the children that they will have. But the children among them will not remember about it over a long time, and their destructiveness among other creatures will begin soon enough. But I will use such tendency among them to show a way of reconciliation I prepare that is provided as an opportunity for them."

There was movement of creatures in the water there. Yahweh explained there were yet twenty other creatures he was bringing along that had not been in the garden.

 

[fleamailman]

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"...who knows the future..." replied the goblin promising the mouse to post on anyway, and as if he could stop posting even, before going off on his own tangent now, continuing "...where war in europe seemed all but unthinkable a few years back but where today the hawks would have you think that a nuclear war is actually winnable, survivable for those who strike first, but russia will not be hoodwinked by the US now, for if it's war they won't bother with NATO who merely acts as a puppet for US interests here, instead they go after US from whence those orders come from, I mean a proxy war is all very good for business as long as it's far away, but if if it's on russia's boarders then for them it's no longer proxy anymore where the hawks will learn that the US this time around is not only going to see these events unfold from the comfort of their living rooms...", somehow the goblin was just hoping that sense would prevail but smart people weren't running the show it seemed

 

[FredVB]

The head of a sea creature emerged, and the creature greeted the new arrivals now within this great structure. Yahweh explained to them, as these hundred stood, or in some cases crouched, in amazement, that as there were those of his creatures which had communication with each other that had been dwelling within the garden, there were more of his creatures without, including the dolphins and whales and other creatures that lived in great bodies of water. This one that greeted them was the mother overdolphin. All those he had brought from the waters were brought for this same reason of removal from where there would be invasive growth of humanity with the corrupted thinking in the rebellion, that these could not be left to be in communion with them.

It was then that the mother neomastodon looked toward the clear wall that made the surrounding surface of this great structure and met its floor, and announced in awe and great concern, "Oh my! The world that was outside, with everything in it, has just fallen away, into the darkness that there is at night with all those bright little lights!"

Yahweh told them, the world was still as it was, and they within this structure, though they felt nothing of this motion, were now being brought to their new homes.

 

[fleamailman]

repost from elsewhere, goblin doing a welcome explaining the trick of persona to a writertype

"...yay, nice to have someone to chat to here..." went the goblin hoping to be that inspired next generation then, before adding "...more folks read posts across forumland than most anything else these day, yet most writers haven't a clue how to get themselves remembered by those readers there, so they write with neither narration nor dialogue, hoping that the reader will just remember the username instead, they won't though, ah but what if the post was written in such a way that one wished to actually forget that one had read it, along with the goblin who had written it too...", so with that the goblin added a music stream to prove his point here, adding "...your readers are already reading you, yes your book starts from the post in fact..."

 

[FredVB]

It is an interesting approach, yet I don't trust that I have skill for having dialog with any one person through writing samples of fiction that I share. I will happily engage anyone who would like communication on something to any extent, but for me it would be separate from the material that comes with my creativity, with such engagement I am likely to share things from scripture. I welcome what communication is truly sought, and I can surely have it in a private message through the forums, with this new format, though it was difficult previously for me to keep it from being full such that a new message could be blocked. Communication by email didn't have such a problem, and I find it preferable and would use more. With any interest expressed I could share a Facebook page I have where further samples of my creativity are shared, and I would answer any question. I also will gladly share accounts with inclusion of a goblin who would fit in with a coming scenario.

 

[fleamailman]

repost from elsewhere

I write a LOT of poetry. I mean, the amount I have posted is only about a tenth of the amount I try to write total. I love to write poetry because it's, in my opinion, the second most feeling form of art. It's beautiful because there's absolutely no structure to it unless THE WRITER chooses to have it. It's free. Poetry is beautiful because it's expression of the soul. Every word counts in it, but it can contain as many words as you want. Such beautiful figurative language. Poetry is beautiful because it to a soul is like jewelry to a dress. The dress is beautiful already, but the jewelry makes it pop and highlights its beauty. Is that what you mean?

"...meaning you're one of those pauperpoets in other words, yes certain humans are susceptible to that affliction or I am told, very pleased to meet you now..." replied the goblin feasting upon xxxxx's explanation though, her first meaty post of many he hoped then, then adding "...no, this being a writer's forum and all that, I just thought you were another writertype here, whereas me I'm just your average everyday sort of goblin I suppose, btw have you tried xxxxxxx poetry forum, the poetry's pretty good...", in fact, the goblin by now had been banned there for his antics, explaining "...no, I think they thought me a troll now, but I mean do I look like a troll, would any troll be this engaging and supportive towards you here, no I'm a livewriter like the others are in my circle are...", at which point the goblin wondered if it would be appropriate to post one of his poems below, then suggesting instead "...naah, it's been years since I wrote poetry then, takes far too much time too, where I would restart if I didn't have a backlog of forums expecting posts from me instead, but tell you what though, if you post your poems below, I'll post my prose going post for post with you...", at which point the goblin then tried to visualise a typical pauperpoet again through that jewellery analogy there to better relate to them in future, saying "...yes, this is going to be difficult I imagine..."

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[fleamailman]

It is an interesting approach, yet I don't trust that I have skill for having dialog with any one person through writing samples of fiction that I share. I will happily engage anyone who would like communication on something to any extent, but for me it would be separate from the material that comes with my creativity, with such engagement I am likely to share things from scripture. I welcome what communication is truly sought, and I can surely have it in a private message through the forums, with this new format, though it was difficult previously for me to keep it from being full such that a new message could be blocked. Communication by email didn't have such a problem, and I find it preferable and would use more. With any interest expressed I could share a Facebook page I have where further samples of my creativity are shared, and I would answer any question. I also will gladly share accounts with inclusion of a goblin who would fit in with a coming scenario.

"...naah, just write how you like to then..." suggested the goblin in a friendly enough manner, aware too that life was a little too short to compromise it away for the sake of some potential readership before adding "...yet those readers surround you as we speak, yes perhaps more readers reading posts today than most anything else bar facebook, where all you have to do my dear human is just pull them towards your pen directly now, but how to is up to the individual here I guess...", in fact, the goblin was an old hand at livewriting yet he had no facebook account and remained anonymous throughout, smiling "...put yourself in those readers shoes then, wouldn't you like to join the author in his world here, where forum/venue thread/state and persona/act is but one aspect of livewriting now, where other aspects abound...", at which point the goblin looked down at his hands and then back up to FredVB smiling "...well now, as a writer you want a readership I imagine, whereas me I want a replyship here instead, why, because most livewriters would care to remain anonymous upon forumland...", thus the sustenance is in the reply where being read was merely a means to that end there

 

[fleamailman]

repost from elsewhere

"...ah now, if someone thought your works to be bad would you stop merely because of their opinion there..." smiled the goblin whose posts went unseen on this forum, but what of it though, the whole point was not how something was received but how it was conceived, smiling "...I'll say it once, the reader knows what he wants but doesn't yet know that he no longer wants it till you mistakenly give it to him as asked, thus the writer has to be ever one step ahead of the reader by giving him something he didn't know he actually wanted till he reads it from you...", and with that the goblin had his post done, and now all that remained was to hew into something better still leaving the reader behind

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[fleamailman]

repost from elsewhere, another welcome then

"...I like your intro human..." went the goblin ever out to welcome people here, before continuing "...basically I can only see three paths open to writers today, the first being audio books since most folk no longer want to read at length, the second being books in the traditional form though for the reason I've just given they are suffering diminishing returns, and lastly short interactive content be that facebook forumland or other some other venue now, though that's hardly the best platform for book style content...", so the question to the goblin at least was how to blend all three paths together to maximize the potential readership, saying "...me, I'm only interested in the last path of the three I've mentioned because that is the one that is expanding still...", whereupon the goblin just stamped hard upon the red welcoming carpet turning it momentarily green, which he felt to be a far more welcoming colour unless one likes red instead

 

[Trailltrader]

repost from elsewhere, goblin doing a welcome explaining the trick of persona to a writertype

"...yay, nice to have someone to chat to here..." went the goblin hoping to be that inspired next generation then, before adding "...more folks read posts across forumland than most anything else these day, yet most writers haven't a clue how to get themselves remembered by those readers there, so they write with neither narration nor dialogue, hoping that the reader will just remember the username instead, they won't though, ah but what if the post was written in such a way that one wished to actually forget that one had read it, along with the goblin who had written it too...", so with that the goblin added a music stream to prove his point here, adding "...your readers are already reading you, yes your book starts from the post in fact..."

 

[Trailltrader]

I'm thinking the only way the young lady's voice could be made better would be to use an autotune keyboard,,,,and hit her repeatedly with it until we can't hear her.

I don't believe in senseless violence but I'll make an exception in this case,,,,!

 

[fleamailman]

"...yes old soldier, that song is an acquired taste but I'm here to give hope to humanity if anything..." ventured the goblin, adding "...speaking of which how goes it with that choice between hillary and trump there...", somehow neither contender seemed anything on par with their russian or chinese counterparts, sighing "...it reminds me of france and the disconnect between the ruler and the ruled..."

 

[brinny]

repost from elsewhere, another welcome then

"...I like your intro human..." went the goblin ever out to welcome people here, before continuing "...basically I can only see three paths open to writers today, the first being audio books since most folk no longer want to read at length, the second being books in the traditional form though for the reason I've just given they are suffering diminishing returns, and lastly short interactive content be that facebook forumland or other some other venue now, though that's hardly the best platform for book style content...", so the question to the goblin at least was how to blend all three paths together to maximize the potential readership, saying "...me, I'm only interested in the last path of the three I've mentioned because that is the one that is expanding still...", whereupon the goblin just stamped hard upon the red welcoming carpet turning it momentarily green, which he felt to be a far more welcoming colour unless one likes red instead

LOL!

 

[brinny]

I'm thinking the only way the young lady's voice could be made better would be to use an autotune keyboard,,,,and hit her repeatedly with it until we can't hear her.

I don't believe in senseless violence but I'll make an exception in this case,,,,!

actually it was the guy singing to and about her hahaaaa

I've never heard anything quite like it

 

[Trailltrader]

**SMH** I need to unplug from the electronic world, tear off my clothes and do a naked "Mick Dodge". The more "plugged in" I am the flat out meaner I'm getting. That usually results in jail time- again.

 

[brinny]

LOL! Wut?

 

[Goodbook]

Robots are now writing novels. Yes they are very clever at it. Soon all us writers will be out of work once the robots have taken over.

 

[Trailltrader]

This is true. I was watching on Youtube how they've come up with the way to transfer human consciousness into a robotic body- and be 100% electronic.

The concept is simple: a robotic surgeon takes out part of your brain, and using it as a template transfer's the electrical signals with new transistors into a new body- and you get transferd along with it. This is scary; nobody has any idea of what subroutines would be programmed into it without your knowledge,,,,then we'd be all robots without free will.

While I'm sure Satan would enjoy that, I'm pretty sure that Jesus would get VERY upset and decide that's a good time to come back