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Seven seals: The Reforging of the Seals

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. At that moment Erulan was watching them using a seeking spell he watch his enemies every move. Yes well fools soon I shall have the seals all I need to do is wait and maybe send in some interference he turned the spell towards the underground goblin city of Girgor one of his many allies. The image changed to a very large goblin King Furgar the blood hunter I need your help old friend Erulan said through the spell portal. What may I help you with King Erulan? There is a small group of troublemakers near your city Furgar and they carry some special trinkets that are very important to me would you please take them from them? Of course my troops will hunt down these troublemakers and get you their items. Thank you Furgar I am in your dept may the Dark Lord smile upon your troops.
 
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sounds nasty :)
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"This way," Patyrn said, opening her eyes. Lorgain nodded and went down the opening on the left hand side, the rest of the group followed.
"Does it seems a bit too quiet to you?" Vialla said apprehensively.
"You're right, unless we've stumbled into a tomb, it can't be this quiet," Taren said in agreement.
The tunnel curved downwards and they could feel the surface of wet surfact of the rock.
"Wet?" Clise said.

"There must be underground river here somewhere..." Aridol called up from ahead, "So it's a bit humid."
Freezia suddenly stopped in her track, and so did Lorgain. The group stopped as they waited, and all went quiet.
Several voices echoed from behind them, and several more from in front of them. Taren tightened his hand on his quaterstaff, "Goblins," he muttered under his breath.

"Stay close," Lorgain whispered, and exchanging a glance with Aridol, he ran forward with the others close behind him. The group of goblins were taken completely by surprise as Lorgain and Aridol, the two at the head of the group fell among the goblins with swords in hand.
 
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Although it was dark, Aridol could make out the heads of the goblins, because they smell thickly of wastes. He cut each head in a flowing pose, never letting them raise their weapons.

It was not a very long fight, since the supposedly ambushing party was quite small. Aridol turned and threw a knife at a fleeing gobline, ensuring that no word would reach the other groups.

"So, they have something installed for us hey?" Aridol said, wiping his bloody black blade on the goblin's shirt.
"This won't be easy," Taren said.

Suddenly, Freeiza leaped foward, pushed Aridol and Lorgan onto the ground and a foggy shield erected around them just as a huge fireball burst from the front.
"Oh yeh! Goblin magicians!" Clise shouted out.
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ummmm........
 
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Halt Intruders Goblin solder yelled as a fresh regiment of goblins reached the battle area. Surrender or die we have no quarrels with you but our king want's your talismans. Be warned you are greatly out numbered so chose your answer wisely. Never these seals belong to us the only way you'll get these seals is from our dead bodies Lorgan said as he shot three arrows into some goblin eyes. As you wish it human.
 
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Lorgain answered the goblin's question after that particular goblin stopped the throwing of fireballs. He apparently didn't like the answer he got as at once, arrows began raining on them. Freezia erected a shield immediately while Patryn erected another shield against magic as Clise threw herself forward.

A wind the force of hurricane went straight towards the goblins, blowing them over and lifting them off their feet. Arrows were quickly defected and the fire extinguished. "Go!" Vialla shouted and the rest ran right behind Clise, past the group of dazed and confused goblin soldiers.
 
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sorry for not posting guys, Kookaburra is unable to access CF through her computer, and i don't have any good ideas on how to continue the story...

keep posting if you had any ideas.. otherwise we may have to officially declare this story dead.... aye, i can't think of a good way to end this... we're either gonna end it really fast and crappy... or we won't end it at all.
 
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Okay, so who's going to take the gem seal?

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Freezia fired from her bow as she ran, slaying a goblin that stood between the group and the entrance. Her silver hair was loose from the braid, and wet. Wisps clung to her head while the rest flowed behind with every movement. Her eyes wide and frightened, she fled down one of the many tunnels, not realizing that she'd left the others behind. Turning at bay at last when she could advance no farther, she faced a full legion of orcs, her bow ready. Her pale eyes roved over the group, then she released the arrows on her string. Light poured from her being and overwhelmed a great deal of orcs, lighting spotfires wherever the lasers touched combustible materials. The orcs advanced slowly, unstoppable. Then, by sheer numbers, they piled onto her and eventually, the one prevailing light was extinguished.

The slight breeze caught a silver tendril as it brushed the crimsoned skin, and after many minutes, the muscles in the girl's back tensed, then relaxed. Much later, Freezia stirred and opened her eyes, seeing only gravel and blood in the scanty light afforded by the dying torches. My blood.

She blacked out, only to waken in utter darkness. Holding her had in front of her face, she was unable to see even it. She sat up quickly, and in the darkness, her face paled as agonizing fingers of pain sought to pull her down into that well of never-ending darkness. She tried to call, but her voice had deserted her. With trembling fingers, she found wounds on her temple still bleeding, and on her right side. Gritting her teeth, she scooped up some mud from the ground and slapped it on the wound, tearing off a strip of her cloak and tying the hasty compress to her side. She managed to use the nearby rock wall to pull her to her feet, and she made her way slowly back the way she'd come, in total dark.
 
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well, not my characters... they each got a seal already. How about Lorgain or Aridol?
is the gem seal the last seal?
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After the wind died down though, they found themselves facing more goblins behind and in front of them and very soon, they were separated, each fighting their own battles. Darkness encircled them when they lost their torches and the strange language of war cries echoed through the crowded cave, drumming their ears.

Clise lashed out with her long knife, it was made of very good material and the tip of it was very sharp. She only needed to wave it around her in a blur and the goblins had to fall back immediately, the knife cutting off arms, fingers and wounding their bodies. "Aridol! Freezia!" she shouted through the din, but all she heard was more shouts and yells around her, for that she was sure they didn't come from her companions. Sweat slid down her brow, and she felt her hands going sweaty.

Suddenly, a bright light of red and orange lit up the cavern, Clise had a glimpse of several goblins with twisted faces right in front of her before the light vanished quickly. Stepping back rapidly, she stabbed with her knife while another ball of light flared up again, illuminating the surrounding in seconds before darkness enveloped it. A thought clinked inside her mind.
It must be Patryn, using her fire seal!
 
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I guess. We've got one more seal after gem, the life seal. But remember, you said I could have a plan for that. hehe.

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Touching the hilt of her short sword, Freezia could see the blade glow a dim flash of blue. With a faint ring of steel, she drew it and turned, a breath of wind sighing through her hair. At least I know there's a way out, she thought. Her fingers brushed against rough sandstone, and she backed into a narrow cleft in the rock, just in time to watch around twenty goblins and such creatures marching quickly up the tunnel she'd just come. Once they'd passed, she crept from her hiding place and out of the mouth of the tunnel, into the echoing cavern. Sputtering torches revealed little -- mounds of dead bodies. Not one of them was her friends, but there was the sound of axe blades and picks hacking at rock to her left. What devilry is this?

Freezia sheathed her sword, and deftly nocked arrow to string. She'd found her bow up the tunnel, having been abandoned. The orcs knew it had been made with one purpose in mind -- the death of their kind. They dared not touch it, for many spells and oaths had been woven around it for their destruction. To touch it would burn their flesh.

She crossed an open part of the cavern quickly, cat-footing it nearer to where at least a hundred goblins labored, thrusting rocks aside and delving into the barran soil. Narrowing her eyes, she saw that it had been opened once before, then filled with soil and loose rocks. Then a trickle of stones, and dust. An entire twenty feet of the cavern soil caved in, and several goblins were swollowed up. Their cries were piercing, as if they died from something other than the fall.

The leader of the orcs and goblins knelt on the edge of the cave in. "Kazaad, ghaszki nazgh dimbatul!" He cast some loose pebbles into the cave, and Freezia's sharp ears heard nothing. So, then, the cave or whatever it was, was very deep. The lead orc motioned with his hand, and a group of thirty or so bore several bundles towards the rim. A faint gargle was heard underground, then a rush of water. Several of the guards fell back in dismay, the confusion allowing Freezia to climb up the walls of the cavern until she could look directly into the pit. She saw nothing. A flicker of white amidst the slime and muck, and she caught a glimpse of Vialla's pale, strained face. The leader approached her and wrenched something from her hand. With a cry, she fell to her knees. One of the other prisoners knocked him back with a kick, and choas insued. Vialla leapt forward and a blast of water surrounded the goblin. She snatched back the seal (for that was what it was), and the goblin toppled over the edge, with a cry. Several second-in-commands kicked Vialla and the other captives into the pit, and there was silence.

Freezia felt something within her snap, and she outstretched both of her arms. A white light filled the room, and when it dimmed, every single evil creature was dead, consumed. She leapt down and to the pit, looking down. She saw why it was so feared. A continual rumble like an express train shook the ground. "Ai!" she shrieked, and almost fled. A whirlpool filled the expanse of the pit, fed by an underwater riverflow. She caught sight of Vialla, hanging perilously to a slippery rock. She had managed to hold onto the seal, and was endeavering to use the seal to stop the whirlpool. But half-conscious and beaten badly, she lost her grip on the rock and was washed into the chasm.

Not minding her own safety, Freezia leapt into the chilled water and sucked in one breath before the current caught her and pulled her down.

Down.

Down.

Darkness.

Her limbs felt exceedingly light, and she willed them to move. She felt something like fabric and grabbed it. The turbulent waters allowed her one more breath of air before she was slammed against a rock and pulled down into the depths.
 
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NAME: Reon(Ray-own)
AGE: 23
GENDER: Female
RACE: Elf(like the ones in LotR)
DESCRIPTION:http://forum.barrowdowns.com/images/readerart/riomir-arwen.jpg
PERSONALITY: Friendly to those she trusts.
WEAPONS: She can use any weapon, and can make a weapon out of pretty much anything.
HISTORY: You don't need it at this point.

Could someone give me a run though on what's happening so far?
 
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Sure. Basically, they're in the caves of Landinarre, looking for the gem seal. While they were underground, the bad guy sent a couple armies after them to wipe them out. They caught Vialla and some others (or if no one wants to be caught, they can be captives from a previous battle) and they threw them into an underground whirlpool. Now Vialla has the water seal (I think) and so she's trying to control the waterpool so she doesn't drown, but she got knocked unconscious on a rock. Freezia jumped in to help save her but ended up also unconscious. She has the light seal. The others are all in their seperate battles with orcs, since they all got seperated in the tunnels.

Did that help?
 
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Darkness. That filtered through Freezia's mind before she stirred. Feeling her shoulders, she felt that her clothing was badly torn, except for her cloak. That cloak had the power to conceal her from enemies when she wished. It concealed her now, but more from cold and darkness than enemies.

Drip, drip. water droplets were falling into a pool by her side. Moving her hand, she felt a gradual decline in the height of the rock. As memory flooded back, she regained her hearing fully. In the distance she could still hear the rumble of the whirlpool, and on her other side the swift, deep waters of an underground river sped by. She had washed up on an island of rock in the riverbed.

"Oh - oh - oh!" came a groan nearby, recognizable as Vialla. Using the powers of her light seal, Freezia lit up the cavern. The deep, dark waters rushed by on either side, but there was a natural arch of sandstone over one side of the river.

Vialla blinked at her, and held up her water seal. "A lot of use it was," she muttered.

"The seals grow weaker. The light I make now is weaker than before." Freezia staggered to her feet and felt the bruises all over her body. "I don't feel so good."

"You don't look so good," Vialla retorted, wincing. "But I know what you mean." Somehow managing to get her feet underneath her, they crawled across the arch.

Freezia looked back. "I wonder what happened to those others."

"Don't. I think they're dead."

They skipped over puddles until they reached a sort of underground cliff.

"What - what - "

To either side, the cliff dissapeared in darkness. In all actuality, they were walking along one step in a giant staircase. To their left, the underground river curved around and poured over the cliff, into a series of smaller waterfalls. The edges of the 'stair's were jagged and sharp as steel. Freezia quickly located a portion of one that had broken, causing a pile of debris to pile on the second step, making them a sort of rocky 'ramp'. "Might as well," she said, looking at it. Vialla shrugged. So far on this mission, all they'd managed to do was get themselves lost in the honeycombed passages of Landinarre, get attacked by unending and almost unrealistic hoards of orcs and goblins, get sucked down a whirlpool and narrowly miss floating over a giant waterfall and get killed once and for all.

"Yeah." Their voices didn't even echo in the giant cave. It was large enough to hold two or three star destroyers end-to-end, and a third that deep.

Freezia leapt nimbly down the broken lip of rock, followed closely by Vialla. In this fashion they ran for several hours at least, maybe even six. Finally, they reached a level place at the bottom, which sloped down to an archway to another, much smaller cavern. Several underground streams followed either side of their path. After that cavern, there was another, where it spread out again into amazing vistas. "The entire plains must be honeycombed," Vialla commented, running her fingers over the rough sandstone walls. Freezia had found among her remaining things the small light crystal she'd made years before. Captured in the gem was a flame imperishable, which lit the area as a floodlight. She'd set it in a staff of wood cast up beside them, and it lit the entire area. They suddenly stopped, and took a deep gasp. A wall faced them, a wall with a mural of a war, drawn not long before! It showed orcs being driven back, by a vague figure holding what looked to be a disc of some sort.

"An elf!" Freezia exclaimed. Vialla nodded and pointed to something.

"Look!"

The words were printed there, a clear warning. In orcish, dwarvish, elvish and common tongue. 'Do not pass. Death waits for those who pass this mark.'

Freezia brushed it with her fingers, eyes thoughtful. "We mean no harm. Surely whoever it is will let us enter."

They looked at the arched doorway, cut from the limestone and carved with many runes. "Whoever did this had a lot of time on his or her hands." They walked through, and found themselves under the unwavering mark of Reon.

"Did you read the sign?" The voice stung like a hornet.

"Surely you don't mean to harm friendss."

Reon put up her bow. "I knew you were not orcs. I spotted you long before, and followed you from the falls. I took a short cut, though. Welcome to my caves."

~~~~~

Was that good, Darrions?
 
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Bravo! :) Lemme think...um, while I'm trying to think of an idea, I'll bring in another character.

NAME: Ronerion(Goes by Rone)
AGE: 29(in human years. Same with Reon.)
GENDER: Male
RACE: Elf
DESCRIPTION:http://imladris.nu/caranthir.html
PERSONALITY: He is extremly friendly. Welcomes strangers. He knows a friend, from foe.
WEAPONS: Just about anything.
OTHER INFO: Rone basically lives in Reon's caves. They are often mistakes as siblings, when they really are not related in any way. They are really close friends. Rone saved Reon's life, and in return, she gave him a place to live.

I have an idea.

Reon welcomed the two into her caves. She sat down on the rocks, just as Rone walked in.
"Ah, visitors. It's not often that people come into these caves. Please make yourself comfortable." he said.
"If it's possible on this cold, jagged floor." Reon said.

Sorry. All I could think of. Do you think you could continue?
 
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Rone, Reon? Man, you used the same letters! hehe. sure:

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Freezia nodded politely at Rone. "Indeed, the floor is most . . . comfortable. I hope you are not offended by our coming?" she inspected both of the elves during the pause. Both walked easily, spoke clearly and well. They bore the kind of off-hand countenance that belied their confidence in their strengths.

Vialla spoke up. "One of you has the gem seal?" her direct comment brought a chuckled from Rone. He showed her the silver disc.

In turn, Vialla revealed hers. "Water," she said softly. She nudged Freezia, who outstetched her palm. A blaze of light filled it. "I left it in Waterfall City," she said. "It will be safe there, and I can still use the powers." With a flick of her hand, she hid the light and touched the crystal on her staff. It flickered, then went out. She put it back in her pouch, and looked at the others.
 
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