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[Greatcloud]

You have read my book and now this is the end.

I'm glad you took the time you had to spend.

The highs the lows the moonlit glows are in your very soul.

You're soul I say as it lights the way and we struggle to the dawn.

Together again my new found friend we share a mere moment of bliss.

I hope you will find a piece of mind and a loving caring hand.

So take my hand and together we'll stand once more we will face the dawn.

Girded with prose we can thumb our nose at those who are not well read.

 

[New_Believer]

Your words are very eloquent. I would keep at it!

 

[Greatcloud]

Your words are very eloquent. I would keep at it!

Thank you New_Believer I really enjoyed your comment on my poetry. I also will definently read any poetry you post on here !

 

[Gracelands]

This is more prose than poetic I suppose but here goes: ( i was in a bad mood lol )

Ravenous Ghosts.

When I lay in my abyss suffering the whine of my demons,
Suffocating on their stench. You are my blessed shard of light.
Your purity is the sweet aroma that breaks through the fumes of the rank cadavers that litter this grave.
When I see you i'll mourn no more over these rotten corpses.
That shard resurrects me, perfected, immortal.
I rise in worship and leave the rot to the ravenous ghosts.

 

[Greatcloud]

This is more prose than poetic I suppose but here goes: ( i was in a bad mood lol )

Ravenous Ghosts.

When I lay in my abyss suffering the whine of my demons,
Suffocating on their stench. You are my blessed shard of light.
Your purity is the sweet aroma that breaks through the fumes of the rank cadavers that litter this grave.
When I see you i'll mourn no more over these rotten corpses.
That shard resurrects me, perfected, immortal.
I rise in worship and leave the rot to the ravenous ghosts.

Beautiful poem it moved me deep in my soul, ooh, ooh, ooh,yeah !

 

[Gracelands]

Oh thankyou for commenting. I was just reading through some of your poetry. You definately have a muse!

 

[Greatcloud]

Oh thankyou for commenting. I was just reading through some of your poetry. You definately have a muse!

Massively blushing now thanks................

You have good taste

 

[Greatcloud]

Further And Farewell That Is All There Is To Say. See You Later On Judgment Day !

When We Meet Again Don't Judge Me Too Harshly And I Promise The Same To You.

I Am Through Except To Say Heaven Or Hell You Choose Me I Have Got The Blues.

Farewell !



-Marshall Winter 2014

 

[Greatcloud]

Freedom is the only song I sing today, pure and true in every way; if you are not free read this and be. Freedom is simple, every man and woman in our country they are born with it. People go through hell to come here every day. Makes me love us more ,i'm just a simple man but my song is freedom sing along.



Marshall - winter 2015.

 

[Greatcloud]

High piched voice I screech making my eagle cry.

Farewell, fly. Out here in the fields from mornings moutain height.

Wish I could stay on that moutian peak. To be like the eagle to think and

see the otter and the mink. Sail on the wind my friend in great circles you

bend. His claws carry the prize ,so easy to see with his eyes. Fresh meat

for eglets hungry for his return. Climb high, goodbye.

 

[lisah]

Girded with prose we can thumb our nose at those who are not well read.

Oh no, I am not well-read.

 

[Greatcloud]

LOL

 

[Greatcloud]

I love writing poetry. Thank you dear readers.

 

[Greatcloud]

Blieve it or don't I am a published artist.

 

[lisah]

And I think you are very good at it.

 

[Greatcloud]

Spent the perfect day

Woke up early went down to the bakery, coffee in my hand now much better now. Reading my paper bout whats happing cross the land. Another Tsunami in the sea of Japan. The weather looks nice all week long , I am walking to work singing a song. Nothing can go wrong all day long. I'm in a groove now

 

[Greatcloud]

The perfect day is to pray.

Spent an entire day down on my knees at a retreat once. Now I don't ever have to do that again it was a once in a lifetime thing. Didn't bring a thing now I walk my prayers out and God blesses me. Just like he always does because He is God and we are not. God rocks He is and will always be He was in the beginning He will be there now and will always be. God alone magisty free yes magisty set free to live in us.

Peace out have no doubt.

 

[Greatcloud]

PEACE LOVE and COMMUNION

 

[Greatcloud]

Amuse You

• Yes I came to amuse you not abuse you. I like you too so don't say we are through. Ghosts say boo or booooooooooo You are a muse if you have the muse in you and at your fingertips there for the giving or even to make a living. Like me even though this is more like a hobby and not my vocation. Someday I aspire to say to our Nation something real nice also worth the price of a book I wrote called the Plowmans Plow so you must tell me now what do you feel is your muse waking up can you give Him words to live by or cry with Him. Say goodbye to Him but keep it alive ............strive.........strive...... strive. Please strive yes and by all means do what you want be alive oh muse in the good people of the US those people who need so much because they do so much America the land of the free and home of the brave the true ones who keep the faith. We have so much laughter and joy coming to the whole planet through us. Now did I tickle your fancy If I did will you please do a little dancy. Dancy dancy dancy....dance with joy. Yes you great American fool dance and let the laughter come when it comes. Leaving just a smile.

 

[Greatcloud]

Absurd Word

Salvation is just an absurd word but it is the only way to enter the gates of glory.

God is a word using being and he put it on the hearts of men inspired by the Holy

Spirit. They wrote down the books of the Bible Moses was one David Then his son King Soloman

Gobbolleegook is an absurd word it means it means a messy bunch of nothing

Speaking in tongues bring lots of absurd words. Oh thank you for interpretation.