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[Greatcloud]

If your life is goin wrong you can sing this song.

Jesus lifted me and set me free, He covered me with purity, my old life's gone.

I start each day new with Him, I read about the wages of sin. I want to be like Him.

Jesus set me free, Jesus set me free. He set me free, the joy that fills my soul

is unspeakable it's my life's goal.

When your feelin down and things are hard give it to the Lord,and you will see

it change to gold. He lifted me He set me free to worship Him. I love you so I

can't believe how great you are. You're awesome God.

You told me of your wondrous love, in your Holy word. You set me free I am your child.

Jesus set me free He set me free I worship thee.

 

[Rutillio]

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[Greatcloud]

My life is a mess i'm down i'm depressed
and what will lift me up. Time and time again
I see the face of my good friend and she will lift me up.
It is not good for a man to be alone waiting for my home.
Times I think i'm so complete but creeping in my will to go on is lost.
I need you like the God who made me, like the breath that saves me.
Like a storm in a desert you slake my thirst. Like soft fine clouds that hide the angry sun, beating down on me and draining me of my life's essence.
Yes you are the storm the clouds and the soft rain kissing the flower tops of my garden.

Without you I cannot see I have no reason I fall down flat on my face.
What once was good is purposeless and meaningless and makes a hollow ring.
I cannot sing, I cannot find my light and reason the season brings me no joy.
It is you my better half the one who completes me who exceeds me who leads me on.

 

[jessyblue]

Adam and Eve, girls and boys, men and women, go together like birds and feathers-as to naturalness and realityness, tis great God made two human genders!!.

 

[Greatcloud]

Drink of the link to life fill up to the brim let it flow within our essence every day.
Beautiful water of life our soul's wanting need a seed of speed to wing our way.
Relax and call on God, its good not odd. Do you feel warm all over let it hover.
We neglect our soul at our soul's jeopardy if we let it go we will pay a fee.
Drink from the cup of endless essence its waiting there with effervescence.
This tingling brew is you, God's creature. Strength to live, a spirits sieve.
Removing and burning away the chaff, come on laugh. Time to be happy.
This milk of human kindness pays the debts of life's long misery.
It will set you free to be a tree climbing our way to the sky.
So drink let it flow to your roots let it itch in your boots.
You must do it every day. Never forget the way.
Stay and soak wave after wave, soak.
You must partake whatever it means.
The Holy Spirit will bring you near it.
Our essence is spirit.
Drink !

 

[Greatcloud]

Outside the rain begins coming down, crystal sheets noisy rain in the dark night.

Rain that seeps into my bones. Making me glad for the fire. In Oregon it rains all

the time. Causing me to go out of my mind. Will it never end its been three days

and I have not seen the sun. Rain is falling, rain is falling, down, down. Rain is

calling to me. It calls my name and it talks to me, telling me what a waste I've

become. Mocking me and superimposing its gloom on me. It does sing me to

sleep at night I fall asleep to the constant drone. I wake to the maddening

rap of rainfall and open the shades to see the gray and featureless morning.

Rain, it saps my will to live spending me into a dark depression. Is this not a

Chinese torture, devious devil who pokes at my brain driving me insane. I wish

I had a wish I would wish for the sun to shine again.

 

[Greatcloud]

When the lady you love who is driving you mad is away. She takes my heart in

her soul. And I am bereft, a ship gone adrift and a lighthouse without a lamp.

What can be done ? Ripped my world apart and now her scent is faint upon my

bed. A soulless zombie I wander downtown and look at the ground when life is

going on around me everywhere , I am bare. My cat is a comfort my food is

bland. The TV has nothing but boring reruns, I want to scream. My cigarettes

and I count the hours away , I count the stars in the sky. Why what did I do

and what can I say to make my angel return.

 

[Greatcloud]

Black limousine tell me where you been what have you done & seen.

Cool Cadillac in black has someone famous been inside you and gone for a ride

too ? Memories of a million proms and weddings I love your luxurious settings.

I feel like a star wish I was traveling far in this black car. I have my drink and

my tunes and my sing along croons. I am happy "once again around the park

chauffeur" Maybe I'll call an escort someone should share this night with me.

I turn on the TV. I thank God i'm alive this city is mine tonight.

 

[Greatcloud]

5 and 40 years ago I found a love so true. She came from Providence

my sullen Angel "You" . Brooding on a leafy tree, then seeing me. We walked

along the sea. Oh great ocean oh great sea we run along the ocean til we drop

into a heap. Then slower and quieter we walk in sullen grace. I turn and catch a

glimpse of her dark and lovely face. Is this a dream and will I wake to find a

phantom not a face and air to take her place. We speak at last and great is my

attention I seem to grasp her every word and keeping my minds retention. I speak

to her and turn my thoughts and words to love. At last her house, a mansion

on a cliff. We pause so awkwardly and I ask for another day.She says yes and my Angel fly's away.

 

[Greatcloud]

A waterfall in the desert. I saw the trees and came across it.

The crystal bubbling pool coming up out of the sand. then streaming along for a

while til it reaches a cliff then falls twenty feet to a pool below, then streams

back out to vanish in the desert sand. What a joy to find tranquility & peace

of mind. The fish below in the pool gather together in a school. They rise from

the water to take a beetle breaking the surface like a flashing needle. A hawk

eyes the fish from his perch on a tree he looks at me. I am astounded at the

untouched condition of this place and bow my head and say grace.

 

[Greatcloud]

Its the year of election and my thoughts are filled with visions. I see my country so fair so complex.

My country I love and am a part of, my country large and the people in charge, the person who we choose has eyes of many hues and

sees the land standing before them. Rich and poor in spirit and money come alive with this taste of honey. This patriotic drink found in

faces fair jumping in the air my candidate has won oh joyful day , hooray ! We thank our founding fathers and praise their mothers we

thank God and his grace; oh milk of human kindness we are full now forget our dryness. Should the other side win we will hold them to

their promise and make sure they make the changes and not differ in the ranges of the promise that they made. We will watch and

fight the good fight again another day.

 

[Greatcloud]

He struts around the house with tail in the air.

I'm the boss see, what do you think I care.

This is my house I guess I'll let you live.

Its the food I want give it to me now, give.

I'll scold you with my cats meow & never give you peace.

You might as well just sign my name upon the lease.

Food now ! You know the stuff I like.

Food or I'll make you trip upon the bike.

So now my cat is eating and he puts his tail down

a curious sight his tail down my cat content at last.

 

[Greatcloud]

Eggs and waffles sausages and OJ.

Oatmeal mush with tea.

Yummm ! I want some coffee too.

Say a good prayer for me.

Give me some toast with jam & jelly.

Can't wait to fill my belly.

Lets read the paper at the table.

Sports section please if your able.

Ahhhhh, that was good need me a toothpick.

 

[Greatcloud]

Sue & Diane were chatting one day 'bout all of the menfolk comming their way.

I'll pick and i'll choose says Sues. Diane just lookin for the right man.

30 days & hes mine says Sue I got a plan. I'm going to get that boy in the band

Just seven days for me my boy lives out by the sea, says Diane.

Maybe hes a little bit shy i'll have to admit that's my kind of guy.

Sue pipes up I need a feller now ! Else i'll move to Georgia and cause a row.

Well anyway God up above will not stop us from getting our love.

Kisses sweeter then wine from above. A handsome devil hes devil may care.

He skips to work and comes home on the air. He kissed me once on a dare.

I'll race ya says Sue me or you, who will find their love true. You're on says Diane and they shook each others hand.

 

[Greatcloud]

Say a little prayer your voice is needed Angel's are greeted.

Only your voice can call me so. Across the cosmos to my door.

I want you, I need you, I love you. My love, your breath is moving in the air.

Power and glory are there. Grace is the fragrance that kisses your prayer.

Whatever you have on your mind is mine to keep as I sleep. Tendrils of love.

Spiritual woven webs of beauty and care are there at my door and yet more.

When I fall in love it will be your answer or you never gave me your heart.

 

[Greatcloud]

Star spelled backwards is rats.

Keep this under your hat no,no, don't talk about that.

This mystic secret was told to me by an aged wiccan of 93.

Also he said that God spelled backwards is dog.

This of course speaks volumes about God and his character.

The lowly loving dog and his good character.

God on the flip side , his funny flip side.

This wiccan spoke about Satan and Santa.

How they are the same thing and speak of greed, among other things.

Figure it out the clues are there plain to see , hee, hee

Which spelled backwards is of course; eeh ?

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[Greatcloud]

Butter me up I think I love you.

Better be nice to me or you won't get to heaven.

Stroke my ego dear if you know whats good for you.

God is watching over all he sees it all the time you better not do that crime.

I on the other hand am entirely forgiven have no sin and am on my way to heaven.

How can it be you say to me !? I smile and say my God died on a tree.

Now listen closely he was God and man he lived a perfect life and paid for mans sin when Adam took a bite of the tree.

That's the end what more do you need it was only the most important thing to read.

How God became one of us after we sinned by eating the fruit forbidden us

then He died on the tree for you and me to be reconciled as God's friend once again.

The End.​

 

[Forge3]

This is a first stab at writing a poem, I used to do it a long time ago. It started as a PM to the Mods then it just took off and I think turned out pretty good,well anyway I am kinda proud of it.



God gives to those who need a drink, many poem's on which to think.

Inspiring minds, reluctant change; from Milton & Bunyan, or Dante's flames.

Only scripture reaches higher,it has the weight of God's desire.

Quite words of simple charm never doing any harm.

A jewell or nugget lying fallow, waiting for the plowman's plow.

So common man may find a treasure that is beyond all earthly measure.

The Spirits moving on our hearts; his graceful glory, there imparts.
-Marshall

I like your use of metaphors. Nice imagery and message.

 

[Greatcloud]

Zombies I scream waking up from my dream. Then with stark clarity I see the vulgarity and sinister sincerity my dream so close to reality.

I am an astronaut each day I fought the lonely weightless gloom of my existence Away to the stars I was flown my android body many centuries grown. I explored and discovered many things ,oh such dreams. But now back to earth I come and earths time is countless centuries further along than mine own body is.

Do you see, time travel into the future is real. Back through the void, old earth destroyed my ship is flung into the future.

Would that I were greeted a hero and that was all, but now all across this ball ,earth is sick. The people have mutated into sick creatures afraid of the daylight. I cried and tried to talk to them but they only growled and scowled and tried to crush my head.

My task is now at hand to restore somehow a man. To clone myself and those in frozen crypts, and here is the best part I have the art written down for me.

Can I do it ? Godspeed my labors or all mankind is doomed.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Werwolf

carewolf

Rarewolf

Darewolf

Lairwolf

Hairwolf

Therewolf !

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