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[Greatcloud]

Tell the world i'm in love a blessed angel from above.She fills my days with glory and peace , i'm strong as a lion and rich as a king. I need a foe who is worthy of me this one she created the better me. No I will fight for love and life my energy is spent, thank you my love.

 

[byhisstripes]

Jesus we dance before your throne
in the presance of the King
to bring You glory and an offering
let it be of praise and a pleasing sacrifice
oh what a day when we stand in your light

Jesus we dance for you
and we sing you praise
for the King has come
oh such a gloriouse day

take us and keep us
guide us through our day
as we dance for you Jesus
as an offering of praise

 

[Greatcloud]

Thanks for that nice poem byhistripes.

Kiss me

Funny when Eskimos kiss what if they miss can you imagine a runny nose thats the way it goes. I want a kiss on my lips one you can feel down to your hips. Thats the smack i'm talking about the kind that gives a relationship clout. So kiss me you fool your eyes are a pool all focused on me kiss me now there has never been a better time kiss me now with our last rhyme.

 

[nikkipompom]

lol^ cuteness

 

[Greatcloud]

Life in all its forms God made it all and he is good.
My friend God who saved my soul, has flown away and left his Spirit. Jesus died and left me peace. He is pleased and his anger ceased.

Life is perfect just as it is, all its forms were created by him. No spot or blemish is found, the lame and sick are yours, the fresh and bold are the story he told. Jesus was perfect and died a criminials death, ah breath it is finished.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Out of the void the Spirit calls, Gods mind, is lonely for one special friend.

Crowded apartment downtown, a party and happy times are had but they forget their God in the good times & petty crimes fast woman and cool rhymes.

He drives home, in his Bugatti wishing he'd bought a Masaratti thinking about the money he made.

He gave his heart to Jesus a long long time ago but now he just watches the snow turn to rain hes forgot about his pain.

But hes coming up too fast on the bridge in the rain; the ice on the road is going to be his bane.

Going flat out at 60 per he hits the rail thinking of her and a torn metal ball that was his car; yes its just too bad he stopped off at that bar.

What a poor,poor miserable man:Gods special friend is back. The grave is not the end, so we can thank him;lets begin.

There ya go my friend I like yours please top that.

edit:11/25/09

 

[Greatcloud]

Heaven they say is a stones throw away so roll away my stone lovely one.

Roll away my stone take the stye from my eye I will see you all the more.

You are beautiful to me like a fine vessel upon a starry sea.

I love you though I know you just a little as the years go by like a sister you will be to me.

You are my life my sweet my soul and heart I almost can't think apart from you my dear.

My dearest love I love you more then all lifes ambitions. All its vain and fruitless searches.

Stay here with me my sweetness Heaven can wait. -Marshall

 

[Greatcloud]

Daisy love me.
Daisy don't, maybe she will and maybe she won't.
Was thinkin 'bout the love of a Daisy girl.
My mind is frazzeled I wish she would.
Tell me she loves me and never to part.
I don't know how much I can take with this heart.
Oh my love yes you really love me.
I'm positive, and now I want to live; together with you and never to part, you gave me your soul ,it slakes my heart.

 

[Greatcloud]

My Pawns are like soldiers.
The Knights are like calverymen.
Bishops are priests with bows in hand.
My Queen is my mate , my King rules my fate.
My game.................... it is Godspeed.
King Jesus is all the glory I need.

-John M. Lancaster May 2010

 

[Greatcloud]

God playing chess with Satan,"the end is over cry's the devil I rule the Earth." All around are disasters and destruction. Pain and tax deduction. A baby that was born in Bethleham fair, now hangs with silence in the air. "It is finished...." we heard him cry. "Whats this", says Satan "you can't come down here ; to hell where I rule and cause people to fear." "The pain and the shame that I give them are real." " No these keys are mine.... I forged them myself, What will you do with the keys it won't help." " Preach the Gospel no....... i'm fading fast, in my own prison cell with chains that last."

"There.... !"

Satan is set free...." the chess game now begins with me. I am white. This time i'll be careful. I'll hire the best, all of my faithful. Hah hah hah ha haa ..... They must pass my test they must bow to me and proclaim me as, King of the world."
Now on the earth a volcaneo erupts killing thousands and destroying so much.
"Fools mate is coming continue this course. I will bring out my son he will ride a white horse. Mate is coming you cannot stop it see he comes in the clouds,with heaven atop it. The clouds reveal heaven . And supper is ready; You lose the game."

-Marshall Lancaster 2010 May

 

[Greatcloud]

Pick a poem and comment on it please. I will be ever so grateful. You can also quote me on any of these poems. All poems written between 2009 and present by me and others who leave a poem of their own. -John M. Lancaster

 

[Greatcloud]

When you're love broke through to me.
I was blind I could not see.
Being saved was the last thing on my mind .
Never dreamed you'd treat me so, beautifully kind.
I love you even through the tears and the laughter in my mind.
You saved me to make me a better man I believe in you and its all I can.

 

[byhisstripes]

Hello Greatcloud, hope all is going well for you.

I have to be honest, I liked it....but not as much as your others. keep writing though.

 

[Greatcloud]

My kitty with sparkly eyes,he looks at me i'm going outside.​

Next time, I will go outside with you, perhaps once a day will see you through.​

Tater my cat I love you so , would you like to go out in the driving snow.​

Dance with the snowflakes my lovely cat.​

Oh , you want to come in now imagine that.​

My Tater is warm now I love a warm cat.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Oh guitar of mine looking at me, we'll be together again sailing the sea.

I got you down now to a lovely tee.

Throughout the ages there has never been, a more perfect instrument, I knew you when.

My guitar is love songs and blues & a rock n roll tune.

After a while I will get to croon, a little song I wrote.

I know it now by heart note for note.

Money couldn't buy my blue guitar.

 

[Greatcloud]

I haven't forgotten you God.​

My thoughts are ever of you.​

Should I forget, you'll bring me back.​

Just like you always do.​

I haven't forgotten you God.​

You're in my thoughts and dreams.​

My hopes & every hour I can; I turn my mind to you.​

Just like I always do.​

I haven't forgotten you God.​

How could I do such a thing.​

You give me joy and every day another day you bring.​

My God, my God is alive its such an awsome thing.​

2010 Marshall ​

 

[Jeshu]

neither has He forgotten you

 

[Jeshu]

God playing chess with Satan,"the end is over cry's the devil I rule the Earth." All around are disasters and destruction. Pain and tax deduction. A baby that was born in Bethleham fair, now hangs with silence in the air. "It is finished...." we heard him cry. "Whats this", says Satan "you can't come down here ; to hell where I rule and cause people to fear." "The pain and the shame that I give them are real." " No these keys are mine.... I forged them myself, What will you do with the keys it won't help." " Preach the Gospel no....... i'm fading fast, in my own prison cell with chains that last."

"There.... !"

"I'm set free and the chess game now begins with me. I am white. This time i'll be careful. I'll hire the best all of my faithful. Hah hah hah ha haa ..... They must pass my test they must bow to me and proclaim me as, King set free."
Now on the earth a volcaneo erupts killing thousands and destroying so much.
"Fools mate is coming continue this course. I will bring out my Bride she will ride a white horse. Mate is coming you cannot stop it see I come in the clouds,and with me my bride will sit forever. You lose."

-Marshall Lancaster 2010 May

I like the intent of this prose, but it is a little confusing for you speak about concepts not found in the bible as far as I know.

• A volcano erupting is scriptural imagery?
• Who will install Jesus as King - captive sinners will do that?
• The Bride riding on a white horse? Wherever did you see that?

The switch from devil to truth would go better if you speak through the words of the truth. Take Isaiah 25-26 or Joel 3, Rev 18-20, for example, for there you can find plenty concepts to use to make your prose more effective in its truth.

 

[Jeshu]

Jesus we dance before your throne
in the presance of the King
to bring You glory and an offering
let it be of praise and a pleasing sacrifice
oh what a day when we stand in your light

Jesus we dance for you
and we sing you praise
for the King has come
oh such a gloriouse day

take us and keep us
guide us through our day
as we dance for you Jesus
as an offering of praise

Great poem!

 

[Jeshu]

God playing chess with Satan,"the end is over cry's the devil I rule the Earth." All around are disasters and destruction. Pain and tax deduction. A baby that was born in Bethleham fair, now hangs with silence in the air. "It is finished...." we heard him cry. "Whats this", says Satan "you can't come down here ; to hell where I rule and cause people to fear." "The pain and the shame that I give them are real." " No these keys are mine.... I forged them myself, What will you do with the keys it won't help." " Preach the Gospel no....... i'm fading fast, in my own prison cell with chains that last."

"There.... !"

Satan set free...." the chess game now begins with me. I am white. This time i'll be careful. I'll hire the best, all of my faithful. Hah hah hah ha haa ..... They must pass my test they must bow to me and proclaim me as, King set free to trouble thee."
Now on the earth a volcaneo erupts killing thousands and destroying so much.
"Fools mate is coming continue this course. I will bring out my son he will ride a white horse. Mate is coming you cannot stop it see he comes in the clouds,with heaven atop it. The clouds reveal heaven . And breakfast is ready You lose."

-Marshall Lancaster 2010 May

Yes, yes you are getting there! It is just that we must be very careful not to put words in His mouth He hasn't truly spoken for then we are always on the wrong side of things.

What about something like this?

Satan let my people go...." your ugly chess game was always Mine to win. I'm purely white - how can you true holiness defeat? The Truth is Jesus got you flat on your back. For all must pass through Him as The Lamb alone frees your victims to trouble thee."

....and out of the temple came a loud voice from the throne, saying, "It is done!"

Then there came flashes of lightning, rumblings, peals of thunder and a severe earthquake. No earthquake like it has ever occurred since man has been on earth, so tremendous was the quake. The great city split into three parts, and the cities of the nations collapsed. God remembered Babylon the Great and gave her the cup filled with the wine of the fury of his wrath. Every island fled away and the mountains could not be found.


"Can you see lawless one? You are check mate - merely a fallen star! See Jesus is coming! I can see Him riding a white horse! You cannot stop Him coming on the clouds of heaven. For as Heaven comes down to earth so your day of doom has arrived - You lose the game - for it never was one - surely you are doomed to destruction and hated forever for your rule of tyranny!



I hope you don't mind me suggesting this - neither do you have to follow it - it is just my fussy insight of God's truth at work.