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[Jeshu]

LOVE is my life love is my wife
before there was you what was I to do
I had love back then but it always would end
and the blues would come in like a sea, oh me.
Then along came you my tried and true you blessed me and gave me your love. I love you I do so deep and so true you are my soulmate my reason for life, my wife. No strife, puts a knife to this throat. Your mine now and thats all she wrote.​

Nice...

BUT

(please forgive me, but I feel strongly about this)

Love a She?

I doubt that very much my friend. The Bible states that God is love (1 John 4)

Jesus is The Truth of God's Love - for - God is Love - the 'she' doesn't fit unless you make it your signature at the end - but as it is this is not the clearest. As signature a she - and God is love - and your poem be sound theologically and spiritually at least

 

[Greatcloud]

She waits for me, a joy to be around her
The softness of a flower does not escape her notice. I come to her half spent lifes wearies I repent. She fills me up anew I sleep in glorys rapture She warms the place beside me.
Gods most precious gift a mortal man could have.​

 

[Jeshu]

She
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not Greatest then

 

[Greatcloud]

She is one of lifes greatest things. The greatest things are all concerning Christ however.​

 

[Greatcloud]

My thirty fifth poem what should I write should I speak of the day should I speak of the night. Should I give praise to God should I speak of the humble. Should I be serious or nonchalant. Should I stick to one theme or freely raunt. Does the world need more poems about loftly things. Perhaps a humble joy the day brings. Should I speak out against the days hot topic. Should I gather moss in some secluded raptured rhyme. I will do all this for a poem is needed Our busy world crys for understanding. ​

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[Greatcloud]

Hey look at me with a song and a dance a little harmless fun sent your way . There is an invtation all are needed come come come. We must be moving on.
Join in the dance and give us a wink show your pretty face now what did you think. Is your feets a movin' lets start to groovin'. I must admit to wit I'm having more fun then a barrel of monkeys.My thots are all jumbled like a heavy metal song about Satan. Jesus lives it is true do you love my Jesus ? You know He died for you please don't forget Him. Lets dance the night away there is no price to pay. Jesus paid it all and at His cross we lay. All our burdens have rolled away. weeeeeeeee i'm feeling great I recapitulate. Jesus paid the price and everything is nice my troubles are all gone I sing a happy song. Now is the time for dancing in the street He gave me happy feet. I love you life and I thank you God. Its all OK and on His grace I tred.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Goodnight I hold me down my restless spirit longing for the bliss of sleep. In sleep to dream ah yes I made sure to keep my dreams sacrosantic. Holy dreams of lifes bygone needs and aspirations. Good night I thought I said good night to you why do you still linger why do you not accept the momentum of the nights sweet dreams coming as quicksilver as clear as a judges mullings clear as crystal and full of color. Holy dreams as holy as anything. Go down my spirit and rest from the days labor. Rest me til the morning light. Dance in the dark night and we will fly at the dawn.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Moonbeams and fairy tales dancing in the night
They vanish in the morning returning in twilight
Dance for me keep me occipied play upon your
harp sing a half forgotten song. The night belongs to dreams they twinkle with the stardust of the night.
Dance little moonbeam dance let me hear the music
of the ages in your dainty song. I will remember you and your song I know I can't go wrong, your song is on my lips in the mornings light, humming in the morning my beautful song of the night. Here remain forever in my heart. Angels and Demons battle in the night singing me to sleep in the starry black night.​

 

[Greatcloud]

The Bible, God is speaking to His Bride. His promises are true He loves me and you. He will never leave us alone​

His words cut to the bone. Fire and Spirit He wants us to hear it.Only He can speak words of love for the meak. I​

will not forget my God He rules with an iron rod. None can compare to Him its written down its not dim.​

The Bible was written by Godly men inspired by God and set free from sin. We become like God​

when we read His word He gives us a taste of immortal grace. Ah the patience of Job was it not​

from communion with our Lord.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Pick a poem and comment on it please. I will be ever so grateful. You can also quote me on any of these poems. All poems written between 2009 and present by me and others who leave a poem of their own. -John M. Lancaster

 

[Greatcloud]

My last cigarette I hold in my hand.

Visions of quitting revolve in the sand.

How can I quit the demon of smoke ?

I listen to all of the words that they spoke.

My friends and my elders and the sholes of my mind.

Somewhere I look and I say to thee smoke you are a
clown and a charlatan it is easy I spoke.

I remember my youth how easy it was.

Why smoking no longer gives me a buzz.

Begone foul oder and I crumple my smoke.

 

[Greatcloud]

My little Ford Escort hatchback.

They towed her away today.

In a dream I said OK...............

After 12 years & many looks & leers.

This rustbucket mine once a part of me.

Once mine but is now scrap metal to be.

Removed from my driveway on a sunny day.

"Take her" I say as I push her away.

Into the street she goes.......

The tow truck is attached now; forever its gone.

Only one more long road to restful abode.

"Goodbye my little hatchback" I wave to the man.

The man in the truck waves back he seems to know.

I will be missing my little car so.......

What a job that must be setting cars and people free.

I continue to watch as my little car disappears.

My faithful companion these 12 blessed years.

All the joy and laughter the people she carried.

The hitch hikers the groceries through Sun wind & rain.

My Lord if I could i'd do it again,but that chapter is done.

But my Lord not the fun and I laugh deep inside.

I swallow my pride; afterall getting ready for the fall.

My new blue Chevy pickup remains in the driveway.

I turn to it happily for solace on the day.................

 

[Greatcloud]

The sisters of the sea before we die have one wish
to collect in our dish,moonbeams and fairy dust
dreams and songs. Right and wrongs the happy times
the sad the wonderful joys of you the ecastacys of the few.​

Moreover and to the point we hope to squeeze the life out of the days.
The careful weeding of our ways. To perfect and live out His life,
the life He showed us under God. The way to live under the sun.​

Jesus not only died but He lived for us ,living a life in harmony walking across the crystal sea. We look to the Father and he shows us further
each step we take a marvolus thing, each step of faith
a joy to bring. Joy a plenty with a song to sing.​

Listen to the wise rain coming down washing everything. Refreshing all
not missing a thing. So God refreshs our gardens and we grow our fruit.
Good things comming from the root, rich blessings we consume.​

And every day we laugh the hours away, your song my Lord of harmony.
It cleanses us and sets us free. We are free like wooden ships
sailing on a blue sea. Our Father is our captian we love His every
order. Changing course and crossing border. ​

This life is teaching us what heaven is like and because we hold these truths in fragile hands. God wrote them down with strong commands.
Obeying His precepts and living under grace we remember by soft wind
the look on His face. We know what to do and the down times are few.​

 

[BleedingHeart]

Good rhymes man!

 

[Greatcloud]

Every day I make my way to the highway that is life.
Another step another yard it isn't great it isn't hard
I'll take a step and make God proud. I'll take a step
and say out loud "I did it" praise the Lord.
The highway I am on is the one of following the road Jesus
traveled on not his birth not his death. His life is what I am striving on
striving on and striving on. The rewards can wait the work is great
So I wrote this down to keep in mind the kind of life that I am trying.
A walk of life to see if I can find a kind of peace for my weary mind.
Many days I may rest at an outpost or a nest. Then its back to the long long road and the burden I carry its such a load.
I'm used to it now and the pain is not great I'm used to it now like the back of my hand. I know it can be done because of the Man;Jesus the one who frees us and is our joy and rest. Freedom on the road if such a thing can be, I found it in my Jesus Christ the one who rescued me.​

 

[Greatcloud]

Misty morning dew
that shines when it is new.
Covering the flower tops with teeny tiny water drops.
In the garden I breath the air
and you are standing there.
Your skin is pale, I touch your face.
We bow our heads in raptured grace.
The sun shines on our moistened skin.
I feel a stir from deep within,
your lips are wanting heart shaped puffs
I lean in close i've had enough.
Our everlasting kiss is what we both have missed.
In the misty morning dew that shines when it is new.

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[Greatcloud]

Love exciting and new with Lena i'm in love with you. Exciting and fresh with you its the best I tried not to fall but I fell, it was love at first read you wrote me of your need. All your love from above an Angel with hair of gold. Perhaps i'll fall further then i've ever fallen before . Perhaps when I come to knock on your door you'll give me a kiss at your doorway of bliss. One I will miss when i'm back in the States. One we will speak of and our progeny rates. A kiss with such passion and soul enough to make us full. Yes we are in love and a kiss is enough not too much but such is enough to quench our fire and flame. A moment of bliss in our Summer of love and love our eternal flame. ​

 

[Greatcloud]

I wanna fall in love further then I've ever fallen better then my baby calling.

Better then us all in ,better then another chance I wanna dance this dance.

I wanna fall in love better then a friendship, better then a kinship. Us forever.

Us in love talking into the night past the twlight making plans and comparing souls.

Making love in married bliss. Making sure we never miss the joys of the day.

The peace of the way ,raising a family one for you and one for me. Love will be there all the time.

Love will keep us from petty crime. Love will satisfy and completey fill. Don't ever say it won't because it always will.

 

[Greatcloud]

I'm just a dot soakin up the sun I'm leavin my mind behind i'm goin nuts .

Got no troubles 4 good .

Should I go to heaven with the Pope should I hold out my hand and offer you hope.

But one thing is sure while I lay on the sand I am thinkin of Jesus and feelin grand.

My best days are ahead got you now my favorite red my auburn beauty my pretty litte cuttie.

Jesus said I'm on the track she writes me back.

I'm an island of you I had to reach the top shelf for you hope your pleased with yourself.

I'm Crazy 4 U got me thinkin brand new.

He says where have you been all my life sugar.

I have fallen to pieces my mind is quite, you are more then just my friend.

I tried to put you in a box but every time I do my soul is rocked.

Thats all baby red my favorite auburn beauty. Yes you are my quintasential cutie.

-Marshall

 

[Greatcloud]

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