Hook me in 20 words or less

[food4thought]

Sometimes I wondered what the heck I was doing here, but mostly I pondered what the here was doing to me!

 

[brinny]

Silently it crept. Not a word. Not a sound. Insidiously he stalked, the hellish hound.

 

[brinny]

did not.
did too.
uh-uh.
uh-huh.

seriously, chill out you two

 

[Pamelav]

Oh, oops. My last post was more than 20 words.

 

[Imperfect SBG]

Drawing heavy, ragged breaths, he stood at the edge of the darkness. They were closing in. With failing strength, he...

 

[brinny]

awesome posts peeps!!!!!

 

[GeekWriter]

This is the current first two sentences of my new novel, though it might change:

Thousands milled about the square, awaiting the strike of the falling axe. Axes was more appropriate.

 

[LutheranChris]

The scars on his back told the story of his life, but the promise of his dreams never stopped calling.


A very short adaptation of a short story I wrote a couple of years ago.

 

[Dieselman]

A sharp, panic filled scream echoed off the walls as the young blonde bolted upright in the bed.

< That's actually the opening line to a book I'm working on. The heroine dies in the second chapter... and in the last.>

 

[brinny]

Wow! I got hooked. Powerful, mon.

 

[Victory of the Cross]

"You will hang for this Walker.. die a deviant damned for all eternity" the female officer spat out bitterly

 

[brinny]

Whoa! That's got a lot of "oomph"! you got me hooked, brother

 

[chaoticfirefly]

"I can't really give you an answer on that,"

"I thought you had answers for everything." I mumble.

 

[princesspeach5280]

Warm tears fell down her cheeks as she closed the door to freedom for the last time.