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brinny

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Not so often and really quite rarely
Could one ever feel such things so fairly
Moments become minutes & minutes, hours...
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This, sir, is brilliant.
 
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I was beginning to realize this was an odd sort of school. The sort where children vanished and reappeared in strange guises.

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this is like the beginning of a movie....you are quite good.... :D
 
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I suppose I should take a whirl...probably not as good as yours but hey I'm young, I'll grow into it :p
Well here goes nothing:

Life boasts of two sides: Good and Bad, Order and Chaos, all men born to their places. Yet there are a mad few, who master fate.

I was one.

this is quite brilliant. your words' rhythms nearly dance off the page...
 
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