Hook me in 20 words or less

[Key]

Very good shows all! I have been enjoying these!

 

[brinny]

Hmm... let me take a shot.

A fallen hero. A world in turmoil. And no hope for a future.

Thats all I got.

you got my attention...i want more!

 

[MarineMarie]

A few more than 20 but it is still an introduction to my thoughts.

I remember the summer we moved from Montana. Stevie my kid brother was the most excited, He must have spent hours gettng ready for the first day of school. A day that tortures him still ...

 

[starbuck55]

The sound of killing. You never forget that sound. Bullets, blood and breath; all loud and unforgiving.

 

[brinny]

The sound of killing. You never forget that sound. Bullets, blood and breath; all loud and unforgiving.

intriguing.....wonders what's next...

 

[starbuck55]

The sound of killing. You never forget that sound. Bullets, blood and breath; all loud and unforgiving.

It was another time, as another person. You'd never imagine wanting to go back. But here you are, contemplating that very thing.

 

[Thunderring]

Some days the idea of mass homicide is almost worth the possible consequences.

 

[Thunderring]

It was another time, as another person. You'd never imagine wanting to go back. But here you are, contemplating that very thing.

Very good on both of these. Defiantly draws the mind in.

 

[keith99]

I knew he was an outworlder, only an outworlder would be alert for trouble on the ground and not check the sky for Dragons.

 

[Thunderring]

"Why is there pudding on my ceiling?"

 

[JourneyToPeace]

I would have preferred to wake up alone, rather than with a large, spotted, scaly lizard slowly licking my nose.

 

[Thunderring]

"Nothing on heaven or earth will save you if you take that sledge hammer to my house."

 

[luchsgud]

Gazing crestfallen at the waiting room floor he thought of the beach party he was missing.

**My poor teenage son had been looking forward to the school excursion. Paintball fight, Obstacle course, day at the beach, and more. Within two hours of arriving he rolled off a log, became pinned under it at the ankle, and tore ligaments in his foot. He hasn't done any of the things he was looking forward to.**

 

[luchsgud]

"Nothing on heaven or earth will save you if you take that sledge hammer to my house."

Oooo. Where's your house?

 

[Thunderring]

Oooo. Where's your house?

My house is nothing special, this person though....I would have to say probably has a very nice house.

And to think at one point he was worried about something as simple as a bullet through the heart.

[FONT=&quot]Boredom was a dangerous thing for a ninja, this one was no exception.[/FONT]

 

[Billnew]

The end of a secondary villian in one of my books.

How had he not felt her presence, he stares at the arrow deep in his chest side, He looks around, trying to think of something that would save him, nothing?

 

[Billnew]

There was nothing beneath her feet but the canyon, half a mile below - yet she did not fall.

Good one,
Magic or grand canyon skywalk?

 

[Netbug009]

"Oh."

I checked the cookbook again, unsure if the pasta was supposed to be on fire.

 

[brinny]

Night had fallen. The darkness hung heavy, covering the tiny village like a shroud. Footsteps jarred the silence.

 

[Strider1002]

This is the actual first line for the novel I'm working on:

"Some people might mistake me for a bad guy, which I'm not, although I do feel like one sometimes."