Hook me in 20 words or less

[TexasBluebonnet]

Thanks. Just wanted to stay on topic is all. Hope I didn't offend anyone.

 

[brinny]

Hey, this is supposed to be creative writing, not socializing. Can we get back on topic here?

my bad

 

[Ninjitsu14]

After all the scars and pain, you'd think I'd give up. But I'm not so easily broken.

 

[AngelusSax]

A toe, a finger, and my left eye. What were they going to take next? My life?

 

[Shabby]

A toe, a finger, and my left eye. What were they going to take next? My life?

Kind of obvious, isn't it?

 

[TexasBluebonnet]

dupe

 

[Ninjitsu14]

Every time I put my faith in someone they let me down. Literally. I don't have legs.

 

[AngelusSax]

If they wanted to see something truly wicked, they were about to.

 

[Riddik7]

Do you know why they never found Jack The Ripper? Because i found the fountain of youth.

 

[liesje]

Do you know why they never found Jack The Ripper? Because i found the fountain of youth.

Wow that took me by surprise!!! Nice in a very creepy kind of way :o

 

[Riddik7]

figured it would work... i use that line on my friends when i'm bored lol... i also plan on basing a book around that line...

 

[liesje]

figured it would work... i use that line on my friends when i'm bored lol... i also plan on basing a book around that line...

How many friends have you scared away???

That makes for a very scary book...any spoilers?

 

[Riddik7]

How many friends have you scared away???

That makes for a very scary book...any spoilers?

ah none as of yet... they won't even believe me when i use my evil voice saying i shall destroy the world... or when i say i have an evil alter ego... so i dont figure that little phrase would scare them away... it's more of a running inside joke than anything...

ah well i guess a little bit of a spoiler couldn't hurt... essentialy jack the ripper is obviously near immortal now, as are other various people throughout history through mostly different means, some are famous and some aren't. Now the problem is there are people out there worse than jack the ripper ever was, and it seems jack the ripper who is trying to make amends for his sins is the only one standing between them and all of mankind...

i won't give more than that away... a writer has to keep some secrets...

 

[liesje]

ah none as of yet... they won't even believe me when i use my evil voice saying i shall destroy the world... or when i say i have an evil alter ego... so i dont figure that little phrase would scare them away... it's more of a running inside joke than anything...

ah well i guess a little bit of a spoiler couldn't hurt... essentialy jack the ripper is obviously near immortal now, as are other various people throughout history through mostly different means, some are famous and some aren't. Now the problem is there are people out there worse than jack the ripper ever was, and it seems jack the ripper who is trying to make amends for his sins is the only one standing between them and all of mankind...

i won't give more than that away... a writer has to keep some secrets...

Yes, quite so...no point writing if everyone already knows exactly what happens. That sounds really good though.

 

[Gilbert Funk]

"Few realize the power of fudge, but I know the truth.", said Barry as he teetered on the ledge and junmped.

 

[Riddik7]

"Silly little man you don't seem to get that just because I'm a goody tooshoes, it doesn't mean i wont kill you...."

~Another Jack line...

 

[ForeverHis777]

I am a devotional writer so I'm not so on the up and up with this fiction thing . . . so I don't know - maybe "Oh, my gosh! What is that on your nose?!"

That would hook me and embarass me at the same time. lol

 

[AngelusSax]

I always knew I would die some day; I just never thought a tuba would do the honors.

 

[Riddik7]

They never tell you it's just a dream...

 

[AngelusSax]

"I have a squirrel in my pants and I'm not afraid to use it!"