Hook me in 20 words or less

[byhisstripes]

the flower lay wilted trampled on the floor,
where beauty once was no one sees anymore

 

[liesje]

"We have the same blood running through our veins. You may choose to disown me in name, but the bond of blood cannot be broken."

 

[Ninjitsu14]

"You may choose to abandon me here for what I'm about to say, but know it is the truth...I am an alien, and so are you."


Lisa and I had always been best friends. That is, until she tried to kill me.

 

[daydreamergurl15]

Satan is seriously deceiving himself, if he thinks these trials in my life is going to make me deny my God!

 

[brinny]

It wasn't my fault she disappeared. I tried to grab her hand before she was sucked into that ungodly....thing.

 

[tansy]

Arid, deathly-still wasteland - hunched down, Jake saw or rather sensed, a whisper of movement just over his left shoulder.

 

[brinny]

Arid, deathly-still wasteland - hunched down, Jake saw or rather sensed, a whisper of movement just over his left shoulder.

you are good. I want more. When is your book coming out?

 

[tansy]

you are good. I want more. When is your book coming out?

Thanks

 

[brinny]

haha yer welcome. Seriously, do you write?

 

[tansy]

haha yer welcome. Seriously, do you write?

Well, I enjoyed writing at school, and I did used to have little stabs at it - but really, I haven't had enough time to seriously do anything..what with having had 4 kids, working, now grandkids, also all sorts of alarms and despondencies in my life - unemployed at present, not many jobs about, but I'm STILL occupied with one thing or another, plus nowadays I hardly get any peace and quiet...sometimes I can hardly hear myself think - squashed in small flat, two adult sons living with us, very loud and noisy daughter visiting with grand-daughter, plus sundry son's girlfriends..LOL

Actually, my husband was saying we need to get a little nest of coffee tables as we have so little space...and my son said 'It's bad enough as it is moving around this flat....we move around like Pacman' I just couldnt stop laughing, it was so true - so I did a Pacman impersonation..only as I'm overweight I also did it sideways.
One night we were trying to do Michael Jackson dance moves, only there wasn't enough space.....but sorry, I'm rambling now

 

[brinny]

Well, I enjoyed writing at school, and I did used to have little stabs at it - but really, I haven't had enough time to seriously do anything..what with having had 4 kids, working, now grandkids, also all sorts of alarms and despondencies in my life - unemployed at present, not many jobs about, but I'm STILL occupied with one thing or another, plus nowadays I hardly get any peace and quiet...sometimes I can hardly hear myself think - squashed in small flat, two adult sons living with us, very loud and noisy daughter visiting with grand-daughter, plus sundry son's girlfriends..LOL

Actually, my husband was saying we need to get a little nest of coffee tables as we have so little space...and my son said 'It's bad enough as it is moving around this flat....we move around like Pacman' I just couldnt stop laughing, it was so true - so I did a Pacman impersonation..only as I'm overweight I also did it sideways.
One night we were trying to do Michael Jackson dance moves, only there wasn't enough space.....but sorry, I'm rambling now

ramble on.....'tis good for one's soul. Do you have a blog?

 

[tansy]

ramble on.....'tis good for one's soul. Do you have a blog?

No, I don't have a blog...my goodness, I might go rambling on forever lol - or moaning

 

[brinny]

No, I don't have a blog...my goodness, I might go rambling on forever lol - or moaning

haha moaning is a good thing. It's an outlet, these blogs. It's a very healthy thing to moan into them

 

[TexasBluebonnet]

Stepping forward, Jane took in a deep breath. The cave was dank, and dark. But she knew there was no way to avoid it any longer.

 

[tansy]

haha moaning is a good thing. It's an outlet, these blogs. It's a very healthy thing to moan into them

Maybe I should start one then! Perhaps I will...hmm

 

[brinny]

Maybe I should start one then! Perhaps I will...hmm

my blog is a treasure to me...i moan in it all the time

 

[tansy]

my blog is a treasure to me...i moan in it all the time

Yeah..I just had a quick look at your blog ..I'm still not quite sure how they work - I'll have to have a better look at the blog thingy.

 

[brinny]

Yeah..I just had a quick look at your blog ..I'm still not quite sure how they work - I'll have to have a better look at the blog thingy.

if you're interested, start one here, at this link. I still use the old blog forum. I didn't like the new one that was set up after Erwin left.

This is the link where my blog is. If interested, you can just click on the button that says new thread, and you begin a blog....you gotta think of a title for it.

Here's the link:

Christian Forums Blogs - Christian Forums

 

[TexasBluebonnet]

Hey, this is supposed to be creative writing, not socializing. Can we get back on topic here?

 

[tansy]

Hey, this is supposed to be creative writing, not socializing. Can we get back on topic here?

Apologies