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"I don't need to remember? I, too, have a horse." She whistled, and her pure white horse came galloping. She gracefully mounted, and said "This is Anthun. Let's go - and quick." to Anthun, she said "Hlaupa!" Her horse started running at an incredible speed to the next town.

((this is an elvin horse, talked about in Eldest.))
 
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"Well how was I supposed to know?" She called after her, "Come on girl. We gotta hurry to catch up." She said to Maylin "Hia!" With that her horse began galloping. As she leaned forward soon they caught up with Liviella.


"Thank heavens, we're finally leaving this town" She thought to herself.
 
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((Let me get this straight... Some fisherman found the seal somewhere, and it JUST so happened he had no friends or family for some reason and now it's gone. Now you're characters are traveling from town to town to find it? And another thing, why would Riingard DESTROY a town looking for this thing, without even asking around about information first? Plus, Kate it seems like you're making you're character out to be perfect. those are the worst kind of characters a story can have...))
 
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((Blaze, have you been following the story at all? What our characters are trying to find out is if he had any family, and if so, if they have it. Ringaard doesn't completly destroy the towns, he just does damage. But he is evil. Ringaard isn't all that smart. Doesn't have much common sense. I never said my character was perfect, she's secretive. I mean right now, no one in the story knows she's an elf. Plus, she gathers information. She has to be knowlegable. Actually, Arya is my inspiration for her, because she's an elf, too. I can't find fault with Arya though... other than not sharing her feelings... What's got you in a grumpy mood?))
 
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At the next town, it seemed that the army hadn't reached it yet. It was strange, because Ringaard had left way ahead of them, along with his company of soldiers. Liviella decided to shake off the feeling, and continued, not bothering to stop. When they did arrive at their destination, she came down off of Anthun, and went up to a villager. "Excuse me, but where does your bard reside?" Liviella asked politely.

((I'm saying bard because I can't remember if it was that or the fortune teller. Oh, and Sappirealeoht, you do this one, because I did it last time.))
 
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Liviella forced a laugh. "Why? We want him to tell us a story!" Liviella quickly skimmed his mind, but unable to find any deciet. Then, she left before the man could notice her consiousness. "If you'll excuse us... You were very helpful. Thank you."

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((Well, at least Ringaard isn't perfect. He gets angry far too easily and isn't the smartest tool in the shed. He also is prideful.))

Ringaard was in a terrible mood. When he finally rejoined his battalion, he had only calmed slightly. The last town had taken more time than what he had expected. He hadn't found The Seal. And to top it all off, that insulant young ma - No, not even a man, a worthless, slimy creature was more suited. He had had the gaul to stop him and even insult him. The king had become too lax lately. Galbatorix needed to remind the people that he was in charge, and as such, should be treated with respect along with his underlings.

He watched from a hill, as his men went to work on the town. Seeing a fire light and consume a house, Ringaard smiled cruelly. This was finally lightening his mood. By the time it was over, he was feeling much better. He forced his horse into a gallop to join his men once more.

They made camp half way to the next town, for it had grown dark. He was in his tent, looking at a few maps, when he heard his captain, Vendaro, outside, requestin to come in.
"Enter." Ringaard said in a bored, dull voice.

"Sir, the last town was yet again a failure. No sign was found of The Seal." Vendaro said seriously.

"WHAT?!?!?!" Ringaard's anger was white hot again. He took his sword and swung, leaving a bloody lind on Vendaro's left cheek. Vendaro hadn't moved, nor had he flinched away. He had just continued staring streight ahead. "I grow impatient with this search. It's been a year already, and still we have no luck." Ringaard started pacing behind his desk. Ringaard would never express his worry of the king to anyone, but that was a dominating anxiety every day they spent searching.

"Sir, if I may make a suggestion to you... We could try more coastal villages. Either that or we could hire a spy to find it for us..." Vendaro said, attempting to calm him down. He was one of the few within the troop that actually knew the name for what Ringaard was searching for. He'd served under him for the past 11 years and was extremely loyal to him. Even to the point of similar personalities.

"Hmf. If I did that I would be admitting I was wrong, now wouldn't it? I refuse to do so." Ringaard said moodily. "Leave me. I have much to ponder and consider."

"Yes, my lord." Vendaro said curtly, then leaving. Ringaard would never do anything suggested to him, unless as a last resort. That much he knew from the many years with him. He then turned to go into the medical tent for bandaging. There was 4 in there already. Two had been victems of Ringaard's wrath after he had joined back with them after the village they had searched that morning. No one never knew what happened, but he had been in a rage. The other two had been injured in the last town, after a few villagers tried to protect their homes. As punishment, they had been slain.
 
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They entered the house, "Hello?" Teresa called, "Is anyone here?"
"Who are you?" a man from behind Teresa said. "Um, is the bard here?" She asked politely. "That would be me..." The man said "...What do you want?"
"I-I was wondering if you could tell us anything about the...th-the legend of the seal."
"Why do you need to know this?"
"Well...we were just curious"
" I see...well, I really know nothing of the sort, but..." He said turn his back to her and Liviella.

Teresa glanced at Liviella, indicating that she didn't know what to say next.
 
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Liviella, sharp eyed, decided to tell the truth. "We can tell you the real reason we want to know, but you are going to have to keep it secret and to tell no one."

The man, sensing the graveness in her tone, agreed.

She sighed before starting in. "As you have brobably heard, Ringaard, the king's 'right-hand man' has been going from town to town. He's searching for The Seven Stared Seal. All I can say about it is that if he found it, we could all be in terrible danger. We merely want to find it before he does. Now, there is a far less known rumor that the Elves made that Seal, so we want to return it to them for safe keeping."

The man nodded, understanding. "I'm sorry, but all I know is what is in the legend and what common sense tells me. If you want to find The Seal, I would suggest looking nearer the ocean... I doubt that the stubborn, stupid Ringaard would have checked there yet."

"Yes, thank you. Now, excuse us..." Liviella said.

"Wait. Don't you want to stay for tea? Maybe some pastries?" the bard asked, kindly.

Liviella hesitated. "What do you think Teresa?" she whispered.
 
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Liviella, sharp eyed, decided to tell the truth. "We can tell you the real reason we want to know, but you are going to have to keep it secret and to tell no one."

The man, sensing the graveness in her tone, agreed.

She sighed before starting in. "As you have brobably heard, Ringaard, the king's 'right-hand man' has been going from town to town. He's searching for The Seven Stared Seal. All I can say about it is that if he found it, we could all be in terrible danger. We merely want to find it before he does. Now, there is a far less known rumor that the Elves made that Seal, so we want to return it to them for safe keeping."

The man nodded, understanding. "I'm sorry, but all I know is what is in the legend and what common sense tells me. If you want to find The Seal, I would suggest looking nearer the ocean... I doubt that the stubborn, stupid Ringaard would have checked there yet."

"Yes, thank you. Now, excuse us..." Liviella said.

"Wait. Don't you want to stay for tea? Maybe some pastries?" the bard asked, kindly.

Liviella hesitated. "What do you think Teresa?" she whispered.
 
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"No." Teresa said under her breath "We don't have much time till Ringaard destroys the next town."


"I'm sorry but we really should go." Teresa said to the man "It was nice to meet you."
"Well, ok. have a safe trip"

Teresa waved goodbye as she walked out the door. "Come on Liviella, we better hurry." She said getting on Maylin.
 
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((At least state the reason you're leaving... [and sapphire, if they find out about it too soon, it'll end too fast. My reason for trying to delay more information. In the books, they spent a fair amount traveling. We should too.]))
 
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