I'm jealousy for the gospel. That's all.
The bargaining with god in the first paragraph of his story is not gospel Christianity. It's the antithesis of of. It might take a bit of discernment to see the problems in the story, so I'm sure that many people read "God" or "Jesus", and then proceed to read on without a discerning eye.
Discernment is absolutely crucial. As Matthew said in Chapter 7:
"Beware of false prophets, which come to you in sheep's clothing, but inwardly they are ravening wolves. Ye shall know them by their fruits. Do men gather grapes of thorns, or figs of thistles? Even so every good tree bringeth forth good fruit; but a corrupt tree bringeth forth evil fruit. A good tree cannot bring forth evil fruit, neither can a corrupt tree bring forth good fruit. Every tree that bringeth not forth good fruit is hewn down, and cast into the fire. Wherefore by their fruits ye shall know them."
So let's have a brief glance at my fruits:
1) I began before my fast with what I thought was a bargain with God that ended up as a revelation of truth as to what is important (love for all others) as opposed to what I wanted (to see demons, which turns out is something very unpleasant that I, in fact, do not want).
2) What began as a pagan tradition (and how many of us can truthfully state that every petition we've ever presented before the Almighty contained no elements of impurity or unholiness?) ended in an elimination of all of my false pagan gods (television, movies, novels, secular entertainment, alcohol, material concern, fornication, etc. )
3) Whereas before my fast I likely would have responded to you in anger, defensiveness, or sarcasm I am now driven by a Spirit of kindness, love, and concern.
I would also like to point out again, that Christ said not IF but WHEN you fast. He also said that after the bridegroom departs His disciples WILL fast. So if by "bringing you closer to God" you mean "in compliance with His direction" then the answer to your original inquiry is yes.
I again thank all for your graceful discussion!