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Time for a new Add-On
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Setting:The year is 3015 and the polar ice caps have melted, leaving the whole Planet a big ocean. So now people live in underwater cities and on boats.
Plot:There are evil Parites trying to steal everything and rule the world.
sides:You are either a pirate, or someone who fights them. You can also be a inocent bystander.
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Name:Tret
Gender:Male
Age:24
Vessel:A small, fast boat with a gernade launcher.
Apearence:Tall, slim, short brown hair, blue eyes. Normally wears a white T-shirt and jeans. Sometimes a jacket.
Side:He fights the pirates but will raid ships fr food and suplys if needed.
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Tret was Going throught the occean when he saw a pirate ship invading a small boat. He sprang into action byt laoding he gernade launcher and firing. The gernade landed inside the pirate boat and it sank. Tret went to see if the small baot was all right.
 

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Katherine looked out onto the water from the shore. She saw Tret's boat out there and started glaring at it. Tret was her worst enemy. She had gotten in many long arguments with him back in their school days, and she hadn't really ever liked him.

She turned away from the shore and started walking off to her house. She had work to do if she was going to prove that he was indeed one of the evil hooligans trying to flood the rest of the world left. It had already been overflowed with water, and what had been left was a very small part. She entered through a door and into an underwater city. She began to think of ways to prove her theory.
 
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Real Name: Marco Wright
Nickname: Mad Marco
Age: 30
Gender Male
Height: 6,5
Description: Black Hair, Green eye (lost one in a battle)
Alliance: Pirate
Ship: The DoomGiver (an old Oil Tanker propelled by sails and slaves)
History: Just a Pirate trying to make a dishonest living

Marco stood on deck of the DoomGiver The massive ship loaded with weapons and troops were just two minutes away from the floating city of Minorca a heavily populated but undefended city that would supply him with food and slaves to trade on the pirate market. All right men open the mouth and launch the skiffs and transports. The front of the ship that had been shaped into a mouth lowered into the sea allowing a small fleet of attack ships and small barges to leave the ship and go onto attack the port town. Marco turned to his second in command. Tell the gunners to open fire with the long-range catapults and Balistas as soon as were in sight of the port and make the slave’s row harder. Aye sir. Soon the citizens of the port could see the pirate armada and got their small militia and defenses ready. The Catapults and Balistas fired burning arrows and tar balls at the city as the small ships broke through the giant city gates finally the gates broke allowing the troop ships into the city. After an hour of pillaging the port was burned to the ground and the small pirate ships loaded the troops and captured citizens into the DoomGiver.
 
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Tret was moving his smnall ship when he saw the pirates atacking. He knew that he wasnt large enough to defeat them. So he slowly followed them, waiting for someone else to atack or distract them. He would fight them eventually.
 
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Marco watched as the captives were slowly brought aboard. All right boys put the adults and strong teenagers in the oars room and put the children in the slave quarter so that when we reach the slave ports and throw the old and crippled to my pet piranhas. Marco ordered two watchmen set on the top tower of the ship then went to his private quarters. Ten minutes later one of the watchmen reported that a small vessel was following them. Send out a patrol of three Towboats heavily manned I want who ever is on there brought to me alive. Marco had an idea of who it was but he would have to see. The three ships slowly launched from the DoomGiver and began to move as fast as possible to the unknown ship.
 
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YEAH!!!

NAME: Demeter
AGE: 24
GENDER: Female
SPECIES: She is apart of an almost extinct species. She is infact, a mermaid.
DESCRIPTION: Her fin is blue, the scales outlined with a dark purple. She has light skin. She wears a sleaveless, strapless, glittering puple shirt, that goes down to the middle of her stomach. Her hair is brown, with red,light-brown,blonde,dark-brown and black streaks. Her hair is naturally sprinkled with glitter.
PERSONALITY: Friendly to practically everyone. Doesn't know the difference between the pirates and the good guys, so she trusts everyone, without the knowledge that her life could be in danger.
SIDE: Innocent Bystander
HISTORY: Most of her kind died out when the polar ice caps melted. She is one of the only remaining merpeople in the world.
 
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Tret saw two Potrol boats coming. He loaded his gernade launcher and lobed one in the air, landing in one ship. He then reloaded it, and fired anotherone, landing in the other ship. Tret thought he should probably turn around, when he heard gun shots. There must've been another boat! Tret took off as fast as he could, hoping to lose the ship.
 
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I'm having another character:

NAME: Alonzo
AGE: 26
GENDER: Male
SPECIES: Merman
DESCRIPTION: He has short black hair, the tips are white. Light skin, his eyes are a sparlking black. His fin his black, and the scales are outlined with white.
PERSONALITY: He's friendly, but is cautious about those he does not know.
SIDE: He's against the Pirates, and has sided with those fighting them.
HISTORY: Has traveled on his own, thinks he is the last of his kind.


Alonzo sighed as he entered the, almost deserted city. Am I late? He thought. He swam around a while, looking for any sign of anyone.


Can someone post?
 
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I might add a character, or might not.

~ﺄﺅﺆﺇﺈﺉﺊﺋﺌ~ﺱﺲﺳﺴﺵﺶﺷﺸ~

The dark waters of the still ocean stretched before the prow of the Bloodwake, spilling from the sluecegates at the back in a steady stream of icy water.

The Bloodwake was returning!

The clouds hung sullenly about the masts, blotting out the stars. Creele grinned evilly. It was just as well. The ship was not huge. But the legends were. Creele bared his teeth in a wicked smile.

"S'death!" he whispered, and prowled down the staircase to the lower deck, lined with chained oarslaves. He spat on them and lashed them with his whip. Two fell outwards and were lost in the millpond water. Froth bubbled to the surface and then a dorsal fin rushed into sight.

Creele did not smile with his mouth, but with his eyes. The other slaves rowed with all their might, cowering from his whip. The two in the water would not make sunrise.

Bloodwake had returned!

~ﺄﺅﺆﺇﺈﺉﺊﺋﺌ~ﺱﺲﺳﺴﺵﺶﺷﺸ~

Okay, kind of stupid.
 
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Tret had his boat floored. He was slowly escaping the pirates. He just kept going. He wasnt paying atention to where he was driving. His boat hit a big rock. He went flying into the water, losing contiosnis. He slowly sunk.
 
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Captain Patrol Boat's 1 and two have sunk all hands are dead Patrol boat 3 has captured the single person on the ship. So who is it? Sir it's the pirate hunter Tret. Good put him in the torture chamber i'll have fun with him later prepare the troops to raid another port head twords New Port Royal.
 
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Tret woke up in a small cell. He looked around the room. He saw some bloody tools and such. He was'nt scared. He knew he could get out of this mess. He reached down to his left boot heel and slid it off. He pulled out a small handheld laser. He aimed it at the lock and melted it. He slowly opened the door. He jumped to the floor and slowly exited the room, heading toward the cargo bay. He hoped his ship was there.
 
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Tret was now in a full out run. He had been spoted. He was just to fast for the guards. Tret could see the docking bay door. He was almost there. All of a suddon a great drogan can out of nowhere infront of Tret. It started to shoot fire. Tret was able to dogde it all. He could'nt do it for long he knew. He had to do something to even his odds. Tret looked up and saw one of those fire pipe things. He aimed his laser at it and fired, shooting water every where. The dragon faltered, but was not defeted. Tret saw a fire extinguisher. She grabbed it and threw it into the dragons mouth. It exploded and the dragon disapeered. Tret openeds the doors tgo the docking bay and found his ship. He bourded his ship and took off.
 
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Demeter swam around, just below the surface. She felt something was seriously wrong. She silently popped her head above the water, and then she saw it! Or was it a her? She didn't know. There, in front of Demeter was a girl, around the age of sixteen. She was sitting on a small rock, the tide nearly covering the rock. Demeter aproached her. The girl turrned and screamed.
"It's okay! I wont hurt you." Demeter said softly. The girl looked at her, tears in her eyes.
"What happened?" Demeter asked.
"My boat flipped over." she said hesitantly.
"If you get on my back, I'll get you to shore."
The girl nodded. She slowly got onto Demeter's back, and sped off, being careful not to go under. She knew humans couldn't breathe under water, like she could. After about an hour, they reached the shore.
"Thank you Demeter! You saved my life." The girl, named Kalika said.
"If you ever need me again, just ask." Demeter said, and swam off. Little did she know of two black eyes watching her.
 
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