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"Um, hello?!?" Tek said. "Who's got the ship, here? Stargazer is as fast as they come, and reliable, too!" As Tek laid a hand on a coupling, it fell off, and Tek's cheeks colored.
"Well....it's 99% reliable, anyway. Every ship needs maintenance every so often, and I'm only a one person crew. Seeing as I'm involved with you guys now, I'll give you a lift. Just don't touch any of the controls unless I tell you to."
Halting his repair of the coupling for a moment, Tek looked up at the sky, a thought coming to him. "Huh, I guess that makes me a Captain, then. Who'd have thought it? Just give me a few minutes and we can be off."
 
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Mel's ears twitched. Who's that guy? "I'm not entirely sure-- I'm reading his mind a bit and he's not planning anything wrong that I can see." Well, at least he can get me home... "Do you like it on Aragithia?" Well, yeah... but it can get boring sometimes. "Really? Why?" The lack of fighting and spaceships. "Is all you ever think about is having fun?!" Well, yeah. Litra mumbled something and walked over to Tek. "So... how fast will we get there?" Mel jogged up. "Wait, we? You're going?" Litra sighed and rolled her eyes. "Yes I'm going. I said 'us', 'we', what more do you need?" Mel blushed. "Uh... why?" Litra looked away. "Well if I don't come you're going to get yourselves killed. So I'm going to make sure you people don't get massacred."

"Oh..." Mel inched away as Litra started looking at the ship. "So this is the Stargazer? What a hunk of junk. Can't you at least paint it or something? Do I really have to be seen in this thing?"
 
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Querrot clomped over to Tek's ship. "I'll come as well. I've been waiting to get off this boring planet all my life - I'm not going to miss this chance."

Aden grinned, smirked and sort of grimaced, all rolled into one, as if he couldn't decide whether to laugh. "I think I can carry one of you, if you would rather not be in the ship when other space travelers look at its hull. I will travel to Aragithia another way."
 
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Miranda nodded to Aden. "I always hated flight of any form, but especially mechanical. I'll come with you." Mel nodded to Miranda and hopped over to Querrot. "So... you're name's Querrot? That's a cool name. I think I met someone named Querrot before... or maybe his name was Yorret? I can't remember." Litra continued insulting the integrity of the Stargazer. "Seriously, I think a bright blue, or maybe red, green? It's just plain ugly this way."
 
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Wondering how he knew his name, Querrot looked inside his brain. It didn't mean much to him, though - he wasn't a mind reader, just a space reader. All he saw was a bunch of neurons. Trying hard to remember which part of the brain governed memory, he began keeping track of the wild activity of Mel's neurons. His face began to twitch behind his mask, and he forgot to respond. But he didn't learn much.

Aden called to the others, "Let's go, then." Not knowing Miranda's name, he waited for her to come over by him before he would talk to her directly.
 
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"Wha-wha-what?!?" Tek's reply about the comments made of his ship was. "This HUNK OF JUNK has seen more battles and close encounters than you could imagine. Besides...appearances can be deceiving. Just because it MIGHT look like junk to SOME PEOPLE doesn't mean it doesn't pack a punch. On board is the most advanced technology you'll find in the galaxy short of a Hollowstar-class ship. And besides, if you look weak, your enemies will underestimate you..."
Tek shook his head at his new passengers.
"But seriously, I don't know why you seem to think it looks like JUNK..."
Tek beckoned for them to board, walking up the ramp and into the ship. He would close the ramp from his station once everyone is in.
"And as far as speed goes," Tek added as an afterthought. "You'll find none faster that can go head to head with an Imperial-class starship...and win."
Tek failed to mention that he had used viruses to tear their systems apart, but that didn't really matter.
(In case you haven't noticed, Tek can be a little prideful about certain places and his personal effects, especially his inventions. OH NO...do not criticize the inventions, lol.)
 
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Querrot clomped into the ship, a bit embarrassed by the mention of speed. One disadvantage of his practically invincible diamond suit was that he could hardly move. He walked about half as fast as most people and ran at others' normal walking speed, so everyone else could easily get in ahead of him. Of course, he could speed himself up with magic, but that was more work than simply running.
 
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"And if you look on your left, you'll see the window for the hangar containing the IJ-294 Dagger class dogfighter..." Tek said, acting the part of tour guide. "And straight ahead lies the door to the main deck of Stargazer. We're one of the few rebel ships to own and maintain a fully functional Holo-system, one with complete interfacing and hacking ability, not to mention mucho memory in the banks. In fact, I'm wearing a portable version on my belt now..."
When Tek was still a distance from the door, he pressed the datapad on his belt, activating his holo-display. Three transparent green windows popped up, and Tek, with a few strokes on the screens opened the door to the main deck, closed the ship ramp, activated the propulsion systems, and the sequence to lift the landing gear up upon take-off. He even entered the coordinates of Aragithia into the autopilot, which he had spent hours hacking into the Empire's database for. It had been risky, yet only he could have pulled off something as magnificent as that.
Yet underneath all his arrogance and happy-go-lucky attitude, Tek felt like his heart would never fully recover from the death of his crew...his family, as he had come to call them.
 
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Wondering how she knew his name, Querrot looked inside her brain. It didn't mean much to him, though - he wasn't a mind reader, just a space reader. All he saw was a bunch of neurons. Trying hard to remember which part of the brain governed memory, he began keeping track of the wild activity of Miranda's neurons. His face began to twitch behind his mask, and he forgot to respond. But he didn't learn much.

Aden called to the others, "Let's go, then." Not knowing Miranda's name, he waited for her to come over by him before he would talk to her directly.
((It was actually Mel that was talking to Querrot. :sorry:))

Mel tapped Querrot's knee. "Mr. Querrot? Are you okay?"

Litra rolled her eyes. "I doubt this thing can even keep us up there long enough to fight somebody. But whatever, I'm not getting on this pile of scrap. Miranda, trade places with me." Miranda nodded and walked over to Tek. "I'm sorry she's being nasty, we've had a rough few hours." Litra stamped her foot. "Don't apologize for me!" Miranda sighed and walked onto the Stargazer.

Litra strode over to Aden. "We going or what?"

Mel continued tapping Querrot's knee." Mr. Queeeeeeeeeeerrooooooooooot? Are you in there? We have to go!"

Litra snapped at Mel, "Shut up! He's probably trying to think! Sheesh, you're worse than Eltii! Which, by the way, where were he and that other fellow headed?"

Mel shrugged. "I don't know. Ethian'll do whatever it takes to get his money, so they could be anywhere by now."

Miranda peeked out of the ship's entrance. "We could always trace their energy readings."

Mel shook his head. "We have to get back to Aragithia. Ethian can handle himself just fine. If I know my buddy, he won't make more than a slight detour before getting home."

Litra screeched angrily. "I want to get off this rock already! Let's GO!"
 
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Aden grabbed Litra with his whole arm, circling his right arm around her back and through her armpits for a better grip. Clutching her to his side, he gave the command "Angels' Feet," and rocketed straight up into the sky, reaching outer space in less than a second and dragging Litra with him.
 
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Mel had flown out of his seat, holding onto the back of it for dear life. "Rotten seatbelts! Aren't good for anything!" Miranda reached over and grabbed Mel and held onto him like a baby in her lap. "And that's why I wasn't going on that piece of junk." Litra giggled in Mel's mind as Mel sighed and rolled his eyes.

Miranda lifted Mel's wrist. "You got cut! What did you get cut from? The seat?!" Mel shrugged with a wide grin as Miranda ripped part of her sleeve off and wrapped it around Mel's wrist. "You're going to be a handful, aren't you?" Mel shook his head. "Two handfuls." Miranda sighed. "Just what I need." Mel tapped Tek on the shoulder.

"Are we there yet?"
 
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"We'll get there when we get there!" Tek said, smiling. Then he sighed sorrowfully. "That's...that's what Captain always said...But, it'll take a few days, so I'll show you to your rooms in the quarters.....you....may have to clean out a few of the rooms....no, no, I'll do it. They were my crew...."
Tek got up to do just that once they left the atmosphere of the planet and had entered warp.
 
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Act II: Heart of the Empire

The World:
Hollowstar is a perfectly spherical iron ball, covered by fifty feet of soil. While the "planet" rotates, it has no sun. Instead, the planet is lit by a huge glowing forcefield that causes an endless day. Due to the omnipresent glow, the sky on Hollowstar is yellow.
Besides providing light, Hollowstar's force field sometimes serves to keep out intruders; however, passing the force field is not terribly difficult, due to the need to let a constant stream of Hollowstar ships enter and exit the planet.
The population of Hollowstar is largely reclusive, making their homes in random unpopulated regions. Decent-sized towns exist, but there are no major cities on Hollowstar. Two palaces stand tall over the Hollowstar landscape: the Gold Palace, former home of Algen Galvin and now home to the Black King, and the slightly smaller Black Palace on the opposite side of the planet, which has been abandoned ever since the Black King moved into the Gold Palace.

The Empire:
The golden age of Hollowstar has ended, but the world lives on, and has become a mighty empire that enslaves worlds with its superior magical science. Algen Galvin is dead, and the vile emperor is Janem, the Black King, son of Melchas, the Silver King.
This story differs from Basilicus at the destruction of Hollowstar Proper. Hollowstar is not destroyed, and instead follows this storyline.

Characters in this act:
 
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Lance collapsed onto his bed, and fell asleep instantly...
It had been a tiresome day, checking into Hollowstar under the assumed name of Jack Dannison, but the Militia's main man for altering interstellar passports had been true to his word. He had been able to check in without more suspicion than was already given to outsiders, and he had been able to sneak in all the stuff he would need. They had a man here already, who had been running a small apartment-style place, a cover necessary for such a haven for the Militia.
Though why Lance was there on Hollowstar, he did not know. He was supposed to be taking out the Bruthalian Empire, the reason he had joined the Martyr Militia in the first place. But you didn't disobey orders and live, either.
When Lance had fully rested, he would go over his orders and begin his mission of both assassination and saboutage.
"For Janey..." he muttered in his sleep, nightmares of his childhood torturing him through the night...or what could be counted as night on Hollowstar...
 
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Iban continued steadfastly onward, traveling at first at the slow speed of sound, but as he picked up space debris he accelerated close to the speed of light. Iban changed course as he went, circling toward a large, uninhabited planet by the name of Saderinis. It was a day's journey of intense monotony - a day in which Iban's computer mind idled meaninglessly and wasn't bothered in the slightest. At Saderinis, Iban aimed directly for the core, diving into the center of the great gas giant and using its energy to slow himself down close to the center. The that point, only a thousand feet out - nearly touching a solid core of the planet - he took violent action. Absorbing the entire gaseous mass of the planet, he poured the energy into the small stone core, increasing its mass past the critical point and turning it into a black hole. Iban went still further, coordinating the fall of energy as only a computer could, and using the immense gravity to drive a tunnel through space-time. In the few seconds the wormhole lasted, Iban dove in, joining the stray energy in streaking out of a small white hole that formed not forty thousand miles from Hollowstar. Ricocheting off the Third Kingdom, Iban dove toward Hollowstar Proper, which was cunningly disguised as a star.

Unflinchingly, Iban dove directly into the blinding force field, hurling off part his body in a huge wave of energy that sliced cleanly through the barrier. Hollowstar's force field reacted, filling in the gap with an electric surge that created a bolt of lightning in both directions through the hole, creating a crater on the ground within and creating a solar flare without that would be visible from light-years away. Iban dodged this bolt, circling sideways and plowing through the soil in a long quadratic curve before rising five feet above the ground and hovering.

This was not the place to give his ultimatum. Iban could see no life within a hundred miles. Picking a direction at random, he set off.

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"What was that?" Janem, the Black King of Hollowstar, stood before a control terminal, gaping at the energy readings and visual. Something had punched clean through the ancient force field - a feat that Janem had assumed impossible - and the counterblast was of a power that Janem had never seen in any arena battle. A blue bolt of lightning cut through a yellow surface, viewed from both sides. Streaks of flame covered a fortunately uninhabited area, and Janem was suddenly struck with the thought that the instruments he had long taken for granted must be even more amazing to pick this up properly.

"He's back." Gresholm, chief adviser to the king of Hollowstar for longer than anyone could remember, turned to look at the screen.

"Who?"

"Iban."

"Iban? I haven't heard much about him..." Janem blanched. "I heard that he was made by the Gold King, yet he was greater than his creator. He destroyed a thousand worlds and not even the King's own forces could oppose him."

"You heard wrong. Algen took a strong interest in this. Iban destroyed only eighty-four worlds, and he was not greater than his maker. I call him the Final Sword of Hollowstar. Hollowstar will never make anything more deadly - but did you ever hear that he fled from Hollowstar?"

"I thought he left to destroy a world. Why..." Suddenly it dawned on Janem. "Why didn't he destroy Hollowstar?"

"Because he would have died. Iban did not defeat all of Algen's machinations in pitched battle. He knows when to retreat."

"Who drove him away?"

"I did."

Janem looked back at the screen, which now registered a repaired force field over a scarred landscape, dug down to deep scars in the iron core of the world. Icons on the sides offered to replay the attack animations on demand. "Can you do it again?"

"I haven't changed."

Janem looked at Gresholm, puzzled, but he quickly caught on. "Has he?"

"He must have. According to the original design, he shouldn't have been able to destroy more than one inhabited planet every eight years. In his most destructive period, he averaged three per year over a period of three years."

"What will it take to destroy him?"

"Could you kill Algen?" Gresholm's tone became slightly mocking as he called attention to the superiority of his previous master, whose engineering genius had held off the army-building sorcerer Melchus and the military genius Miran. Janem's evil was comparable to that of his father Melchas, but his skill wasn't.

"Don't remind me of him. You could kill him, couldn't you?"
Gresholm hesitated. "Yes, I could have."

"Then kill Iban!"

Gresholm nodded. "Will try."

Janem stared at Gresholm's retreating back, then as the door shut, Janem walked over to another terminal. He was becoming more and more amazed with the work of the First King, and he was going to try something. This was the Region Definition terminal, meant for populating planets after the heavy worldbuilder did its work. Janem hesitated. He had no idea how the controls worked. Oh well, it probably understood the common tongue, just like everything else in the palace. Sometimes Janem wondered why the floor didn't make wisecracks. Maybe it was because one of the walls actually did.

Desperately hoping that this particular machine was friendly, Janem ordered, "Turn Iban into a floor tile."
 
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Ethian was too skeptical to follow Iban through the wormhole. Great, now I'm stuck. What now? "Why do you worry so much, Ethian Eltii? Is not even someone controlling time itself enough to ease your mind?" The Time Lord was behind Ethian, floating. "Time is stopped, go, you will not age, and the second you move forward you will arrive on Hollowstar." Ethian nodded and dove forward, landing feet-first on the surface of Hollowstar. "You devils captured my world," he gritted his teeth, "And now I'm going to destroy yours. But first..." Ethian felt Iban moving, and smiled wickedly. "You're not getting away from me this time, and neither is my money!" Ethian ran at lightspeed, easily catching up to Iban. "Now, where were we?"

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From the other side of Hollowstar, the energy readings of Iban and Ethian came up on a specially-made energy-reader. The place was dark, and rightfully so, the Black Palace was its title, and it was indeed black, at least on the inside. "He's here, finally." The voice was light and of the female persuasion, and a small laugh could be heard, if anyone else was there to hear it. "All the time of waiting for him to come here has finally paid off." The sound of a gun being cocked echoed through the halls of the Palace. "Everything's going just as planned."
 
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"...just as planned..." Lance muttered, the still smoking barrel of his rifle one of the few pieces of evidence in the recent assassination. He had been a minor noble, when he was alive.
Beating a hasty retreat, Lance stuck to the shadows until he reached his apartment.
Later Lance checked off the list on the wall, next to a map of the local area and important places of Hollowstar.
"Just as planned..." Lance muttered again, as he circled his next job.
 
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"Error: Bitusapugifashinedipotemovakulerojuyez"

Janem gaped at the screen. The fool computer was making fun of him! He had only a few seconds to contemplate it before another movement on the surveillance screen caught his eye. A massive ripple in the force field... He could only see it because of the fancy motion-description mechanisms in the computer, but the power was incredible. Iban's entrance had only damaged about fifty square feet of force field. This shift, far less spectacular, circled the planet, creating a ten-foot-wide river of power. Whatever could do this to the ancient force field of Hollowstar must be powerful indeed.

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The Gold Palace was nothing much to look at from ground level. In fact, it wasn't anything at ground level - the circular, metallic base of the palace hovered a full six miles up, over an empty field that everyone who lived nearby knew to avoid. On instructions from the central control room, the Gold Palace could come crashing down at any time, stomping flat anything beneath it.

At the other and, the highest pinnacle of the Gold Palace extended another six miles into the sky, piercing a low extension of the force field. This highest room contained three egg-shaped ships. From within one of these ships, Gresholm Galvin entered the coordinates of Iban into the computer and ordered it to track him. Gresholm's royal clearance reached all the way to the master control system for the planet, altering the force field to include a powerful current that picked up Gresholm's transportation device and whisked it away, smoothly boosting the relatively small object to 80% of the speed of light. Gresholm felt no acceleration - every atom of his body was being accelerated at exactly the same rate. In fact, he felt weightless.

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"We were on Poinesta. Now we're on Hollowstar." Iban answered Ethian deadpan, stopping and turning to look at him expressionlessly. "Have you come to defend this world?"
 
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