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Super Hero add-on story!

Boy Wonder

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Okay, I'll post a story once some people join! You can be a Super hero, a Super villain, or a Normal person...

My person...

Superhero name: Boy Wonder (bet you could see that coming!)
Age: 16
Superpowers: Flying, Strength, and laser eyes
Real name: Alex Goodman
Personality: Kind, Friendly, and the other stuff you see in a super hero

People please join!
 
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Boy, I have alot of add-on storys! Hidey hoe.


REAL NAME: Sara Croo
SUPER HERO NAME: Lavinya McGrath
AGE: 15
GENDER: Female
DESCRIPTION: Short, dark brown hair, light skin, hazel eyes, English accent.
ABILITIES: Extreame speed, can speek in any language, and has a secret about her eyes.(you will find out later!)
HISTORY: Her father was an English Capitan. Her mother died while giving birth to her. Her father soon died from shock. No body knows what from. Her best friend,(you'll find out who he is later) lived in India, before she moved to England. She went to a girls Siminry, where she took leasons. When the woman in charge found out she had no money, she made Sara work off her father's debt.
Soon, Sara found out her powers, and was sent to an accadamy, where she learned how to use them.

REAL NAME: Marrco Carissford
SUPER HERO NAME: Micheal Shaefield
AGE: 16
GENDER: Male
DESCRIPTION: Short, dark-brown hair, slightly tan skin, brown eyes
ABILITIES: EXCELLS in mechanics, and sometimes can travel through time, in his dreams.
HISTORY: Marrco grew up in India, until he found out his powers, and was sent to the same accadamy Sara Croo was sent to. His parents, he never knew. They were both killed when he was born. He lived with an English Capitan, until age ten, when he was sent to the accadamy.
 
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Real Name:John McCain
Alias:Wildfire
Age:32
Gender:Male
Discription:Curly blonde hair, red eyes, light skin, 6'2", 232 lb., musculer.
Abilities:Impressive pyrotechnics, can ingulf himself in flames, and can fly.
History:He only has small memeories and flashbacks of his parents. For some reason when he was 16, his parents disappeared and he was chased away by stranger mutants. One got back on his feet and bought his house, he has sworn to fight evil and defend the weak.

Well, there yuh have it, so what's the plot?
 
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Sara walked down the halls of the accadamy. She wasn't normaly shy, but for the past few months, she had been. She never wanted to be sent to this accadamy, let alone leave her father in India. Now, she had to live, knowing she was an orpahn, with no living relatives. At least none that she knew of.
She saw people give her stares, and talking. She just looked down, and walked quickly to her next class.

When that class was over, she went to lunch. Again, she got stares. She didn't know what they were staring at. She wasn't ugly, but she wasn't extreamly pretty. Her father had always said she looked like her mother. Sara had seen many pictures of her mother, but she didn't think she looked like her.
She kept a picture of her mother, in her room. She sat down, and caught a boy staring at her. She just smiled, and went back to eating. But she looked again. He looked very familiar.
She brushed a dark-brown curl out of her eyes, and looked at the boy more closely. He smiled and waved. She smiled and waved back. He mouthed, "Meet me in the hall outside the lunchroom in ive minuetes." she nodded.

She went out into the hall, and saw the boy. He looked to be around 16. He had dark-brown hair, and brown eyes. He had a slight tan. He saw her, and walked until he was about five feet away from her.
"Is your name 'Sara Croo'?" he asked.
"Yes, but how did you know?"
"My goodness, Sara! Is it really you?"
"Who are you?" Sara asked.
"Surely you haven't forgotten me? It's Marrco."
"Carisford? Marrco Carissford?"
"You do remember then?"
"Marrco!" She ran into his open arms, and gave him a hug.
"Oh Marrco, you have no idea how glad I am to see you!"
"I've seen you around here sometimes. I thought it was you."
 
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Okay, I guess Calenlanthir set the plot! Hehehe

Oh ya, I have slick black hair, and blue eyes...

All of us go to this academy and we all meet and start a little group... And we fight evil (Duh) someone can be a bad guy... Oh, and we all try to find out our pasts...

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Alex was walking down the hall and saw a guy and a girl talking and waved at them.

'Oh man! I'm late! ' Alex thought as he lifted off and started flying to class.

"Oww!" Alex shouted as he scraped his side on a locker.

'Need to work on the flying a little! ' He thought.

Then turned a corner and...

"Ow!"

...Hit an open door.

"Alex! What have I told you about flying in the hall ways?" his lady teacher asked.
"Ughh... Not to do it?" Replied Alex.
"Right! So, don't do it!" His teacher yelled.
"Sorry" He said, as he took a seat.
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That's all I have time for! Maybe post again when I get back from Church thing...
 
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Neat post!

The bell rang.
"I have to get to class. I'll see you later Marrco."
"Bye Sara. And I'm glad to see you again." He gave her a quick hug, and ran off. Sara smile, and went to her next class. After that class, she didn't see Marrco anywhere. After school was over for the day, she went to her dorm.
Marrco was sitting there waiting for her.
"Hi. I thought you might some company."
"I couldn't use anything but comapany. I hate being shy. Ever since Pa pa died, I haven't been making any friends. Which is why I'm glad you're here. Now I'll have someone to talk to." Marrco looked shocked.
"Your dad is...dead?"
"Yes. I'm alone. I have no living realatives."
"I'm sorry."
 
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Real Name:Joseph Cailly
Alias:Freezerburn
Age:28
Gender:Male
Discription:Joseph was sentenced to living in an ice form, like what Iceman looks like. Pure white eyes.
Abilites:Amazing ice powers, can control his touch of freezing an object and he can fly.
History:Unknown

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John stepped out of his house and locked the door behind him. All of a sudden, he heard sirens. He ran to the side of the road saw two ambulences, three firetrucks, and three policecars. Jonh inglufed himself with flames and flew up into the air. He looked over where the rescue vehicled were headed and aw a building on fire. For a slight second, he thought he saw a white flash, but then it was gone. There it was again! This time, the flash sat in one place. "I'd better check this out." thought John flying towards the building. As heneared the building, the white flash figured out a man, completly ingulfed in ice. "What are you doing!?" yelled John holding a fire ball in his hand. The man turned around, holding an ice ball. "Who am I? Who am I, why you may call me Freezerburn, but my true name is none of your concern, and your name?" asked Joseph. "Call me Wildfire, what are yo doing to these people?" asked John. "That is also none of your concern, now be gone and leave me alone." said Joseph turning around. John formed a fire ball in his palm. "Not until you leave." replied John. Joseph began to laugh. "Well, in that case, you have to beat me first." said Joseph launching into the air. John quickly flew after him.

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I just made an opportunity for you guyses characters to come in and help. I'll psot the rest of John's battle tomorrow. ;)
 
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Then, there was an explosion that rocked the academy.
Every one screamed as the teacher disappeared, and reappeared out side.

Everyone rushed to the window.

"Cya, teach!" a few guys shouted as they ran, flew, and teleported out side.

Alex flew outside, and saw an ice and fire guy fighting.

"Hmm, fire and ice" Alex joked as he flew to the battle.

"Who to help? Who to help? Hmm" Alex thought out loud.
 
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My characters can fly to.

Sara fell to the ground, when the exsplosion erupted. She looked outside, and saw a building on fire. Without thinking, she flew out the window. She flew over to the building, and saw an open window. She flew in, but the room was filled with smoke.
"Hello? Is-anyone-there?" she asked through caughs. She thought she heard a faint cry.
"Hello?" she asked again. The room was getting blurry.
"Help me!" she heard a young girl call.
"Where are you?" Sara yelled.
"Under the desk." Sara looked around, and made out a desk. She pulled away some wood, and pulled the young girl out.
"Hold on." she said. Sara stood. She got dizzy, and almost fell over. She couldn't breathe. The room was getting fuzzy. She saw a light, and walked towards it. It was the window. She flew out. She heard a scream and looked around. Where was the girl? There! She was hanging by a peice of cloth. Sara flew towards her. The cloth wripped. The girl went soaring down. Sara flew as fast as she could. She grabbed the girls hand, and tried to pull her up. But the weight of the girl was to heavy, and caught Sara off guard. She started falling to.
Suddenly, and hand gribbed Sara's. She looked up. It was Marrco! Sara pulled the girl up, and they flew back to the accadamy.
"Take the girl Marrco, I'll be back." Sara flew off towards the battle. She concentrated hard. Was this a secret she wanted others to know about? Was it worth risking the possability that someone might recognize her? She opened her eyes and spied her target.
Suddenly, a red flame shot out of her eyes. They hit the huge chunk of ice. He turned and saw her. He darted towards her. She did it again. It didn't seem to hurt him! It threw her off guard for just a moment, until she realized he was a threat. She dove under him, but he turned aburbtly, and started gaining on her.
Oh! If only I were better at flying! she thought. He got to close. She turned, and lit her eyes on fire. She shot fire at him with all she had. He flew off. She stopped, but felt dizzy again. She lost her sense of direction for a moment. Am I facing up or down? she thought.
She suddenly realized she was falling.


Marrco stared in horror seeing Sara fall. He darted out of the room, and caught her. He flew her back into her room.
"Are you OK?" he asked.
"I think so. What happened?"
"You fell. How and why I don't know. I flew out and caught you."
 
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John backed away from the guy that had just kicked him in the shoulder. "This is madness, it seems to be an all out deathmatch. If so, then a deathmatch is shall be." thought John. Joseph zoomed towards John. John kicked Joseph in the face, making him tumble down a waise. John summoned all his power. John arched his back. He could feel the energy surging through his arms! Once he finally built up enought energy, John pointed his arms towards the two apponents and opened his hands. Two big huge waves of fire collided into both men. Joseph twisted away a little bit, but the other went plometing. "One down, one to go." thought John.

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Don't worry, Alex won't die. I didn't have your permission. ;)
 
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Thank you guys for joining! :) :hug:


Oh ya guys, I forgot to give the rules! :sorry: :rolleyes: :(

1. No killing someone else's character.
2. Romance is allowed (just nothing inappropriate, but I know you guys wouldn't do that!).
3. You can have as many people as you can keep track of.

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"Ouch!" Alex screamed as he started falling to the earth.

Then, he hovered right above the ground.

'That was close!' Alex thought.

He zoomed back up as some more guys joined the fray.

"Hey Alex need some help?" Someone asked.
"Sure! But, uh, who do we fight?" Alex asked.
"It's easy! Two on ether guy!" One guy replied.
"Maybe we'll be Heros! The girls will be all over us!" one said.
"Sure, whatever. Let's just get these guys!" Alex said.
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Abilites:Can Fly and shoot energy blsts, can also absorb anyform of energy including all of the elements.
Super hereo Name:plaze(pl-as)
History:He has amnesia
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Troy awoke in the hospital. He was wondering what had happened to him when an all white man walked in and told him that the boss wanted to see him. Troy thought that he might find some answers out so he went along.
 
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Kool! Like the Omega Force!

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NAME: Aryana (Ar-y-an-a) Mullison
CALLSIGN: Shyne
AGE: 16 1/2
ABILITIES: Winged Flight (will be described below), photokinesis (control of light for blinding effects, holograms, novas and supernovas), hydrokinesis (control of water in all of its states), meteorkinesis (control of weather).
APPEARANCE: of medium height, she's slim and dark - skinned from her Israeli heritage. She has rich dark eyes, black hair, and great feathered wings with a span of at least 6 metres when fully extended -- they are black feathers with silver tips.
HISTORY: will be told later in story.
 
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