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Coleton: Wha...* Coleton thinks quickly at the moment of precise impact, "Use my opponent's moves against him!" The Spinning Fist made contact, but the spring strike pushed Coleton off balance mid-air, so Coleton, about to land back first on the ground, uses what's left of the momentum of the spring strike to recover mid-air, the connecting blast still forced him towards another tree in the forest, and quickly Coleton bent his legs back to push him self forward off the tree, and He yelled,* Comeback!!!!!!!!!! Fist!*As he was using the momentum, practically flying towards Sachar, and aiming his fist to strike the same area. Thinking to himself, "One more strike!"*
 
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OCC: What a turn of events this round. Finally the action has grind on the metal, two foes giving it their all. Sachar was forced off his game as he had wishfully thought it was go a certain way; then Coleton shocks him at the core as if he had struck the heart itself. Is this the end or more to come?

Sachar: *Thinks to himself, "Embarrassment is worse than the pain; and I mustn't stop."* "Eh..okay." *After being knocked backwards to the ground, he quickly as possible returns to it; pushing and pulling himself up as Coleton's feet press ever so loudly off the bark. A wake-up call to him he believed, preparing himself to stand his ground and not rush with a charge as before. "Let him come as I mightily stand my ground".* "COLETONNNNNN!"
 
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Sachar: *Before contact heavily planted himself to the ground; and knowing another hit at that speed again could end the round, during the closing-in of the attack put all his strength and weight to shifting and digging his feet further as he attempted to sidestep.* "AGAIN, I'm no fool!" *Simultaneously as Coleton's "Comeback First" strike makes contact, his sidestep allowed him to avoid a direct hit at full impact.*

"Eeehhh.." *Though he felt it, it wasn't as crushing on the core as the last; when Coleton's fist grazed across as he slid turning sideways, Coleton continued forward as he were and grabbed his arm; then in the same direction using their momentum of the attack and sliding, in the same direction pulled with all he had and threw him into the forest. A loud thump was hear, as if a tree came crashing down a mile away.* "Stay concentrated, else I could be in for another surprise."
 
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Coleton: "He threw me....What?" *Coleton started to think as he felt pain in him, "I have to end this, but how do I do that without killing him?"*

Blank: *Knowing Coleton's thoughts* "You don't have to hurt him any further, you know what to do."

Coleton: "Yeah, one final technique, Non lethal Overpowered Martial Art! Core AWAKEN!!!!!!!!"

OOC: "Core" is a nonlethal martial art that Coleton created when he was a kid, In the core stance "Ten" no damage is done to the body, but to the nervous system, "Fo" is an attack that stops the nervous system from functioning for an hour, effectively rendering the opponent useless.

Coleton: *As he proceeds to state the stance and attack, he runs using his own stepping method, multiplying his speed by three. Then stops in front of Sachar, and yells,* "Core-Ten! Fo!" *as he attacks.*

OCC: If this lands, no damage is done to Sachar's body, but the match will be over, I want to keep the match going but I want to add to the story, please find someway to dodge this, if it lands at all, it's over.

Until the next round, that is.
 
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OOC: Wow this has taken a creative turn for the better; but not for Sachar it seems. Not sure how he'll dodge it or if there's anything equivalent he can muster in return.

Sachar: *Notices strange movements in the distance from where he threw Coleton into the forest. Dust kicked around as high as the branches, closing in on him rapidly. He think to himself, "What to do, defend or offend; run or stay?" Soon as his thought had concluded his opponent was facing him incoming for the end; without thought, a gut reaction; Sachar immediately lowered himself with a "Mighty Earth Crushing Blow" that shook the earth underneath their feet. It shattered the ground like ice, swallowing them both whole in a landslide through the forest toward the mountains.*
 
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OOC: Wow so cool, I can picture that in my head.

Coleton: "WOOAH!"*Coleton and Sachar were sliding to the mountains.* "Didn't see that coming. What do I do? Oh yeah. Slide!" *Coleton trying to kick his feet up and controlled his movements to try and not be forced by the landslide in any particular direction. Then starts running in place to build up the friction he needed to completely stop, but he was cutting it close because of his extra movements he was headed towards the foot of one of the mountains.* "Made it" *Coleton then stood at the foot of the mountain, and squatted low, then said,* "Core-Se-Fi" *And Jumped his way to the top of the mountain.* "Come and get me if you can, Sachar, we fight here!"

OOC: The core stance "Se" allows for the manipulation of ones own body, pushing it past it's limits, in this case a series of Super Jumps. "Fi" Means "Legs" in Core. So Core-Se-Fi means Core-Leg Manipulation Technique.
 
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OOC: Interesting style you have, it reminds me of Naruto anime show. I imagine Coleton as Rock Lee, a martial artist who's a physical fighter and can use chi (I think it's named) to enhance his capabilities.

Sachar: *Brushed with the rubble at the bottom of the mountain, he dug his way out. Saw something leapt from below into the air.* "What's this--it's a PERSON!" *Squinting his eyes he recognizes it's Coleton as soars down on the mountain.* "Haha, jumping for joy I see." *Excited by the battle from the great surprises thus far; thinking, "How wonderful this has been. Let's not end it too soon."* "Guess I need to make my way up to him." *Runs toward the mountain full speed, as he reaches the very bottom digs his fingers into the side. Immediately like a monkey energetically up a tree, climbs to the top into the air over the cliff's edge landing on his feet.*
 
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Coleton: *Seeing Sachar looks at him,* "You are very skilled! I'm proud to have you as an opponent." *Says Coleton straightening his palms and getting into the Ten Stance.* "Core Ten! Come at me!" *Trying to taunt his opponent to disguise his exhaustion, but also trying to plan ahead for a special move.*

OOC: People cannot fight forever without eventually getting tired, and after putting so much effort into his attacks, Coleton is tiring out. But he still has room for a few more moves. Core is the martial art of the soul, meaning Coleton harnesses his soul to use his techniques. Eventually Coleton will need a serious rest. But let's have fun with the three or four techniques Coleton can still pull off, after that i'm sure the match will intensify by a lot. I hope you are enjoying this, because I sure am!
 
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Sachar: "You too are highly skilled." *Grins with joy at the fight thus far.* "Hmm..." *Interested but puzzled at Coleton's moves; Core Ten?* "So let's have at it, Boulder Barrage!" *Smashes the ground around him, the impact breaks the mountain surface into large rocks and into the surrounding air. As they come up he takes hold speedily of each, spending them nearly quicker than the eye flying at his opponent.*

OCC: Know I'm enjoying, glad to see it's not just me. It took a while but Sachar finally has some creativity behind him as a fighter. The round is nearing but it's getting heating up, I can't wait to see what's to come for two. Either fighter wins, but in the end all who witness it are the true winners.
 
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Coleton: *With no time to think as rocks head towards him at startling speed, relies on his instincts, and instantly yells* "Yi" *and punches one of the rocks into another rock, crushing them both jumps up and lands on top of another one. With little time, uses a new technique.* "Ultimate Core Technique! Crater Fist!!!!!!!!!!" and shatters three other rocks at once by sending them flying towards each other with enough force to make a large crater in the earth. Then quickly runs towards the foot of another mountain.* "My thoughts couldn't keep up, I was running on instinct."

OOC: You're right!
 
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Sachar: *Looks in amazement as his destructive attack was deflected. Not sure if he was impressed or puzzled, possibly both. Notices soon after Coleton bolted like a bullet, not to lose sight dashed after him.* "SLOWWW DOWNN!" *Not to be on the waiting side again, he takes a shortcut with a jump down on the side surfing his way to the bottom.* "Slowpoke haha, guess I win the race." *Stands facing his incoming opponent.*
 
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Coleton: *Not noticing Sachar was already there until Coleton finally made it down, saw Sachar, and spoke and said* "We're at the foot of the mountain, let it crumble." *Said Coleton as he punched the mountain screaming,* "Soul Force Barrage!!!" *Unleashing punch after punch, as the pieces of the mountain fell, one of them falling right above Sachar.*
 
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Sachar: "Explosive Roundhouse Kick!" *As large debris of the mountain came from above, he jumped around upward as spring-loaded with all the force he had aimed at a precise point. There was shattering like glass of smaller debris buzzing across the area, as if flies had invaded the land.* "Good luck, dodging these isn't any easier than bullets!" *Said as he was distracted speaking, some scraped him and blood ran down.*

OCC: What will Coleton do about that hostile environment, literally? It's a rock storm between a hard place and him. Lets see what he has up his sleeve!
 
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Coleton: "What?" *Coleton was scraped by a few shards of the debris, before he had time to think, so he moved by will alone. With no time to dodge the bullet like debris, and no way to blast it apart, he had only one option, and running was not on the list of options. He had to use his environment to his advantage again. Luckily, rocks were still falling from the avalanche of rocks falling from what was left of the mountain because of Coleton's punch, so Coleton gathered himself, and quickly kicked three huge pieces of the mountain that were falling into the debris so that the force of the huge rocks would upset the speed of the debris, but Coleton's efforts were not fullproof as the debris that was shot at him went flying outward in almost every direction, hurting himself, but the damage was less than it would have been, so all was not lost.

OOC: Coleton has the knowledge and training to survive almost anything, though now he is only a human, I commend you for giving him a challenge, now he has to pick shards of debris out of him later. I am loving this! He's heavily damaged by now though, I wonder how this is going to end, it should be epic at this rate!
 
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Sachar: *Thinks to himself, "Now is the moment." While Coleton is distracted by deflecting his attack and handling being hit even though minor; he immediately runs and slides like player to home base under the large rocks and debris. His hope is getting there undetected for a surprise attack to bring the round to a winning score. Arrives at his opponent positioning himself for a leg-sweep to catch Coleton off-guard for a final strike.*

OOC: What's this now? Is this a fight or baseball? Hand me my popcorn and a diet pepsi, it's GAME TIME LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!
 
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Coleton: *Not seeing his opponent's slide kick, but minding his sorroundings, because of the falling rocks. Coleton looks at a huge rock falling over above him, unknowingly ran toward Sachar's attack to avoid being hit by the rock, seeing Sachar at the last minute, and with no time to think, or change directions, decides to allow the sweeping kick. As Coleton falls, taking a lot of damage, he punches the ground with both fists, creating enough force to push him halfway to his feet. But now tired and very heavily damaged from all of the fighting so far, Coleton has only one option left, he has to end this round with a victory once and for all.* "Sachar!!!!!!" *Coleton screams.* "Your the best rival ever!!!!!! But I have to end this!!!!!! I'm weary and worn, let's make this epic!!!!" *Coleton thinks back to the conditions of winning spoken by Blank and picks one. So Coleton limping slowly towards Sachar speaks* "10. 9. 8...." *Slowly counting down till he reaches ten feet from Sachar. Then says* "Hey, did you know? I don't work out at a gym, I'm self and God trained. I'm actually surprised I lasted this long without my usual power...but still to tell you the truth, i'm pretty sure we're both going to win this....because....it's because I can use my soul as power, but there's something I've never tried, this should be fun...." *Then Coleton yells,* "Serious Mode: Till death do we part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" *What's left of Coleton's soul now surrounds his body, and is visible to everyone, giving Coleton an extreme boost of power temporarily. Then Coleton reaches out his hand, and speaks* "I'm overpowered now, it'll wear off in about a minute, it's counting down now. I could end this with my victory right now, but I wouldn't have learned anything.....Will you shake my hand, and call this a victory for....both...of...us.." *Coleton's soul went back into his body, cutting his speech off, as Coleton finally passed out, his hand reached out falling with him to the ground.*

OOC: Coleton's mistake was putting himself into a situation he couldn't escape from. Sachar's victory is unanimous as Coleton can no longer stand, but at least Coleton learned from his earlier mistake in the end, Coleton's true weakness is the fact that he's overpowered to begin with. After seven years of training, he gained power beyond even his own imagination, but he lost it because a mistake, and had to fight with his own soul and training to be able to even face Sachar's strength. Good fight friend!

Blank: Sachar, you did well! Seven points to you! Coleton needs rest, serious rest, so he can no longer continue to fight this round. I'll pray for his healing and I'm sure God will heal him perfectly like last time, I'll heal you too, but unless it's an extreme situation like last time, you have to ask me to heal you, I'm not going to do anything against your free will. The winner is Sachar!

OOC: This match was full of surprises for the both of us, and it was genuinely fun!!! If your ready, we can proceed to the next round once Coleton is fully healed. Until then please wait while I create another Character for Sachar to fight, or you could also create another character for mine to fight. Let's see if we can make this epic as well. Also let's see if we could both find some other people to RP with us. Also sorry for the quick ending, but I did let you know ahead of time that he only had a few moves left.
 
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Sachar: "Coleton if you can hear me, you're a great fighter. Truly inspirational to any who enjoy this art of physical expression from within our souls. I'll heal with rest, while others take their turns in this tournament.

OOC: Yes it was of both surprises and fun! Go ahead with creating another character, I'll do the same. Sure it will be as we build on what we've done, only room for improvement. That would be awesome for the R.P. if more people joined, not sure how to get them though. No problem, it's best not to risk dragging the rounds too long or else the tournament won't advance. All about telling an interesting story from start to finish.
 
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OOC: Linking Blake MacAurthor

Blank: Were bringing Blake into this?

OOC: Yeah.

Blank: Okay...

OOC: Blake, the character I linked, will be my fighter, also the destination, you can choose, since I'm pretty sure unless there's nothing to use in the environment, Blake will survive long enough to make this fun. Of course if there is nothing to use in the environment it will make it a head on fight between two warriors, either way it's up to you.

Blank: The fight will begin after each participant introduces themselves.
 
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OOC: Linking Mister

Plain fields open and flat far as the eye can see; except nearby beach shining with starry sand abundant and soft to the feet's touch; an ocean blue and clear as a sunny day, bathed in warmth as it calmly washes ashore and soothing to those who observe it's beauty.

Mister: "Hello Blake, your reputation is quite impressive. Though have no worries as I'm just as capable in the way of our art. Let's show ourselves honorably, holding nothing from the other in all the blazes of glory; for we're here to testify our training and skills to the people here. Are you prepared?"
 
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