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Saving Atlantis ((Really cool!! New members welcome no matter how far we've gotten!!)

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Everloving

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Rules: No profanity or anything of the sort. Romance is allowed, but nothing inappropriate. Notify me of any major plot twists that you would like to make.

Characters. You can have an Atlantian or a surface world human.If you do not want to make your own character, I'll make one for you. If you do make your own, copy this and fill it in.

Race:

Gender:

name:

age:

appearance:
hair color-
height-
eyecolor-
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)-
weight-

bio:




Settings: We'll be starting out with two different places. One is the surface world, while the other is Atlantis.

Plot: Okay, long ago, the people of Antlantis, a highly technologically advanced community, discovered that they could prolong the affects of aging and death by decades by cutting themselves off from the rest of the world and dropping the altitude at which they live. They set to work creating a dome stricture to encase the city and sink the island. It took centuries, but it soon was accomplished. Anyone who was sick or had incompatible genes was banished before the Eutopia was sunk. The population remained quite high in order to stop genetic mutation caused by relatives arrying and reproducing. There, isolated from the world, they developed themselves and their technology.

That was two millenia ago. Since then, they have created a secondary sun, farms, and a thriving matropilis.

Now, despite the years of peace and the hard work of the emperial council of 9, an evil has arisen that threatens that very existence of the Eutopia.
Karkaan and his men have overtaken the polulation and all they own. He wishes to use the mass amount of weaponry they own to overtake the world and destroy all other beings so that he no longer must live in fear of disease and death, and might feel the sun on his face.

But a select group, made up of Atlantian youths, wish to save the surface dwellers and their peaceful existence that has been so much disturbed by this crazed dictator. There was only one way. The elders refuse to listen to reason: Karkaan has threatened to exile them to the surface if they interfere and their diminished immune systems would not protect them. So it is up to them to create an army worthy of fighting Karkaan's army. For that, they would not be able to gather Atlantians. They were to peaceful, save for those who were now the enemy. No, they would have to go to the surface and return(a journey that could lead to their deaths or permenent exile) with an arm of surface dwellers. Could they succeed?? Would they survive to save their home.

Any questions?? Please join people!!
 
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Everloving

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Race: Atlantian

Gender: female

name: Julisia

age: 17

appearance:attractive
hair color- a blonde so bright, it's almost white- down to her waist
height- a petite 5'1"
eyecolor-her right eyes is a green as the sea while her left eye is a blue as a clear summer sky.
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)- none
weight- a light 101lb.

bio: her father was a councilman, as was his father, and his father's father, and so on since the sinking of the Eutopia. Her father had always wanted a son to succeed him on the council, but alas, his daughter was all he got. Still, she hoped to one day make her father proud and become the first female council member. However, Karkaan's idea of the future did not include the council, or any girl being in power. For that, she dispised him. She will end up on the trek to gather an army to defeat him.
 
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Maul

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Are Atlantian's regular humans, or did they produce like gills or something?

Race: Humans

Gender: Male

name: Michael

age: 16

appearance:
hair color- Black
height- 5' 6"
eyecolor- Green
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)- scar on his right arm
weight- 110 ilb

bio:
Michael was living a happy life. Until he turned 14, that is. A week after his birthday his dad died in a car crash and his mother mourned for him so much she disowned Michael. For 2 years he was thrown around the foster cycle, but once he turned 16 he escaped from the adoption center and ecame a street rat. He learned street fighting fairly quickly, and is quick to fight with a lot of energy. But once Michael gets wounded he starts to fight back just enough to retreat. His friend, Peter, helps him there by defending him and then they both retreat. Peter is Michael's best friend, and he would die for him.
 
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rockerchic

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Race: Atlantis

((I think Atlantians are regular humans and they live in a huge dome))

Gender: male

name: Aden Gareth

age: 18

appearance: pretty good looking, but is always a mess and dirty
hair color- black, hair length is slightly passed his ears, but his long bangs are always in his face
height- 5 8
eyecolor- green
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)- none
weight- 120

bio: His father is also a councilman and has always expected more from Aden. Aden is the youngest of Nine children, but all of his brothers and sisters have grown up. Aden has always lived in the shadow of his perfect siblings. He comes from a rich family, but is considered a troblemaker. If theres a law that can be broken, he's breaking it; he's well known with the police of Atlantis. His father is dicraced and imbarresed by him. Because of his reckless behavior, he was taken to a youth detention facility on the other side of the sunken island.
 
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DragonRider

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Race: Human

Gender: Female

name: Jayda

age: 18
appearance:
hair color- Light red
height- 5'4"
eyecolor- brown
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)- no birth stuff, but she has a belly button ring and a butterfly tatoo on her ankle.
weight- 108

bio: She was raised in wealth, has gone to private schools all her life, and lives in a large house on the beach. She loves to surf and is very good at it.

I'll put more later!!
 
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LuvAslan

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Race: Atlanian
Gender: female
name: Taura
age: 18
appearance: like most Atlanians, beautiful
hair color- reddish-brown, long
height-5'3"
eyecolor-blue-green
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)-none
weight-110
bio: She was born into the middle class and has always respected all life, for this reason, she is against the take-over of the surface world. Her family had opposed her view, thus bannishing her from the house and any contact with them.
 
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fuzzyjesusfreak

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Race: human

Gender: male

name: kudo

age: 23

appearance:
hair color-silver
height-about 5"8
eyecolor-green
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)-an x-shaped scar on his noseline
weight-123

bio: he is a master of the katana and his moves are swift. he fights without mercy but his heart is of gold. he is a great man of his word and always keeps his promise even if its someone elses death wish. He has a distinguishable x-shaped scar on his noseline that he got from a battle with his arch rival, he calls it "his x-of-punishment."
he loves to fish and will survive any sort of danger that he comes across with, as anything that comes in his way is writing its own deathnote. He is always trying to lure the women into his grasp for at least a one night date and maybe into you know where.
His katana is his "pride and joy" of his life. he also has other weapons such as his small handgun, a knife, a few shurikens and a throwing knife, but he likes his katana the best.
hes the fastest runner that anyone knows and can run as fast as a horse. Won many races and tophies fill his room at home. He is going for the "National Runner League of Japan.
He lives in Tokyo with his wife, Shimoso and three kids.
 
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Everloving

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Nice characters everyone. FuzzyJesusFreak, you might want to change your charcter's location, since the other humans seem to be in the U.S. This will keep the Atlantian's visit to one specific location. Let's put them in a state on the coast, say... California. Yeah. Fuzzy, if you want him to live there, perhaps you could have him visit California for something...

Oh, here's the RPG!!

http://www.christianforums.com/t5505255-saving-atlantis.html#post35550013
 
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Everloving

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If anyone thinks they can handle it, they can have two characters. If you want anymore than that, let me know!!

Race: Atlantian

Gender: female

name: Skye

age: 19

appearance: gorgeous
hair color- dark blond
height- 5"4'
eyecolor- sky blue
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)-none
weight- 110

bio: Her mother is one of the leading scientists in the study of modern diseases that are present in the surface world and fears that if any Atlantian were to be exposed to large doses of these diseases, they would face a quick death. Her father was at first drawn to Karkaan and followed him ernestly. But, once he began to radically change their ideas from those of freedom to those of world conquer, he turned against him, an act which cost him his life. He was released from the dome in front of everyone. They all watched him die; there was nothing Skye could do.

Her name was given to her because of her pale skin, which reminded her mother of the clouds that she had seen picyutres of. Her eyes, like the blue in the air, and her hair like the gold of the sun. She has always longed to see the surface sky for which she was named, but knows that the council will never allow her to do just that and return. She dispises Karkaan for what he did to her father, but her mother fears that Karkaan is the future and follows him ernestly.
 
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rockerchic

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I'd like to make another character here he is


Race: human

Gender: male

name: Matt Chime

age: 18

appearance: tall and skinny, pale skin
hair color-Blonde, long a liitle past his shoulders
height-about 5"8
eyecolor-brown
distinguishing features (birthmarks, scars, etc.)- tatoo of a shark on his right arm
weight-110

bio: his mom is a marine biologist so he lives on the beach with her. Is a total surf dude. His dad left before he was born so he never met him, but is happy living with his mom and hanging out on the beach.
 
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