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Royal add-on

Elda Ohtar

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Ok here is an add-on all about royality, It is set during the midieval times. Here are the rules.
1. Very little gore.
2. Romance is allowed.
3. No killing another persons character unless they say you can.

Here is my character

Name: Genevieve Rose
Age: 16
Brief History: She is trying to find out who she is. The rest is all about the court.
Apperance: Very light blond hair down to her waist which is always put up in an attractive way. She has very light blue eyes. Her skin is very fair.
Postion: Princess of France
 

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Emily walked to her window, looking out she saw the gardners tending the garden, she began to think of her life she wanted more to it than what she was getting, sure she was a princess. But being a princess ment no one liked you for who you are. And she so much wanted to be liked for who she was but even more than that she wanted to be loved for who she was. Love that brought her back to why she as even in her room. The King of Spain was trying to arrange for her to marry his son. And she did not want to. She wanted the man she married to be the man she loved. She had never meet the Prince of Spain. She had no idea what she was like. No, she would not marry him and she went to tell her father that. She nodded her head slightly to herself and walked to her door. Opening it she gasped for right in front of her was her brother. A smile was on his lips.
"Am I really scary?"
"No" she to began to smile, "I just did not know you were there?"
His face grew serious, "I heard that an arranged marrage is in order."
A frown came to her face, "Not for long! I'm going right now to tell father that I will not do it."
"Ok, here I will escort you there."
A smile than appeared on her face, "Thank you!"
 
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Name: Prince Lath V'lonne
Alias: Elpadre
Age: 19
Brief History: Disliked from the first holding dominion over others, strongly disliking politics from the first. When he was still a toddler, his mother died and his father remarried scarce a year later, to an egyptian princess, descended from the blood-thirsty pharoahs. She had been living at the palace for some time, before the Queen had died. Above everything, she desired power, and resented Lath, but dared not touch him. After she gave birth to two sons and a daughter, Lath fled to the oceans, and took a job as a sailor. Later, he returned as a wanderer and ranger, living off the land. Above everything, he hates his stepmother, who he believes poisoned his birth mother.
Appearance: Tall, dark-skinned and black-haired, grey eyes & a sense of dignity and challenge.
Position: First son of the King, rightful Prince of Spain.
Status: In hiding, having recieved news from a 'friend' that his half-brother is going to sieze control of Spain and is engaged to be married.
 
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Your character sounds interesting! Ok here is more of my post.
*~*~*~*~*
Emily and her brother John walked tothe throne room where they knew their father would be. As they came up to the doors the guards came to attention and opened the door for them. When they entered the room they saw that no one else was they . John stayed close to the door and Emily walked up to her father.
"Father, I refuse to marry someone that I have never met!"
"But you will meet him. Ho.."
Emily interrupted him, "What! When will I meet him?"
"He is coming today. Now as I was saying, how about you wait until he arrives for you to make your decision."
Emily was quite for a minute and than said quitely, "Fine Father, I will wait."
With that she turned and walked out of the room. Her brother fell into step with her. And they walked out to the garden.
 
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ok I'm changing my characters names
John is now Atienne
Emily is now Genevieve

*~*~*~*~*
As Atienne and Genevieve walked in the garden they talked about when they were young.
Atienne turned to his sister and smiling said,
"Remember when you were little and she fell asleep with your face in your soup in front of the Czar of Russia?!"
Genevieve rolled her eyes and smilied, "You had to remined me!"
She looked at her brother, "That was the most embarrinsing moment of my life."
"I believe it!" They had now neared the front of the palace and saw a carrige driving up. "Now I wonder who that could be."
They continued walking to the entrence of the palace and saw a young man with a cruel face emerge from the carrige.
"Whoever he is I do not like him." Emily said with a look of disgust on her face.
"You do not even know him so how can you say that you do not like him?"
"Because of his face, have you looked at it?!"
John stole another look at the young man and did indeed see that his face looked cruel.
"Wel......."
"Shhhh! He is coming this way."
They both turned to the young man and smilied. When the young man came closer he bowed,
"And whom doI have the pleasure of meeting?"
He looked up at them.
John spoke up, "I am Prince Atienne and this is my sister Princess Genevieve. And whom might you be?"
"My name is Migele, I am the Prince of Spain."
A look of shock came to Genevieve's eyes.
"You are the Prince of Spain!?"
Migele smilied, "Yes, I am."
Genevieve looked at her brother and than at Migele and than back at her brother.
"Excuse me, I have to go."
And with that she hurried to her room and changed into her riding habit and went to the stables. Turning to the severnt she told him to prepare her horse. He did as he was told and brought out a beautiful chestnut horse. The servant that helped her get on the horse and she urged the horse forward. She knew that she should have taken a bodyguard but she just wanted to be alone to think.
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Ok kookaburra I think this would be a good place for your character to enter unless you have another idea. Let me know because I can always add something else.
 
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sure. :D Awesome posts. I will intro my other character later. BTW, what country is your princess from?

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The black saddle-leather creaked as the buckskin shifted, letting one hoof dig into the sandy soil. He bowed his proud head and snuffed at the long grass, then he nibbled tentatively. When no rebuke was forthcoming, he set to grazing with relish.

Lath sat on the leeward side of a great pillar of stone, once fair and tall, now a crumbling ruin. His grey eyes lay on the rolling hills in the distance, covered in a blue haze. Hemlocks, columbines and wild rose grew in a tangled symphony around the pillar, set on the top of a hill, lonely and desolate. Other ruins of its kind could be seen around the area, where many others had fallen and formed a sort of enclosure.

Lath had come here to think, while looking over the country. Behind him, the land sloped away to a valley, steepening on the other side. At the rim on the other side, a castle was set, its sturdy walls rosy in the sun's last gleam.

All to oncet, he heard the clatter of hoof-beats and a chestnut mare came into view around a fallen pillar. Lath jumped to his feet, grey eyes respectful. The lady carried herself like a princess, and the horse was of a quality little seen even in those days. The mare would be a match for his gelding's stamina, although maybe not in strength. The buckskin gelding was several hands higher, and stopped his grazing, pricking his ears.

Genevieve drew up, taken aback by seeing her 'spot' already taken, but Lath bowed and mounted on his buckskin, grey eyes laughing. "I see you like this spot also, m'lady. Don't let me hinder you, or you may find me uncouth."

Genevieve smiled and swung down from the saddle, her eyes tired. "No indeed, don't worry. I have just come from meeting my supposed husband-to-be, and anyone would seem like an angel compared to him."

Lath let a smile pass through his eyes. "I see you have met my half-brother. I would give you my counsel, only it seems you have already taken it, Princess Genevieve." He looked at her thoughtfully.

"Half-brother? You seem older than him."

"Two years, m'lady. He plans on taking over the heirship, only he has to get rid of me first." To her astonishment, he laughed, without bitterness.

"You laugh? He seems dangerous to me."

"Dangerous, maybe. I have spent only seven years of my life in Spain. The rest were spent trying to escape from royalty and heirdom." He smiled again, and bowed in the saddle. "If you would follow my advice," he added, "you would run. Run from the politics of this life, that would drain you and leave you empty. But then, there may be advantages from a royal lifestyle. I cannot say . . . but I am rich enough without blood money."
 
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"What do you mean bloody money!?" Genevieve said with a look of scock and anger in her face. "My family does not kill people for their money! How dare you suggest such a thing!"
Lath bowed, "I'm sorry m'lady. If indeed that is not how your family gets your money than your family is indeed diffrent than mine."
This time there was a confused look on Genevieve's face, "Wait a minute, when I said that I had just come from meeting witht he man I'm arranged to marry. You said that I had met your brother. How did you know who I met and who I am?"
Lath was just about to anwser when up rode Migel along with Atienne. Atienne immedietly jumped off his horse and drew his sword while coming to stand next to his sister. He pointed the sword at Lath,
"Who are you and what do you want?!"
When Lath had seen Atienne draw his sword he drew his too and had it pointed at Atienne.
"Mine name is Lath and I was jsut talking to your sister."
Genevieve put her hand on her brothers arm.
"Atienne, it is true he was just talking to me, please put away your sword. Please Lath put you sword away."
Lath bowed "As you wish m'lady." said as he put his sword away. Atienne also put his sword away. Migel had been siliently watching this whole time with anger in his eyes.
"Atienne! You should have this man arrested!"
Atienne looked at Migel with surprise.
"Why? As my sister has just said he has done nothing but talk to her."
"Not yet, but he was planning too. I have heard about this man he is a killer."
Atienne again drew his sword and stepped in front oh his sister. He called to the guards that stood behind his horse.
"Guards arrest this man!"
Genevieve opened her mounth as if to say something and looked at Lath and he shook his head so she closed his mouth.
Lath did not resest as the guards came and took him away. When he was out of sight Atienne turned around and faced his sister.
"Why did you go on a ride without a bodyguard?! You could have gotten killed!"
Genevieve had her head bowed, "I'm sorry I just wanted to be alone and think." She looked at Migel and saw that he was grinning. That made her mad because she still believed that Lath was a good man. She wispered to her brother. "Will you please take me home, alone." Atienne looked at Migel and saw that he had an angry expresion on his face and was confused. "Of course sister."
He led her back to her horse and helped her up. Turning to Migel he said, "We will meet you back at the palace."
And he and his sister rode off.
 
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Lath allowed the guards to drag him off, indeed, he even carried on a polite conversation with them. He had assessed them quickly, of course, as was his habit. Both of them were sturdy, loyal servants to the King, and would have no connexion with Migel. The thought of his brother marrying such a girl just to gain the alliance of France irked him.

Long ago he had given up thoughts of escaping his brother. A time would come, he knew, when they would have to face each other, and only one would survive. Atienne had surprised him, of course. Lath had not expected to see a man of his temperament brother to the princess. Migel was playing a dangerous game here, and he could not afford to lose. If he made one mistake concerning the lady, Atienne would kill him without thinking about it.

Lath led his buckskin behind him, reins trailing. He looked one of the guards in the eye. "If anything happens to this horse, you will answer for it. If anything happens to me, the horse will go to the Princess. At no time will it be given to Prince Migel." The guard looked confused but nodded.

Soon enough, they were leading him down to the dungeons. Lath did not resist, and he gave them his sheathed sword, under the condition that it be within sight at all times. He did not trust his half-brother not to steal it. Leaning back against the cold and slimy wall, Lath closed his eyes and began to sing softly to himself in Spanish, until he became aware of a light step along the dark hall and muffled voices.
 
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Oh, this is my kind of add-on.

NAME: Brooklyn Moth
AGE: 17
GENDER: Female
DESCRIPTION: http://www.ninecompanions.net/gallery_pics/tttpics/eowyn/ttt_eowyn_24.jpg
http://www.ninecompanions.net/gallery_pics/tttpics/eowyn/ttt_eowyn_18.jpg
PERSONALITY: Friendly and caring. She's trained in the ways of fighting, but is never allowed on the battle feild.
POSITION: She's the younger sister of the heir to England.

NAME: Neera Moth
ALIAS NAME: Esmerelda
AGE: 19
GENDER: Female
DESCRIPTION: http://www.ninecompanions.net/gallery_pics/rotkpics/rotk_arwen_1.jpg
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PERSONALITY: She's a warrior. She's not afraid of death, and would rather die protecting the country she loves, than hide behind a crown. But when faced with a heavy situation involving the throne, she scares easily.
POSITION: Heir to the throne of England.
HISTORY: Her father died in battle, seven years after she was born. Her mother is old, and can no longer rule England. Neera had the weight of the future fo England on her shoulders. She paniced and ran from her country. She fled to France,(or wherever your characters are) and hid there as a Gypsie. She changed her name to Esmerelda, which was her grandmothers name and has lived in France for a number of years. She's earned a living by performing for people in the streets.
 
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Brooklyn stared out the glass window next to her bed. Every morning she looked out this window, in hopes that her sister would return. For years she'd been haunted by her sisters dissapearence, and was led to believe it was her fault. She had left a letter in her sisters room that night, and thought that Neera had left because of what the letter contained.

Brooklyn had confessed that she was in love with the man that Neera was betrothed to. Neera had no feelings for him, or so she had said. Maybe there had been some mutual affection that she had hidden from everyone? All Brooklyn knew, was that she was in love with Edward. But he was betrothed to Neera. Nothing could change that.

Esmerelda pulled her cape over her head, and walked out into the rain. She made sure no one could see her face. Gypsie's were wanted in that area. Most of them were thieves, but some weren't. The ones that weren't were still arrested, just because they were Gypsie's.

She happened to walk by a guard, at the same time a strong wind blew her cape from her head, revealng she was a Gypsie. She didn't run when he came at her, because that would give him the idea that she guilty of thievery. He grabbed her hard by the arm and pulled her to the dungeon and threw her into a small, wet cell.

She had been in this cell many times. She knew the ammount of stones that were in it, she had even named them. She sat down and began talking to the stones even though they never answered back.
 
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NAME: William Turner
AGE: 23
GENDER: Male
DESCRIPTION: http://www.geocities.com/orlimisc/misc78.jpeg
PERSONALITY: He's a fighter, but when it comes to his friends he can be the most loving person you could ever meet.
POSITION: He's a Pirate. What more can I say?
HISTORY: His grandfather was a pirate. His father was a pirate. And now he's a pirate. He's been traveling on the sea's most of his life, but has recently arrived in France(or where ever your characters are. lol) and had decided to stay there for a while.
 
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My other characters:

Name: Sabre Repollet
Alias: Alejandro Sanchez
Age: 20
Brief History: His mother was French, his father Spanish. A true gentleman of the court, he is a trusted friend of both Spain and France, though he lives in France, in a small chateau near the castle.
Appearance: Tall with brown skin and dark eyes from his father, and gold hair and a genteel, graceful appearance from his mother.
Position: King's junior advisor
Status: On horseback, riding around . . . .

My other characters:

Name: Sierra Repollet
Alias: Tiara Sanchez
Age: 17
Brief History: Same as Sabre's, her brother.
Appearance: medium height with dark skin, chin-length red-gold curls, mahogony eyes, graceful. Her tomboyish character and love for the outdoors gives her a healthy, lithe body.
Position: Sister of Sabre, gentlelady of the court.
Status: On horseback, practising secretly with her archery.
 
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Sierra's appaloosa mare tossed her mane impatiently, straining at the bit, eager to run across the open, scrub-dotted land. She chomped the bit, shifting as if hardly containing the eagerness that quivered in the speckled flanks.

"Steady, Fay." The voice was rich and commanding, but softly feminine. The red-gold curls were hidden underneath a grey cloak and hood, her light hauberk of fine silver rings also concealed. Her bow and quiver were more noticeable, however, slung against her pommel. Her long knife and dagger were hardly noticeable, fitting close against her slim frame. Her sword was in its scabbard on the saddle. She'd picked out several riders, and she thought she recognized them.

Wheeling quickly, she raced her horse down the hill. Swiftly, she made out the riders, and halted her horse, in sight if they wished to see her, but out of sight if need be.
 
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