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okay here it goes!
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"Why did you not want to ride with Migel?"
Atienne asked his sister as they slowly rode their horses back to the palace.
"I do not like him and I do not believe what he said about Lath."
For the rest of the way neither of them talked. As soon as they got to the palace Atienne went and talked to their father and Genevieve went down to the dungen to talk to Lath. When she reached the guard she told him to unlock the cell door of the young man that was just brought in. As soon as Lath saw her coming he jumped to his feet and sttod respectfuly his eyes still showes the respect that they had shown earlier.
"Guard unlock the door."
"Yes m'lady."
The guard unlocked the door and she walked into the cell.
"You can go now."
"Yes m'lady." The guard replied as he turned to leave.
At first both Genevieve and Lath were silient than Genevieve spoke,
"What was that all about out there in the woods?"
A pained look came to Lath's eyes.
"Do not worry Lath, I do not believe what he said. I can tell that you are not a killer.
A look of relief came over Lath's eyes and face, and he was just about to respond when in walked Migel.
"Princess you sholud not be here with a killer especially by yourself, go back to your room."
Genevieve wirled around to face him, "This is my palace I can go where I want to. I'm not married to you yet nor will I ever be!"
This time it was Migel's eyes that had anger in them. He grabed Genevieve by the wrist so hard that she cried out in pain. Lath jumped forward to protect her but Migel was faster and hit him on the head knocking him out. Then he turned back to the princess whose face had turned white and pain was written all over her face.
"You will never raise your voice to me agian! And you will marry me or he will die!"
With that he pulled out his sword and put it to Lath's neck. Lath had just come to and stayed perfecty still.
Genevieve cried out,
"No! Let him go!"
"Say you will marry me!"
Genevieve dropped her head and wispered, "I will."
"There that is better. Now go to your room I need to have a talk with Lath."
Genevieve looked at Lath with pain in her eyes and turned and walked away. Just as she left the cell Migel called out,
"Oh and by the way if anyone finds out about this Lath will die."

Genevieve slowly nodded her head and walked up to her room. Just as she was about to enter her brother came up behind her. "Gen....."

When he began to talk Genevieve turned around and Atienne stopped when he saw how white her face was.

"Are you ok..."

Just than Genevieve fell into her brothers arms unconscious.

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Okay I have more but I have to go now I will post more tomorrow.
 
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Esmerelda watched everything from her shadowed cell. No one knew she was there, or even that she heard everything that had been going on. She didn't move, or make a noise. If she did, it would probably cost her her life. She knew someone was coming for her. She just hoped he'd arrive on time.
 
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Name:Sir Martin Fredrickson

"Code"Name:Marty Freder

Position:Spy from Switzerland. Was send to france to find out info. Afraid that nthey are going to invade. Marty is posing as a servent.


Apearence:Martin has long brown hair that goes to his neck.  He has deep tanned skin and is tall and muscular.  He has deep blue eyes.

Personality:Martin is very trustworthy, but has an anger problem and doesnt trust anyone any more.  He broke down after the murder.  Now he is just a shell of his former self.


History:Marty was trained to be a ruthless killer, a murderer. He was trained by the best. He was the best. Untill he killed his leader. It all happened so fast. one minute Marty was throwing his dagger at the enemy, the next it stabbed his squad leader in the throat, killing him. Marty was going to be killed, but since he was so valuable, they sent him to spy on france instead.
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Marty slowly crept down the back stairwell. He had taken the path many times, he would take it again. He was pretty sure that the stair case had been forgotton. It led to the dungon. Marty would take the stair case and look in each cell. The staircase turned into a hallway with a spy whole into each room. Marty would check the rooms to see who was in them, then move on. Sometimes he would find out secrets.

Martin had a shocked expresion on his fase. He had hear a conversation beetween high up people. He knew something big was going on with someone named Lath. Trying to stay a secret, he decided to slip into the next cell. He slowly opened the secret door, and slipped in. He surved the room and saw someone lieing down in the corner...
 
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Lath awoke to the feeling of steel against his chin, and the first thing he saw was his brother standing over him, with the intent to kill leaping from his eyes. Mentally slapping himself, Lath jerked to the side and the blade grazed his neck. His feet shot out and tripped Migel, who slammed into the steel bars of a cell, rattling them loudly in the empty hallway. Well, almost empty. Migel was back on his feet in a moment, blade outstretched. He circled Lath, then swung for the head. Lath dodged. Then Migel swung for his feet, and as the blade swept under Lath, he stepped on the bright blade and when his brother's arm snapped backwards, he lost his grip. Lath then grabbed the handle and slapped aside the flat of his brother's long knife, snapping the sword between two bars and then flinging it from him. Migel threw the knife, but it lodged in the wall behind Lath, who flung his brother away. He turned, only to find a sword at his throat. His eyes assessed the wielder, and he relaxed.

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Sabre withdrew his blade and motioned to Migel. "Leave us, cur." Migel shot him a black glance and retrieved his knife, eyes black and glittering, but he left nonetheless. Sabre sheathed his sword and nodded politely to Lath. "You fight uncommonly well, but I doubt you should have whipped him so soon."

Lath answered carefully. "I did not start this fight, or I would not have finished it."

Sabre bowed his head momentarily, eyes searching the cells on either hand. "I would free you if I could, only I am already smuggling another out tonight, and I would not risk two. Even such a daredevil as I must be cautious." His eyes belied his gentlemanly demeanor, and they laughed at Lath. "I wish I had been the one in that fight, sir! I'll return you to your cell before you are compromised. I will do something if I can."

Lath bowed politely. "I am in your debt then."

Sabre smiled faintly, then left after shutting the cell door.

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"Neera." Sabre spoke softly, tapping his knifeblade against the bars of her cell, alerting her. "Half a moment." From under his cloak, he withdrew a small wallet. Inside was a vial of oil, a small cloth, some wire and some waybread. He gave her the waybread to give her some strength before he set to work. Quickly, he oiled the hinges, then ducked around a corner. A soldier walked slowly past, but did not notice him in the shadows. Then Sabre picked the lock with the wire and led 'Esmerelda' out of the cell, shutting it and locking it. Looking carefully down the corridor in both directions, he saw nothing. Quickly, they ran down, to a branching passage, which in turn branched into several more. For quite a while, they lost themselves in the maze until Sabre recognized his surroundings and led her to a small stair. Up this and along a long dark tunnel, they reached another stair, then another. Eventually they emerged from a long-unused door in the gardens, hidden by a thicket of brush. In the bushes nearby, Sabre dug out a pack containing some lady's clothes, loaned from his sister's wardrobe. These he gave to Neera to change into, back in the tunnel. Meanwhile, he fetched two of his horses from the stables and watered them in the brook in the gardens, waiting for Neera to finish changing.
 
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Atienne lifted her up and called to the guard, "Open this door" nodding to his sister's bedroom door. "Than go fatch a doctor."
The guard did as he was told. When the guard opened the door Atnienne walked in and put his sister on the bed. Than he walked over and closed the door when he got back to his sister her eyes had just fluttered open, and he saw pain and despair in them.
Atienne asked her, "Are you okay? What happened?"
Genevieve knew that she could not tell him anything, Lath's life depended on that.
"Nothing, I just needed some water."
Just than the doctor came into the room and checked her over. He could find nothing wrong with her until he looked at her wrist than he saw red marks on them. He looked at Genevieve and she just looked down.
"I fell."
The doctor let go of her wrist and motioned for Atienne to follow. Once they had left the room the doctor turned to face him.
"I do not believe that she fell. Something happened to know that all you have to do is look into her eyes."
"I know I looked but she will not tell me anything." Atienne hated the feeling that he was having. He wanted to protect his sister, he would have laid down his life for her, but there was nothing he could do.
"You must do something! Find out what happened to her. Now I have to go."
"Thank you for coming doctor."
The doctor nodded and left. When Atienne entered Genevieve's room he saw that she was up and walking around. But her face was still deathly white. Atienne went up to her.
"Are you sure you are okay?"
She nodded.
"Okay I have to got then. Be careful." With that he kissed her on the forehead and left.
As soon as he was gone Genevieve went to see her father. She was told that he was in the throne room. When she entered the room she became stiff. Because talking toher father was Migel. Migel saw her and called to her. "Come here, we were just talking about you."
She walked forward and stood next to him even though she hated even being in the same room that he was in.
"I was just telling your father that you said that you would marry me. Isn't that right?"
Genevieve tried to smile as she replied, "Yes."
Her father smilied, "Good than it is all settled. We will have the marrige next Saturday."
Migel put his hand around Genevieve's waist and led her out of the room. When they had left the room Migel let go of her and left. When he was gone she rushed down tothe dungen. She was just about to reach Lath's cell when she heard a noise.
 
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Dropping Brooklyn.

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UNKNOWN NAME: Karaley(Care-uh-lee) Rafton
NAME: Kara
AGE: 18
GENDER: Female
DESCRIPTION: http://www.nat-sanctuary.com/pictures/gallery/nat_136.jpg
PERSONALITY: Tough and stubborn. Can be friendly at times, but not often.
HISTORY: She is the rightful heir to the Austrian throne, but doesn't know it. She was eight years old when her family was attacked. She was seperated from her mother and father, and while trying to escape her captors, was hit on the head with the butt of a gun. She was hit hard enough, when she woke up, she had no idea who she was, or even where she was. For some reason, she was sent to an orphanage and lived there for ten years. She snuck out one night, and got a train ticket to France and has lived there for three months.
 
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I was gonna have Marty run into Ezmarelda, but since kooka took care of that, I really don't know who the lady lieing on the corner. I'm just gonna make something up, It might be lame.....
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Marty had rushed to the corner where the lady was. When he got there he found out she was just a pile of rags. It wasnt anybody. Marty turned to leave when someone walked out of the nextr cell and stormed away. Slowly Marty krept into the back hallway and then into the next cell. Lath looked up at him in surprise. Marty motioned for lath to follow them. They went into the back hallway and began to talk.
 
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Neera dressed into the clothes and took the reins of the horse Sabre had brought. She mounted and rode next to him out to the countryside.(sorry Kook. I have no idea where you want to go with this, so I couldn't post much. :sorry: )

Kara walked into town, her arms tight against herself, trying to keep warm. She had on a thin outfit, with a ragged coat. She was freezing, and needed a place to stay. She looked around, and found a small hotel that wasn't costly, and had a room. She got the room for a week. That's all she needed, really. She went into the shop next door, and bought a cheep coat. It wasn't fancy, but it was warm, and that's all she cared about. She walked outside, and looked around. She took a deep breath. She was finally in France!

William walked into town, looking at his directions. He looked up, and took a quick glance around. He was in the right place. His gaze suddenly fell on a young woman. She was looking around, the same as he was. She wasn't dressed fancily. Infact, she looked as if she were poorer than the dirt. But she was the most beautiful person he had ever seen. She saw him looking at her, and she quickly turned in the opposite direction and walked away. He felt an urge to follow her, but didn't. Somehow he had the feeling he would see her again.
 
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Erase the last part of my last post about a noise.
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And there was Lath. His face was all bloody and swollen. When he saw her he tried to get up but fell back down. Genevieve rushed to him, "Are you okay?!" He looked up at her and smilied, "I have never been better." Than a look of concern and anger came to his face. "Are you alright? Your face is white. Migel did not hurt you very bad did he?" Genevieve looked down. "I'm fine." She looked in his eyes, "I better go now, before Migel comes back or he comes looking for me. I will send you some food and water later tonight. Good bye."
"Good bye" he replied.
Genevieve leaned forward wiped the blood from his forehead and kissed him. Than she stood up and left. She was just starting to walk up the stairs when Migel came up behind her and grabed her wrist, and turned her around. She gasped and hung her head. Migel lifted her chin with his finger and made her look him in the eye.
"Maybe I did not make myself clear. I do not want you to be anywhere near Lath ever again. If you do I will kill him! Understood!?"
Genevieve noddded her head.
 
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Kara looked back, and saw the guy hadn't followed her. She sighed, relieved. She decided to stay alert. The last thing she needed, was someone following her.

The next day, she walked outside, and saw the man she'd seen the night before. She pretended not to see him, but knew that he'd seen her. She tried to ignore him, but couldn't. Everywhere she went, he'd somehow pop up. She finally went back into the hotel and to her room. This guy worried her. There was something about him that made him seem...dangerous.
 
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Originally posted by JesusFreak4554
I was gonna have Marty run into Ezmarelda, but since kooka took care of that, I really don't know who the lady lieing on the corner. I'm just gonna make something up, It might be lame.....
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Marty had rushed to the corner where the lady was. When he got there he found out she was just a pile of rags. It wasnt anybody. Marty turned to leave when someone walked out of the nextr cell and stormed away. Slowly Marty krept into the back hallway and then into the next cell. Lath looked up at him in surprise. Marty motioned for lath to follow them. They went into the back hallway and began to talk.

And then EO posted this one, even though Lath wasnt there! 

And there was Lath. His face was all bloody and swollen. When he saw her he tried to get up but fell back down. Genevieve rushed to him, "Are you okay?!" He looked up at her and smilied, "I have never been better." Than a look of concern and anger came to his face. "Are you alright? Your face is white. Migel did not hurt you very bad did he?" Genevieve looked down. "I'm fine." She looked in his eyes, "I better go now, before Migel comes back or he comes looking for me. I will send you some food and water later tonight. Good bye."
"Good bye" he replied.
Genevieve leaned forward wiped the blood from his forehead and kissed him. Than she stood up and left. She was just starting to walk up the stairs when Migel came up behind her and grabed her wrist, and turned her around. She gasped and hung her head. Migel lifted her chin with his finger and made her look him in the eye.
"Maybe I did not make myself clear. I do not want you to be anywhere near Lath ever again. If you do I will kill him! Understood!?"
Genevieve noddded her head.[quote/]

Right now I'm frusterated.  I'm trying to get my character incorperated badly, but know ones helping.  I had it ready for Lath to post, but what do you know?  Someone took care of that too!  I'm gonna make another post, can you all PLEASE try to incorperate my character?
 
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Okay, I'm adding on after this post, will you PLEASE incorperate my character then?!?

Originally posted by Elda Ohtar
Erase the last part of my last post about a noise.
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And there was Lath. His face was all bloody and swollen. When he saw her he tried to get up but fell back down. Genevieve rushed to him, "Are you okay?!" He looked up at her and smilied, "I have never been better." Than a look of concern and anger came to his face. "Are you alright? Your face is white. Migel did not hurt you very bad did he?" Genevieve looked down. "I'm fine." She looked in his eyes, "I better go now, before Migel comes back or he comes looking for me. I will send you some food and water later tonight. Good bye."
"Good bye" he replied.
Genevieve leaned forward wiped the blood from his forehead and kissed him. Than she stood up and left. She was just starting to walk up the stairs when Migel came up behind her and grabed her wrist, and turned her around. She gasped and hung her head. Migel lifted her chin with his finger and made her look him in the eye.
"Maybe I did not make myself clear. I do not want you to be anywhere near Lath ever again. If you do I will kill him! Understood!?"
Genevieve noddded her head.

Migel's body sudenly lurched backwards as he was pulled from then neck backwards.  He stumbled down past another man that had krept up.

"Lath?!?"Genevieve shouted.

"No, it is I, Sir Martin" Martin replied.

"Sir Martin?  I thought you were just my servant!  What are you dong here!" Genevieve shouted.

"I came here to spy on france, but I saw you you being mistreated and heard the Migel talk to Lath, and knew I had to interfere." Martin said.

"Than..." Genevieve never finished.  She was startled to much by Martin being flung backwards down the steps.
 
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