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Heres my song you guys. Tell me what you think.
I have a promblem
I can't take it any longer
I've been struggling with this unhappiness
I can't explain it, but I feel it weighing down.
I've been running, but there was no place to hide.
Is there any way that this pain could go.
I've tried to praise, but couldn't let go,
so I'm asking you to hear my simple plea.
Lord I need you now more than ever,
with the pain I'm going through.
I've tried it my own way,
but the hurt is never through.
Can't you see I'm such a mess, I'm down on my knees.
Sorry it took so long, but I've finally figured out.
That your the only one that could ever take this hurt away.
Men me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
O Lord, I'm sick of doing it my own way.
I'm sick of the thoughts that have been coming.
Cutting and suicide, running away to hide.
Lord you said cast your cares on you.
So I'm throwing them out to you.
Catch them and hear my simple plea out to you.
Lord I need you now more than ever.
With the pain I'm going through
I've tried it my own way,
but the hurt is never through.
Can't you see I'm such a mess, I'm down on my knees.
Sorry it took so long, but I've finally figured out.
That your the only one that could ever take this hurt away.
Mend me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
I thank you Lord for waht your doing to me.
I know you heard this plea,
and I know you'll help me.
Just touch me, and point me the right way.
I know you have a plan, and now I can see.
That you've always cared for me,
so Lord for now on help me remember your call.
And when I'm struglling please remember my simple plea.
Lord I need you now more than ever.
With the pain I'm going through
I've tried it my own way,
but the hurt is never through.
Can't you see I'm such a mess, I'm down on my knees.
Sorry it took so long, but I've finally figured out.
That your the only one that could ever take this hurt away.
Mend me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
Mend me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be. Lead me, teach me, guide me, and complete me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
I have a promblem
I can't take it any longer
I've been struggling with this unhappiness
I can't explain it, but I feel it weighing down.
I've been running, but there was no place to hide.
Is there any way that this pain could go.
I've tried to praise, but couldn't let go,
so I'm asking you to hear my simple plea.
Lord I need you now more than ever,
with the pain I'm going through.
I've tried it my own way,
but the hurt is never through.
Can't you see I'm such a mess, I'm down on my knees.
Sorry it took so long, but I've finally figured out.
That your the only one that could ever take this hurt away.
Men me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
O Lord, I'm sick of doing it my own way.
I'm sick of the thoughts that have been coming.
Cutting and suicide, running away to hide.
Lord you said cast your cares on you.
So I'm throwing them out to you.
Catch them and hear my simple plea out to you.
Lord I need you now more than ever.
With the pain I'm going through
I've tried it my own way,
but the hurt is never through.
Can't you see I'm such a mess, I'm down on my knees.
Sorry it took so long, but I've finally figured out.
That your the only one that could ever take this hurt away.
Mend me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
I thank you Lord for waht your doing to me.
I know you heard this plea,
and I know you'll help me.
Just touch me, and point me the right way.
I know you have a plan, and now I can see.
That you've always cared for me,
so Lord for now on help me remember your call.
And when I'm struglling please remember my simple plea.
Lord I need you now more than ever.
With the pain I'm going through
I've tried it my own way,
but the hurt is never through.
Can't you see I'm such a mess, I'm down on my knees.
Sorry it took so long, but I've finally figured out.
That your the only one that could ever take this hurt away.
Mend me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
Mend me, mold me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be. Lead me, teach me, guide me, and complete me. Just turn me into the girl you've called me to be.
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elendil
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hope you dont mind me posting a poem.
About a Poem
Im not really sure about what to write
Should it be my feelings or what I have in sight
I need a good sound prompting to help along the way
To help me write the poem, to get through the day
So I really should start thinking
About what Im going to put down
If I dont then Ill be winking
All my way out of this sweet little town
I dont want my whole heart to spill out
But for a good poem Ill need that no doubt
I could use my imagination, make it all up
Could write about a nanny with a non-existent mop
My minds gone blank, I just cant think
I need to sit down and have a long drink
If you think of anything please let me know
Cuz, Ill be here forever till Im covered in snow
Poem © to Amy Lewis 2007
About a Poem
Im not really sure about what to write
Should it be my feelings or what I have in sight
I need a good sound prompting to help along the way
To help me write the poem, to get through the day
So I really should start thinking
About what Im going to put down
If I dont then Ill be winking
All my way out of this sweet little town
I dont want my whole heart to spill out
But for a good poem Ill need that no doubt
I could use my imagination, make it all up
Could write about a nanny with a non-existent mop
My minds gone blank, I just cant think
I need to sit down and have a long drink
If you think of anything please let me know
Cuz, Ill be here forever till Im covered in snow
Poem © to Amy Lewis 2007
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I like to write poems here are 3 of mine
Creation
You created the sunsets and rises
The orange skies are of you
The rushing waterfalles were
By your word and the
Birds that fly by give us hope
You created the mountains and the seas
Every flower exists because of you
And we know the beauty of your creation.
By Nat
Amazing
You are amazing,
I never cease to wonder,
about your awesome creation.
Why, why me God?
Your rivers run deep,
with rushing waters.
The hills so steep,
you cannot climb.
I just stand and gaze.
The sunrise with orange streaks,
And the night sky like a twinkling eye.
The mountain peaks,
And the blue blue sky.
I will praise you until i meet you.
By Nat
Firey Skies
The sky was on fire,
With orange streaks of light.
My eyes never seem to tire,
Of that beautiful sight.
The clouds like glowing balls,
And the mountains like radient peaks.
I fall down in awe,
I cannot speak.
The sky darkens,
The beatuiful sight is over.
As the heavens open,
The stars take over.
By Nat
Creation
You created the sunsets and rises
The orange skies are of you
The rushing waterfalles were
By your word and the
Birds that fly by give us hope
You created the mountains and the seas
Every flower exists because of you
And we know the beauty of your creation.
By Nat
Amazing
You are amazing,
I never cease to wonder,
about your awesome creation.
Why, why me God?
Your rivers run deep,
with rushing waters.
The hills so steep,
you cannot climb.
I just stand and gaze.
The sunrise with orange streaks,
And the night sky like a twinkling eye.
The mountain peaks,
And the blue blue sky.
I will praise you until i meet you.
By Nat
Firey Skies
The sky was on fire,
With orange streaks of light.
My eyes never seem to tire,
Of that beautiful sight.
The clouds like glowing balls,
And the mountains like radient peaks.
I fall down in awe,
I cannot speak.
The sky darkens,
The beatuiful sight is over.
As the heavens open,
The stars take over.
By Nat
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PeculiarTreasure
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PeculiarTreasure
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As I wait
I often wonder
Will I meet you today
Or how bout tomorrow
I often wonder what you look like
Are you tall dark and handsome like the stories all predict
Or a country boy who plays baseball and likes to fish
I don't know the answers but this is true
I know that I love you
With all my heart
With all my soul
May God keep you until the day we meet
Until I look into your face so sweet
And just remember at the end of the day
That we're one step closer to being together
Forever.
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ONE OF MY POEM
OH WHAT A DAY WHEN WE ALL STOP TO SAY LIFE IS ROUGH, TIME IS TOUGH, BUT DO WE TAKE THE TIME TO SAY HELLO TO ALL OUR FRIENDS AND FELLOW MEN
WE GO ABOUT OUR DAY SO FAST OUR WHOLE DAY JUST PASS
JUST TAKE THE TIME NOBODY WON'T MINE
AND IT DONT COST A SINGLE DIME
SMELL THE ROSE, ENJOY THE BREEZE, PERHARPS THE FLOWERS MAKE YOU SNEEZE
TELL YOUR LOVE ONES HI & BYE
BECAUSE TO LATE WE ALL STOP & CRY
LIVE GOOD LIVE RIGHT
AND LET US ALL UNITE
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Firey Skies
The sky was on fire,
With orange streaks of light.
My eyes never seem to tire,
Of that beautiful sight.
The clouds like glowing balls,
And the mountains like radient peaks.
I fall down in awe,
I cannot speak.
The sky darkens,
The beatuiful sight is over.
As the heavens open,
The stars take over.
By Nat
Stars scattered as
sparkles glitter a stream
Stars too many only
to choose one or two
Stars shall I have them
all!
Silver
The sky was on fire,
With orange streaks of light.
My eyes never seem to tire,
Of that beautiful sight.
The clouds like glowing balls,
And the mountains like radient peaks.
I fall down in awe,
I cannot speak.
The sky darkens,
The beatuiful sight is over.
As the heavens open,
The stars take over.
By Nat
Stars scattered as
sparkles glitter a stream
Stars too many only
to choose one or two
Stars shall I have them
all!
Silver
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To find your way through life all you have to do is follow jesus.
To find your way through life all you have to do is trust in him.
To find your way through life all you have to do is give your life to the Lord Jesus Christ.
To find your way through life all you have to do is follow jesus.
by Paul keeton
To find your way through life all you have to do is trust in him.
To find your way through life all you have to do is give your life to the Lord Jesus Christ.
To find your way through life all you have to do is follow jesus.
by Paul keeton
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The happiest Little Girl
By Godslilgurlalways
Once upon a time
Long Long ago
Once upon a time in a dream
I was happy
Once upon a time that was me
In my dream I was happy
In my dream I had no worries
In my dream it was wonderful
I had no tears of sorrow
I was the happiest girl in the world
It seemed so real
It was once upon a time that
Once upon a dream
Long Long ago
It was a dream of me
In my dream I was the happiest little girl
In that dream I had no worries
In that dream everything was going okay
In that dream all was good
Oh how I wanted to be true
To be the happiest little girl
Having no worries
Once upon a dream
Long Long ago it was me
(November 5, 2006) First poem I wrote
By Godslilgurlalways
Once upon a time
Long Long ago
Once upon a time in a dream
I was happy
Once upon a time that was me
In my dream I was happy
In my dream I had no worries
In my dream it was wonderful
I had no tears of sorrow
I was the happiest girl in the world
It seemed so real
It was once upon a time that
Once upon a dream
Long Long ago
It was a dream of me
In my dream I was the happiest little girl
In that dream I had no worries
In that dream everything was going okay
In that dream all was good
Oh how I wanted to be true
To be the happiest little girl
Having no worries
Once upon a dream
Long Long ago it was me
(November 5, 2006) First poem I wrote
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