Poem Writters Club

[Dena200]

In this club we can post our poems. Commit on each others poems, and encourage each others. I love writting, so if you do too join this club.

 

[WPZanar07]

I'm somewhat of a poet myself. I haven't had inspiration in a while, though, so if I come up with something I'll post it.

 

[Dena200]

Okay Cool,
I'll post one of my poems on here when I get back home. I'm in Minneasota right now and I left my poem book at home. When I try to draw my poem out of my memory I mix it up with a bunch of other poems I have written. lol

 

[WPZanar07]

LOL, I don't do that cuz I can't remember half the stuff I write unless I read it recently.

 

[Jaeh72Kenobi]

heya! i write poems too.. all of them are kept in my computer... be posting them when i have the chance..

 

[Dena200]

Heres one I wrote:
I feel unwanted lonely inside please help me I feel like I'm going to die. You can't help me no one can. No one but my God, He can. He is myh father the strength I need. I'll try not to forget he's there to touch. Touch me when I'm weak, sick, or have a frown. He is my father and his love goes all around.

 

[Jaeh72Kenobi]

interesting.. nice..

I've got nothing religios at this point.

how bout some love poems?

 

[Dena200]

Love poems are fine. Any type of poem is fine.

 

[WPZanar07]

So long as its appropriate to the forums, lol!

 

[Dena200]

yeah as long as its appropriate. lol

 

[Jaeh72Kenobi]

how's this?::

Crazy In Love


I know that I’ve been stupid all this time
I don’t seem to make up my mind
I tell everyone, that I don’t love you anymore
But deep inside, that’s not what I meant to say

I have been a jerk all along
I got laughed at, jeered and put down
I wrote a lot of letters
But it seems that you never really did care

I have been senseless
It seems as if I didn’t see it all along
I know I might not have any chance
But you’re really the choice of my heart

Maybe I’ve been a daft
I’ve been falling down in love
But I never thought that falling for you
Will make me the most stupid guy in the world

I may have been a moron for loving you
But no, I cannot stop
You are one of the few things I looked forward to everyday
It doesn’t really matter

I know this is absurd
But I’ll never give up on you
I have been falling apart, breaking in pieces
I can never ever stop now

I always would be this foolish
Because it’s loving you that make me like this
I don’t care anymore
All I know is I will always have this feeling for you

So let me say this for the last time
I’m very sorry if you don’t like my idea of loving you
But I was nothing before I met you
You know, I love you

 

[WPZanar07]

That's pretty good actually. I kinda like it. I'll come up with a poem soon. It's just I work mainly on inspiration...

 

[Dena200]

Cool.
I like that.
Heres another one of mine.

At First, a little girl,​

Playing house; ​

Watching fairytales. ​

All about a Princess, ​

Who meets her perfect love, her Prince Charming. ​

Then she becomes a teen, struggling to find that Prince. ​

Falling for every boy, who says she’s beautiful. ​

She doesn’t see it’s just a mask, a clever disguise. ​

He plays her like a ball​

Then tosses her off.​

Never thinking about her again. ​

Moving on to the next girl, next victim.​

She goes to her room, crying trying to figure out.​

Am I ugly?​

What is wrong with what I got?​

What can I do to make him come back?​

She walks around, self- cautious. ​

Thinking something’s wrong.​

Her figure ain’t right,​

Judging herself on what she thinks the perfect girl looks like. ​

Wondering if she looks good enough to have a prince. ​

She doesn’t know, that God made her the way she should be. ​

That he picked out the perfect guy for her.​

Maybe she does know, but she doesn’t believe. ​

All her life being told she’s ugly. ​

She starts reading her bible, and realizes that she is beautiful.​

Because God made her.​

God said that his creation is good.​

She is his creation,​

And no matter what playa comes around trying to play her,​

She’ll know.​

God created her special, and wonderfully made. ​

She knows that it is her goal to be devoted to God in body and spirit.​

When the time is right,​

God will bring the perfect man in her life.​

God knows the plans, he has for her.​

Plans to prosper her in all she does.​

She’ll become a beautiful vessel for the Lord.​

Teaching others that it ain’t about their outward appearance, but what is inside. ​

By Danisha Nunn

 

[Dena200]

This poem has inspired me to write another poem. I'll post it on here soon.

 

[Dena200]

I forgot what I was going to write. That proves shouldn't wait so long when you got an idea. LOL

 

[WPZanar07]

Well, if you ever get another idea, write a few lines down on paper if you can, or make it into a hit single that you play over and over inside your head....that helps sometimes for me, lol.

Here, I'll just write a song i wrote down. Songs, if done properly and not like some of today's hip-hop artists (UGGHHH...enough about lust, love, money, or "Da Hood!") or pretenders (you know who you are...), are poetry in themselves.


I see you walkin' up to me
You reach inside my mind and set free
These thoughts about you that make me smile
I haven't seen you in awhile...now go away

Hello--Goodbye...when I
Think of you it's just a lie (Hello--Goodbye)
Hello, Goodbye!
We couldn't work, I didn't try

Just you and me inside my dream
The girl I try to catch with my schemes
While dreams themselves are fairly nice
They give me tons of bad advice...so go away

Hello--Goodbye...what I
Feel for you is just a lie (Hello--Goodbye)
Hello, Goodbye!
We tend to quit, before we try

Hello (Hello) Goodbye...you see I
Can't believe it's just a lie (Hello--Goodbye)
Hello, Goodbye!
We tend to quit, before we try
We didn't work, I couldn't try
Hello....goodbye!

(Rewrote that last stanza....yes! It works!)

Oh, this song is not about a breakup, but about a relationship that never started, because the guy didn't even try to hook up with the girl of his dreams. Story of my life, lol.

 

[gospelgansta]

i really like these.
and i really like your dena. I've written a bajilion poems/songs can i join?

i'll try and put one up here soon

 

[WPZanar07]

Hey, the more the merrier!!!

 

[Dena200]

Welcome to are club. Nice song WPZanar07

 

[WPZanar07]

Ah-thank you.