please help

[Johnny Von Punkman]

i'm trying to get my music off the ground
last month on my soundclick site i had about 800 plays
i now have a purevolume site
please swing by and listen to my song again i'm gonna try to get noticed over there
please help! thanks so much...
www.purevolume.com/rainlikescarlet

 

[Lbiagm]

sure johnny.

 

[Johnny Von Punkman]

sweet thanks

 

[Girl_of_God_88]

I checked it out aswell

 

[Lbiagm]

no prob johnny

 

[Johnny Von Punkman]

i have a new song up on www.soundclick.com/rainlikescarlet if you like what you heard
thanks!

 

[Erichero]

Kiss your sorrows goodbye was pretty cool, and I'm impressed that you've done all the instruments yourself ... really? not on software? That's impressive.

I can give some constructive criticism and say you need to sing through your throat and not the top of your mouth/nose. It's something I had to sort out with my own voice as well. Check where you're feeling the vibration and you'll invariably find it's at the top of your mouth. Move it to your throat and you'll get more volume, feel more relaxed and be able to reach higher notes. Breathing is also important - you breathe by bloating your stomach as you breathe in, and flattening it as you breath out ... your shoulders don't move at all.

Keep it up, bud, and keep us up to date.