our poems (G4MER, xeled, whitetiger, demo) (2)

[demoastanes]

nice list of the main stars lol!

anyway i dont think it will be but you me and jelly bean for a while so my next post will be a poem since i just remembered that thats what this forum is about...

 

[xeledhwenx]

lOL chatting is fine too~ it's been awhile nd its good fellowship and theres much to catch up on!

i have nothing to post...maybe i should start writing poems again so i can earn my stay here huh?

 

[demoastanes]

lol nah your spot is garuinted no matter what
but here is a good one


the four from long and far
through time they've gone
now back again
to reminece and make amends
old friends are back again

gather round we have the time
on the old seat bench we used to climb
reminece about old times
when all four were young
and the wind was cold

now in the sun we bath
and laughter once again be heard
from the mouths of four friends

friends of long and friends of old
gather round the tree
friends of long and friends of old
storys we have plenty

 

[demoastanes]

now that thats off my chest lol
um... lets see i think we should talk about fav books read in the past few years

 

[xeledhwenx]

lol nah your spot is garuinted no matter what
but here is a good one


the four from long and far
through time they've gone
now back again
to reminece and make amends
old friends are back again

gather round we have the time
on the old seat bench we used to climb
reminece about old times
when all four were young
and the wind was cold

now in the sun we bath
and laughter once again be heard
from the mouths of four friends

friends of long and friends of old
gather round the tree
friends of long and friends of old
storys we have plenty

that's really wonderful teehee~ warms my heart and such a nice nostalgic --> reunion feel to it~

books huh? hmmn...i haven't really been reading books for leisure recently lOL. what are your favorites?

 

[demoastanes]

i like the enders series followed by the shadow series which are basically the same story plots just from different angles

also mistress of dragons series and the harry potter

 

[xeledhwenx]

cool~ those sound good yeah i've read and liked harry potter. the books are SO much better than the movies ahaha~

y'know i've been randomly thinking about songwriting recently and fitting melodies to poems/writings that could be converted to songs~ i think this is a good place to get inspired keehee

 

[demoastanes]

sure is lol alright im loosing laptop priliage because of my lack of sleep lol i havent sleept for like 2 days no joke lol

alright ill be on tommorrow some time night

 

[xeledhwenx]

okay please do get your rest lOL~ good night!

 

[demoastanes]

wow i got on late and i have to leave at 12... oh well heres a poem

I stayed up late late and said hi, how you doing?
You said not much, whats up to?
Not much just writing, want to talk?
No im fine, you got a thought?
I told you everything iv ever done
Everything iv ever said
You listened and we laughed a lot.

But lately iv been wondering
All I do is talk
All you do is listen
Iv got little bits
Of what your going through
But never actually had a clue
And iv been starting to think
Every thing I say
Has hurt you in another way

You hide while I speak
And I spoke a lot
And now I ask
Did the things I say
Hurt you inside
Did the things I said
Break you away?

 

[xeledhwenx]

hii there~

oh wow, another great one! *nod* i like how it makes me wonder and i get a sort of longing and questioning emotion from it...i don't know how to explain lOL. did you write this with someone in mind~?

 

[demoastanes]

i wrote it today about a friend that helps me through everything but she shows me nothing of her self and some times im to blunt...

its complicated because were close friends and sometimes we say things so i wrote that to show my feelings

you want another poem? remember i have 200 or so

 

[xeledhwenx]

you think you're too blunt? what do you mean~?

well nevertheless im pretty sure she values your close friendship as you do~ beautifully conveyed feelings there tho

yes sure sure~ i love reading your poems

 

[demoastanes]

lol my poems are nothing special just diff

im blunt in what i say and if something she says is untrue either about herself or the world i cant take that and well i say somethings that sometimes hurt. im a poet but i have no clue how to be soft...

anyway heres another poem

Far from me
The doorways close
Bridges fall
And trumpets blow

Far from you
The day light cracks
The dawn gone black
And shadows pry the night

And far from us
The land falls still
The mountains cold
The sky looms with clouds

But close to us
Is everything
And everything
Is us

 

[xeledhwenx]

ooh very interesting there, nice imagery its also heartwarming in a way~

so what~? different can be special

oh okay i see. do you know for a fact that she's hurt by it? you are the way you are and there's no changing that~ if anything, pray about it together. i'm sure she knows you mean no harm when it gets to the bottom of it~

 

[demoastanes]

yah well we always sort it out and i think it works. anyway i have a few poems that are dark but good... i dont know what to put up next lol this is all i do all day is write poetry and work in my story lol im such a loser

 

[xeledhwenx]

LOL you are nott a loser~ you're just doing what youre good at and you do a lot of it so thats good! i wish i could be as dedicated as you~

 

[demoastanes]

denty bless this small little boy
i have lost everything
no name do i own
i walk the line scorned and feared
never loved
always hated.
followed by wood
never by flesh
cut in and battered
thrown to the wolfs
beaten and bruised
look iv lost it all
even a name such as this
do i own no more
take me im done


i wrote this a while back about myself

 

[xeledhwenx]

aww how sad and moving i hope you don't still think that about yourself though because i don't believe its true and if theres one thing i must point out it's that you are most certainly loved~

well gonna sleep now so gnite~!

 

[demoastanes]

alright im headed to bed to night