our poems (G4MER, xeled, whitetiger, demo) (2)

[demoastanes]

Have you ever felt like
Some one was watching you
Have you known the
Fear within your heart
Have you ever seen
The shadow upon the wall
It wasn’t supposed to be there
Wasn’t supposed to be there at all

Has the candle ever gone out
In the darkened night
When you needed it the most
Its tearing you apart
Do you hear the noises
Out side your door
In the hall of lies

Look to heaven
You will survive
Look to heaven
It will not be your demise
Look to heaven
You can conquer
The halls of lies
and with the light
forever will you stand tall
in the love of the Lord

i always bum around the house lol its my fav past time but i cant really do it much because every time i do it i get inspired to write and i spend countless hours writing and no bumming lol

 

[xeledhwenx]

that one is really cool! almost feels like it could be a song~

inspiration and writing is a lot better that bumming so yay you~! productivity kehe~

 

[demoastanes]

lol yah productivity lol.....
anyway so like im working on my book right now and i have the feeling before the nights over ill have writen a few more poems. due to the um... random fluck that i actually had a encounter with someone i cant believe could exist...

 

[xeledhwenx]

oooh yay for your book kehe~ but aww sorry to hear about the encounter issue. it's great that you can get out feelings thru poems tho, really~

 

[demoastanes]

well see it wasnt a bad encounter... the reason i couldnt believe she existed was because i didn't think there was a girl out there that could make my heart jump...
oh well iv already got one lol

 

[xeledhwenx]

aah~! i seee~ yaay that's great! and i'd love to see the poem hee

 

[demoastanes]

feelings of the heart
fake or not
come and go like fire
and with each breath
ice lungs fill with desire
while the mind fights
the entire way

know not what to say
nor what to feel
though onward gone
does life in its fill
though hearts stop
in the wake of sight
and smell of rose

is there a reason
to the hearts desire
to hope
for the flame
to bring whats lost at birth
and give what we all desire
the love of a life.

 

[xeledhwenx]

uwaaaa~ thats beautiful so very in your style, which i love i'd love to see more whenever you feel like posting~!

 

[xeledhwenx]

heys i gtg so good nite and God bless~!

 

[demoastanes]

you really like it?
...i just am trying to get these thoughts out of my head. i know its all fake but its good for writing lol

 

[demoastanes]

good night.

 

[demoastanes]

ok so im just going to post this up and if anyone sees it cool if not what ever

is there no freedom
for those who's
pain chains there hearts

Is here nothing but tears
upon the face of those
who know nothing of love

can there be only hate
in those stone hearts
untouched by caring hands

can there be nothing but stones
in those scared hands
brought up to only know hate

is there no hope
for all in darkness
lost amoungst the flame

or for everything
is there freedom
in the caring hands

of the one
who gives hope
and shows love

is it that anoung the flame
there is only but one
who saves; who frees

if this be true
than find ME
and set me free

 

[demoastanes]

the nights are long
the pain deep
the tears are flowing streams
the bed soked
the sheets all matted
yet nothing but hurt still remains

the red crimson flow
on the river of pain
that seeps down my flesh
leaves nothing
but hurt still remains

no light in a tunnel
of dark and dispare
through abyss i fall
and nothing
but the hurt still remains

no voice so deep
so smooth
as to mend my heart
so nothing
but all my hurt remains

yet one
or so iv heard
can take it all away
so all
but my hurt remains

 

[demoastanes]

no one has come on.......
alright well im still here

 

[xeledhwenx]

heys there~! im back...omans ive had such a busy week buuuut anyhoo hihii!

aww demo such beautiful and sad poems, wonderfully written~ they seriously are soo moving.

if you really do still feel trapped...chained...hurting...for anyone who is, i've been and will continue to be praying~ nd if you want/need to talk about anything

 

[demoastanes]

busy week huh. lol. did you like the poems? iv writen about 10 of them since then but there is a some new subject im writing on that iv never written about before. lol
my week was very very busy as well

 

[DrGather]

I'm shocked that this thread is still up and functioning.

Wowza. I haven't been on this username in like two years, and you guys are still here, and still writing poetry.

As odd as this sounds, that's comforting.

You probably don't remember me at all, but I remember seeing your guy's poems a long time ago and enjoying them.

 

[brinny]

Hey i was on this thread a couple years ago too....soulful poems....speaks to one's soul, they do

 

[demoastanes]

hey! hows it going!
i think ill post a poem

this is a poem to my Girlfriend. if you want to read the one i gave her when i asked her out then just ask but its also posted in the poetry part of this website

What have you done to me?
Im red eyed from lack of sleep
You invade my head like life
Every time I close my eyes
You are all I see
Its late night after the week
Been up for three upon the day
Yet no sleep still can stay

What have you done to me?
My stomach jumps each night
I think of sleep and get all sad
Because no thoughts of you
My heart, it screams in pain
No please don’t let her leave
Though my body’s tired
No sleep will stay for me

Yet I do not complain
For sleep is lame
Compared to my thoughts of you
No need for dreams
When mines fulfilled
Every time I hear your name
I breath Gods air and speak with awe
That a plain man like me could find
Such beauty in its all divine
And have you all as mine.

 

[xeledhwenx]

*pokes head in* AH~! again, its been FOREVER @.@@@ is anyone still around?

this may be rather late, but demo that last poem you posted was really lovely yet again! you have true God-given talent for writing =] awesome~~