one sentance at a time:

[goldenviolet]

woohoo!! i get to start!!

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin.

 

[xenia]

I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new.

 

[Akuma]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head.

 

[xenia]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head.

I heard the sound of water dripping far, far away.

 

[Ariella]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm.

 

[sammyk]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me.

 

[Ariella]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own.

 

[wayfaring man]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own. So I prayed unto The Lord , to give me the strength of Samson .

 

[goldenviolet]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own. So I prayed unto The Lord, to give me the strength of Samson. An angel appeared and touched my brother's ankle with a white light, saying " the Father wants you to finish your journey".

 

[WintarNaht]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own. So I prayed unto The Lord, to give me the strength of Samson. An angel appeared and touched my brother's ankle with a white light, saying " the Father wants you to finish your journey". So with the streangth of Samson, I carried my brother home.

 

[Cerulean_Butterfly]

Shall i start a new one?

um ok.

Another day, another night, getting through the sorrow, pain and fright.

(sorry that rhymed. lol )

 

[wayfaring man]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own. So I prayed unto The Lord, to give me the strength of Samson. An angel appeared and touched my brother's ankle with a white light, saying " the Father wants you to finish your journey". So we proceeded into the dark labyrinth of twisted narrow tunnels which seemed to branch off in every direction , but at every intersection we were given the sense of which way to turn .

 

[goldenviolet]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. I heard the sound of water dripping far, far away. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own. So I prayed unto The Lord, to give me the strength of Samson. An angel appeared and touched my brother's ankle with a white light, saying " the Father wants you to finish your journey". So with the streangth of Samson, I carried my brother home.... (i'm cheating... can i do that since i started the thread?) then i woke up, we had fallen down, and passed out! Another day, another night, getting through the sorrow, pain and fright. So we proceeded into the dark labyrinth of twisted narrow tunnels which seemed to branch off in every direction , but at every intersection we were given the sense of which way to turn .

 

[mochagirl]

Suddenly, we came across a door, in the middle of the dark and dank caverns, with light shining through the crack at the ground.

 

[wayfaring man]

And as we knelt down to peer through the crack , a mighty rushing sound reverberated through the tunnels , as the ground began to quiver and shake .

 

[Onesimus85]

The caves were creepy, dark, damp and chilling to my skin. I realized, with some alarm, that my flashlight batteries were not new. Something fluttered above my head. I heard the sound of water dripping far, far away. Then I felt something furry brush against my arm. I jumped up in fright and fell on my brother who was walking next to me. He screamed as his ankle twisted beneath him and I realised somehow I would have to carry him out of there on my own. So I prayed unto The Lord, to give me the strength of Samson. An angel appeared and touched my brother's ankle with a white light, saying " the Father wants you to finish your journey". So with the streangth of Samson, I carried my brother home. then i woke up, we had fallen down, and passed out! Another day, another night, getting through the sorrow, pain and fright. So we proceeded into the dark labyrinth of twisted narrow tunnels which seemed to branch off in every direction , but at every intersection we were given the sense of which way to turn .Suddenly, we came across a door, in the middle of the dark and dank caverns, with light shining through the crack at the ground. And as we knelt down to peer through the crack , a mighty rushing sound reverberated through the tunnels , as the ground began to quiver and shake. A geyser was exploding out of the ground, like a steaming hot waterfall shooting into the sky, crashing into the cealing above. (new person typing) As though it were God himself helping us to escape the grasp of death, the geyser parted the ceiling to reveal the radiant sunlight from the heavens; giving us a feeling of relief and comfort.

 

[wayfaring man]

And when the boiling water sprayed up into the freezing cold air above , it instantly turned into sparkling crystals which gently floated down to softly land on our marvelling , upturned faces ; and while this violent merging of hot and cold occurred right before us , we were not burned or blistered the least bit !

 

[Joven]

Then an angel showed hovering me. He was tall as a roof bumps his head.

 

[wayfaring man]

And when he opened his mouth , a beautiful voice came forth with an accompaniment of heavenly music , and his words echoed contiuously for some time , saying -

 

[KTskater]

"The Father is pleased with your courage, and He has sent me to take you home"...