Numb from Attack

[~Jacqueline~]

I used to feel them crawling
underneath my skin
each drop of my crimson blood
left a gap to let them in
i used to hear them screaming
crying to the Holy One
leaves us be we like it here
oh holy most high Son
she doesn't want to be free
she likes her wasted scars
we are staying in were keeping her
we like it where we are
i used to cry at night
For the beings that stole my eyes
they hid behind them seeing
what I could never try
slowly i became numb
to their spritual rapings
i would cut away the pain
and not feel my spirit caving
but truth be told i was dying
becoming one with my sin
not letting anyone
come make me whole again
I tried to feel the pain
but i no longer could even hurt
what is worse than feeling pain,
except numbness that lurks?
I did not want to be free
I had no desire to see
I was on the inside looking in
And I didn't want to be.

 

[Lubiana]

Wow- powerful stuff!

 

[SwtRose]

A powerful write. I think it would be better if you inserted stanzas but nonetheless a emotive poem.

 

[fallupchik]

that was really good

 

[Dr. Holly]

Very powerful poem! God bless you!