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alyssa saw john appear in the layer she was in.she was chained 2 a wall in a cement pit.john got up & looked around a tad.he walked around 4 a min.the hooded man appereard right in front of john.he threw john,angelic,& nin in2 a cage & took all thier powers & wepons away & locked the door.

"get me outta here!"alyssa screamed.
"alyssa?!where r u?!"john asked screaming.
"im down here!"she screamed bk.
"oh."he commented.the hooded man walked over 2 the pit & droped 15 keys in.

"what r these 4?"alyssa screamed @ him.
"there r 15 keys there.1 of those keys opens the chains.another 1 opens the cage pit top.u have 15 mins.be4 this pit fills up w/ frezzing cold water.

u will die of drowning or coldness.if u make it....ull be lucky & see what happens.gd luck."he said 2 her.alyssa screamed.

"i hate u person!"john screamed @ him.
"let her go!"nin shouted @ him.
"what they said!"angelic agreed w/ the guys screaming @ the person.

the water was already 2 alyssa ankles.her feet were half frozen.she was on her 3rd key.

"no!it didnt work!"she was franticly trying 2 find the right key.she grabed another 1.it didnt work either.she was on her 14th key.

the water was up 2 her waist by now.the key slipped out of her hands.she went bk down & grabed it.she tried 2 open the chains.it worked.
"yes!now 4 the 1 up top!"she grabed all the keys & went 2 the top trying 2 open the caged top.

the 1st 8 didnt work she was on her 9th 1 & all the keys fell in2 the water from her numbed hands.

"oh g-g-great."she said diving bk under.
she grabed 6 more keys.she tried 5 of them.none of them worked.the water was almost 2 the tpo.she tried the last key.
 
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the last key worked suddenly everything went away and next thing she new it they were in the middel of a my chemical romance concert!
" what happened " said everyone at the same time.................................
"i dont care but im glad it did i love my chemical romance lets party" said angelic
"yea man" yelled alyssa as everyone started headbanging.
 
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Zolo crossed his arms. "I don't headbang." Nin unshetahed his katana, and struck a pose "I'm too cool to headbang....". They looked at John, who was holding up a rawk fist, and headbanging with his tounge out. "Oh yeah! This music's awesome!!" he said. Nin and Zolo sweatdropped, before noticing that Angelic and Alyssa had disappeared. Nin walked around the concert. He found a dark room, with a faint golden glow emitting from the door. Nin cracked it open, and peeked inside. Bakura was standing there, talking to two hooded figures. "I KNEW you were in cahoots with THEM!" said Nin, tackling Bakura. "Idiot! What are you doing?" screamed Bakura. The hooded figures pulled back their hoods, revealing Alyssa and Angelic. "Shh! We're trying to disguise ourselves so we don't get kidnapped again!" said Alyssa. "And I'm disguised with her so I can keep an eye on her!" said Angelic. "Oh...." said Nin. Bakura threw Nin off him. "Argh...idiots..." said Bakura. "I'm afraid I must be off! Farewell!" said bakura. He walked past Nin, and out the door.....
 
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"i wonder why he helped u."nin asked aloud.
"i dunno.but i hope it helps me."alyssa said.she walked out side & stepped through a portal falling through the ground.she screamed.
"this isnt a normal concert!this is an illousion!"angelic said.nin tried 2 go through the portal but hit the ground.

she still screamed & then landed on a huge pillow thing w/ an oughf!she got up but fell bk down cause the thing she was on was 2 soft 2 walk on.she crawled 2 the edge & jumped off.

"welcome miss alyssa."a voice called 2 her.she gasped.
"w........who r u?"she stammered scared looking around.
"u no who i am."the voice said.she was still looking around franticly.
"where am i?!"she said still looking around.she triped & fell rolling her ankle.
"oh my......"she stoped herself b4 she said anything else.she bked up quickley,her hair falling in her face.her long black robe kind of in the way.
 
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(FYI, rawk fist and tongue sticking out ain't my style, either. I'm gonna pretend that didn't happen.)

John heard a scream. He went to push a few people out of the way to get to where he heard the scream, but when he pushed, his hand went through the person. "What the heck?" John went right through the person at that moment. As soon as he realized that it was an illusion, it was too late. Everything in the room disappeared, except them, as their environment was turned into a dark void.

John reached for his sword, but it was gone, since he took it. "Darn it, Lord, I need another sword." One reappeared. "Thanks."

They all got together, in the darkness, and discussed what they were going to do.
 
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"ok."john said.he went 2 look around.nuthing happened.he couldnt find alyssa @ all.all of a sudden angleic apperaed right in front of johgn.
"woah!what the?!"he jumped bk.
"sry."angelic said getting up from falling.
"its ok."john said."wheres alyssa?"he asked.
"i dunno."she replied looking around.
"we gotta find her!& quickley!"john said quickley.he started 2 run.angelic went w/ the others.

(im only on 4 a little bit cause im @ school workin on a report.ill be on & off 4 1/2 an hour.i think.......)
 
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John turned to Angelic. "Also, we may wind up in a fight here. Can you fight?"

Angelic got nervous. "Uh, I don't know, I've never been in one before..."

Nin walked over. "That's fine, we'll keep you protected in case anything happens."

"Okay then." Angelic perked back up again.

"Alright, well, we have to find an exit. Oh, wait, forgot, you guys lost your weapons, huh? Lord, if You will..." Their weapons reappeared too. "Sweet. ...now what?"

Ninjitsu sat there. "That's what I'm trying to figure out..."
 
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Then, Nin snapped his fingers. "I got it! You guys, charge up your strongest attacks!" said Nin. Charging up a blast of yellow energy, he fired it into the Abyss of the dark void. There was a 'BANG! Ka-BOOM!' noise, and the darkness around them began cracking. "This is just an illusion! If we break it, then we can maybe find Alyssa!"
 
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alyssa was still trying 2 figure out where she was.where every1 else was where the voice was coming from.she then thought it was coming from her head.so she grabed her head,fell on the ground & yelled @ her head again.

"get out of my head!"she yelled.
"im not in yur head foolish girl.im sum where u cant find me."he said."u DO no who i am though."he said laughing.

"u will marry me & it will be 2day.2night,in 5 minutes."he said laughing evily.
"that voice.....t-that laugh.those sayings....i-i remeber those from sumwhere.remeber all of those......sumwhere.....sumtime......"she got up.
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meanwhile john & the others were trying 2 get out of the illousion.nuthing happened still.they finally got out & looked around.they were in the abonded building where alyssa almost died in.john looked around.

"crud!shes not here either!"he said angry.nin looked around.
"yur right.shes not."nin said.angelic nodded her head in agrement.they all looked around more.there was no sign of her or the kidnapper or anything since they left last time.
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alyssa was walking around trying 2 figure out who they person was.he poped out of nowhere & alyssa all of a sudden had the wedding dress on.the wedding went on like a normal 1 would mostley.alyssa was trying 2 get away but it didnt work.the kidnapper kissed alyssa & they were now married & the person/kidnapper pushed her bk & she fell on the floor.

he undiscused himself.it was no other than.........................













e.b.
 
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Miroku her jealious ex-husband then he start laughing uncontrolably mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
you left me for gerard but now you will be mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

(by the way how did i suddenly end up with john and nin when i had just gotten lost and been knocked un concious???)
 
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John had also noticed that it was dark, and that everyone else disappeared. "Hmph. Okay, this isn't good." A shadowy warrior leaped right in front of him.

"Warrior of heat and light, I cannot let you pass. I have been given an order to kill you." He also had a hooded cloak. He held his blade out in front of him, horizontally. His voice also sounded familiar.

John unsheathed his blade. However he noticed something when he whipped it out; it looked like his opponent's sword. "...wonderful, they have to do this in every friggin anime, huh? Lemme guess, you're an evil version of me, aren't you?"

The person pulled down the hood. "Yep." He looked like John, except his hair was an amethyst color, and his eyes glowed like a fine ruby, nice, but red. He did not wear glasses like John, but was more pale, and his voice was a lot deeper, more rough.

"So, I kick your can, you let me through? Fine. I know my weaknesses, I can deal with them." John got en guarde.

(Okay, you guys can fight whoever you wanna fight. I just want to fight a dark side. It's fun. ^_^ )
 
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alyssa was all of a sudden abused.she was tring 2 get away.it didnt work.he finally stoped & she finally got up & ran away she fell through another portal & fell in front of her group of friends scared & in a blood stained white dress.

"ah."she got up running a little looking behind her,tripping every now & then & ran in2 john.she screamed having no idea who she ran in2 & turned quickly around.
 
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she laid there in the dress,unconcious still scared.they all gathered around her.john picked her up & took her 2 a place 2 rest.

(BYE JOHN!WE'LL MISS U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*hugs*)
 
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...this game has been patching for about 15 minutes now, so I'm going to continue the story in the meantime.
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John put Alyssa over to the side in safety. He went back over to his dark form, and got ready. Until...

A light shone between them. "John, this is not an iillusion, nor am I. I've come to give you this sword, you're going to need it. Let's just say it's a little present from God." John's weapon changed into a fine sword. The hilt of the blade was a fine gold, swirling in the handle. In between the handle and the blade lie two angels made out of gold, with folded hands, extending to the sides, while the blade was pure folded platinum, which glowed despite the darkness around them. The scabbard of the sword adjusted it's shape to fit the sword, since it was made for a typical rapier. Lines of gold streaked down the side of it, as well. John unsheathed it, and became fascinated with the sword.

"You will need this sword in your quest, the Angel Blade." The light then addressed the group. "You all will also receive special things of God, which will aid you and help you defeat the evil you will soon face, in the future. May God be with you all." The light disappeared.

John gripped his sword in his hand, and stared fixed at his dark side's eyes. "You want to fight? Bring it on."

Ninjitsu walked up to John. "Are you going to need our help?"

John smiled. "Nah, I don't think this'll be very hard. Keep going, I'll catch up."

Ninjitsu shrugged. "Alright, then."

John turned around. "Take good care of Alyssa, alright? I don't want her hurt any more than she is."

"Don't worry, we don't either." With that, they disappeared into the darkness.

With that said, the dark side smiled. "You do realize I'm going to win despite that new sword? That you'll be a failure to your friends, everything will fall into our hands, and we will win, right?"

John laughed. "Your lies are funny!" John rushed at his dark side, sword in hand.
 
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