I see.....ME

[PuNkChIcK]

When I look into these eyes
I find things no one else ever catches a glimpse at

I see this fear of judgment
that makes her cower at confrontation

I see this hopelessness for the future
that make her choices her burden alone

I see this desperate need for companionship to make her strong
in the savage world of humans

I see this courage
caged in her thoughts of inferiority

I see these thoughts of abandonment
that make her cling to anything

I see this devotion to her beliefs
that makes her fear death

And I hate that the person I always see is me.

 

[PuNkChIcK]

so...what do ya'll think?

 

[CJF]

Wow.

 

[PuNkChIcK]

umm....i guess that means it's good...if so....thanks

 

[oncewaslost]

yeah, it's good.

 

[PuNkChIcK]

thanks for the comments

 

[Psyber freek]

it takes talent to write poems like that.