Hook me in 20 words or less

[DarkCoffeeJazz]

"Life, and love, and hope.
Cliches of our existence
Risen, grand, shining darkly."

That's what he said before he died.

 

[Kalli]

The spasm went through her, bones jarring, mind numbing pain. The voices growing louder, the blood chilling screams. Her possession.

 

[Venustas]

"Leave me alone," I snarled, backing away. He grabbed my wrist, and stroked my cheek thoughtlessly.

 

[Doubtless]

I figured you would probably cry when you read the end of this book, so I ripped it out.

(...just a jab at humour ...)

 

[bobhow1037]

tonight a child cries, inside of her broken heart she screams.
why can't we hear this child without hope?

 

[Kalli]

Focusing on what lies ahead, the prayers come steadily in, when the prayer is answered does anybody win?

 

[librarianmarian]

I answered my cell phone, like a thousand times.
“Katie’s been arrested.”
This wasn’t like those thousand times.

 

[GreenWizard]

Katelin loved her family so much it was a shame she had to kill them.

 

[GreenWizard]

I climbed to the peak of destiny only to find that it was too late for the world.

 

[Doubtless]

I climbed to the peak of destiny only to find that it was too late for the world.

Very nice.

 

[GreenWizard]

Thank you

Very nice.

"Copy that.. umm.. cut the red wire!"
"Bob, I'm colorblind," David radioed back as he cut a random wire.

 

[brinny]

"Leave me alone," I snarled, backing away. He grabbed my wrist, and stroked my cheek thoughtlessly.

It grabbed my attention. You're good.

 

[Christianfantasy]

Candice, known to her friends and even most of her enemies as Candy, decided she’d kept her ghastly secret long enough.

 

[daydreamergurl15]

Boy, I'm really bad at writing but I'll give it a try.

"Is it possible to shoot your brain out through the mirror? Because this idiot did."

 

[daydreamergurl15]

I thought of another one, this is fun..

"Okay, I'll only say this once, come into my room again and I'll hang you by you fingertips."

 

[daydreamergurl15]

Okay, last one, I'm having way to much fun coming up with these lines...

"Did He leave?"
"Yes" she stood there dreamy eyes
"Are you okay?"
"I'm angry. Satan didn't kiss me goodbye!"

 

[warrior of sacrifice]

Striking its mark, the bullet, spun the target blood spewing everywhere. An explosion, I scream holding my head.

 

[faithful follower]

This sounds like fun...I'll give it a try.


The challenge was clear. The consequences of failure were even more clear. And I'm afraid.

 

[faithful follower]

It was a sacred vow, entered into with solemn resolve. Now that it's been broken, I have only one choice.

 

[faithful follower]

The first thing I was aware of was the comfort of the bed. The second--the handcuffs on my wrists.