Hook me in 20 words or less

[Lessien]

Love never comes softly. It rushes in, pistol drawn, but ready to kill Hate with its bare hands.

 

[cookiebaker]

"yes doctor?" she listened vaguely at first, but as his words unfolded, and her world as she knew it...

 

[Thunderring]

Really liked it Lessien. Never thought of it like this.

 

[Doubtless]

Fire needs a host; all rage longs for focus. Without host, no fire exists. But rage without focus is wild.

~Doubtless

 

[Thunderring]

...way cool.

 

[Gam3rG1rl4Chr1st]

Wow, I never knew there was a Writer's Guild here! Well, I guess it's true that you learn new things every day. lol. Oh yeah, here's my contribution in less than 30 words:

I took a deep, shaky breath and peeked out at the crowd. "I do not know if I can do this, Martin." I whispered to the man beside me.

 

[Ellendryle of Sunrising]

"What do you mean I have three months to live?!" I yelled at my gynocologist as the pain hit again.

 

[Thunderring]

lol nice. to the both of you.

 

[firzenr]

Read this or die.

 

[Thunderring]

LOL that was good!

 

[PublicNewSense]

He was the best of swines. He was the worst of swines. The only thing everyone could agree on was he was the cleverest darn pig they'd ever seen in tight leather pants.

(slightly over 20 words but hey...)

 

[Mewtwo]

Wait, he thought. Thats not right....nothings right.. Where am I?.... "Here you are." Leon pounced.

 

[Lessien]

He was the best of swines. He was the worst of swines. The only thing everyone could agree on was he was the cleverest darn pig they'd ever seen in tight leather pants.

(slightly over 20 words but hey...)

That...was...brilliant! And it made me laugh!

 

[NavyGuy7]

LOL...Swines....in leather pants?!?

That seems a little disturbing to me.....but funny.

 

[PublicNewSense]

LOL...Swines....in leather pants?!?

That seems a little disturbing to me.....but funny.

Thanks. I think. LOL Disturbing can be good.

And thanks, Lessien.

 

[Thunderring]

I liked it too. Really makes me wonder....lol keep it up PublicNewSence.

 

[IfIonlyhadabrain]

"Pain is the path of life." Orvan choked the litany as he laid his brother to rest. His killer, his saviour.

 

[Thunderring]

oh now i really want to know more!

 

[Thunderring]

I always knew they would come for me. I am after all a traitor. I had just hoped to have a little more time.

 

[LiVeLaUgHLoVe777]

you guys are good=]