Hook me in 20 words or less

ConnecticutYankee said:

Hey, this is supposed to be creative writing, not socializing. Can we get back on topic here?

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AngelusSax said:

A toe, a finger, and my left eye. What were they going to take next? My life?

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Riddik7 said:

Do you know why they never found Jack The Ripper? Because i found the fountain of youth.

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Riddik7 said:

figured it would work... i use that line on my friends when i'm bored lol... i also plan on basing a book around that line...

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liesje said:

How many friends have you scared away???

That makes for a very scary book...any spoilers?

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Riddik7 said:

ah none as of yet... they won't even believe me when i use my evil voice saying i shall destroy the world... or when i say i have an evil alter ego... so i dont figure that little phrase would scare them away... it's more of a running inside joke than anything...

ah well i guess a little bit of a spoiler couldn't hurt... essentialy jack the ripper is obviously near immortal now, as are other various people throughout history through mostly different means, some are famous and some aren't. Now the problem is there are people out there worse than jack the ripper ever was, and it seems jack the ripper who is trying to make amends for his sins is the only one standing between them and all of mankind...

i won't give more than that away... a writer has to keep some secrets...

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