hey, lets all make a big poem...!

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hey wouldnt this be fun? to like write a poem and like someone starts it and we all just one by one add a few lines or something to it, and just keep adding a line or two each.... wouldnt that be fun?

man i want to, no telling where it would go, it would always be something new to participate in and it would be exciting thinking of ways to go off what the last guy said...

lets doit.... anyone else want to?
 

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As morning gold broke through from the east
another day has sliped into the past
all yesterdays joys and yestersdays failed ploys,
are washed away with but the silent movement of the golden light,
tis a bittersweet rose cradled in thorns,

i dream of what the days could have been
glories or trouble, joy or sadness
but I wait and think about the day ahead
I know anything is possible
Because the most important thing to remember
is Our God is Unstoppable
So all past is erased
And I'm born again




wow: we could be peots you guys this is cool!:)
 
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As morning gold broke through from the east
another day has sliped into the past
all yesterdays joys and yestersdays failed ploys,
are washed away with but the silent movement of the golden light,
tis a bittersweet rose cradled in thorns,
i dream of what the days could have been
glories or trouble, joy or sadness
but I wait and think about the day ahead
I know anything is possible
Because the most important thing to remember
is Our God is Unstoppable
So all past is erased
And I'm born again
..i am born again.

in this new light we live,
the light that shames the gold,
and brightens the frown,
the light that gives me wings,
onward and upward we rise,
skies blur with the resolve of a bolted flight
On the earth I take my stand
my soul held by a vision grand
The mission clear, the end of fear
Your love, O Lover shine by your hand
 
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As morning gold broke through from the east
another day has sliped into the past
all yesterdays joys and yestersdays failed ploys,
are washed away with but the silent movement of the golden light,
tis a bittersweet rose cradled in thorns,
i dream of what the days could have been
glories or trouble, joy or sadness
but I wait and think about the day ahead
I know anything is possible
Because the most important thing to remember
is Our God is Unstoppable
So all past is erased
And I'm born again
..i am born again.

in this new light we live,
the light that shames the gold,
and brightens the frown,
the light that gives me wings,
onward and upward we rise,
skies blur with the resolve of a bolted flight
On the earth I take my stand
my soul held by a vision grand
The mission clear, the end of fear
Your love, O Lover shine by your hand

I will shine in above the darkness
Above any other light
I came out on top
At the end of my plight
 
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many are the thoughts
spinning as pennies on a desert of glass
hope, fear, love and lover
Turgid seas of silk in silent tumult
surreal turns and tosses
The eyes awake
The fragments sublimate
All dreamings feelings forsake...
Alas, I am awake.
 
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