I am wanting to make a short video (~1-2 minute) with a concise, dense, accurate message of the gospel.I am aware it's possible to mistakenly write things which aren't true, which is why I'm asking this. My memory of specific verses isn't very good so making sure/biblically proving, all of which I am wanting to write is true is somewhat hard. Mishandling Gods word greatly worries me and I don't want to mistakenly eisegesis verses when I come to research/quote verses to back up this. The following script is what I've wrote so far and is the essence of the gospel how I've understood it from reading the bible and listening to sermons over the years. I would like as much people, preferably reformed/orthodox, to look at what I've wrote, tell me if I need correction, or need to add anything in? I want it to flow as logically and biblically as possible in a concise short fashion.
Man sinned against God
The nature of sin is infinitely evil, evidenced by the majesty of whom it’s against.
God is morally perfect in justice; the judgement of sin can’t be eternally postponed, which would be to disregard sin hence invalidate Gods justice.
The result of God’s justice and man’s sin is divine wrath.
Divine Wrath is the application of justice through retribution according to each’s deeds
Only God’s infinite worthiness could account for the atonement of the infinite weight our of sin.
God clothed himself in flesh so that he could physically bear Gods wrath
Therefore, Jesus’ death appeased the wrath of god for those who by faith repent and trust the propitiation provided by Jesus.
This was a free act of Grace, not deserved nor achievable, but brought about by Gods unfathomable love.
Through this, reconciliation to God is achieved and true enjoyment of God can be experienced
I want to say I really, really respect you for the extreme care you are showing when it comes to wanting to accurately present the Gospel message. We are to work out our salvation with fear and trembling, and if we preach another Gospel, we are anathema; when our Lord said that it is better that a millstone were placed around our neck and we were cast into the sea lest we offend any of the little ones, he meant not just chuldren specifically, but all "babes in Christ."
I agree with almost all of what you say, except for this:
"Therefore, Jesus’ death appeased the wrath of god for those who by faith repent and trust the propitiation provided by Jesus."
This is a medieval idea that originated with the Roman Catholic theologian Thomas Aquinas, that Jesus had to die to appease the angry father; it is nowhere to be found in the Patristic corpus.
The list of canonical books of the New Testament was first drawn up by a man named St. Athanasius, who also was instrumental in defending the doctrine of the deity of Jesus Christ against the false teacher Arius, who claimed Jesus Christ was a creature and not God.
St. Athanasius also wrote a book explaining the reason for the Incarnation and how we are saved through it, called On the Incarnation. I strongly reccommend you read it before proceeding, as it explains the scriptural basis for our salvation in Christ Jesus as it was understood by the early Church, in the fourth century.
http://www.ccel.org/ccel/athanasius/incarnation
Also, this video by Metropolitan Kallistos Ware one of the bishops of my church, the Greek Orthodox Church, explains how we understand salvation in Christ, and also how we understand the wrath of God:
In summary, the Bible describes God as a "consuming fire"; it also describes him as "unchanging" and as "Love."
If God is Love, and does not change, our actions could not enrage him, because that would represent a change in His disposition, and likesise the crucifixion of our Lord could not appease the Father for the same reason. Instead, God is pure love, a consuming fire of love, but we, because of our sin, are not pure love; there is hate in us.
When we die, and are resurrected in the world to come, we will be in the direct presence of God, as Revelations makes clear. The consuming fire of God's love will not burn those who have repented through faith in Jesus Christ and given themselves over to divine love, but for those who reject him and choose instead to hate him and to embrace revenge, anger, jealousy and the other passions, being in the presence of God will be an unbearable torture; the consuming fire will burn them.
This is the view found in the writings of most ancient theologians, from the second through the ninth centuries. The idea that you refer to, of Jesus Christ dying in order to satisfy the wrath of the Father, was an innovation that began with Anselm of Canterbury based on a distortion of the writings of St. Augustine of Hippo; this satisfaction soteriology of penal substitutionary atonement then became dominant in the West, and resulted I think in some people forgetting that God is love; we see it to an even more unpleasant extreme in some forms of five points Calvinism, where God has foreordained some people for damnation just to prove to the Elect his perfect justice.
I believe these are distortions of the Gospel that have alienated many people from Christianity, allowing atheists to describe God as the "ultimate child abuser" when He is not, and that we should move away from them, repent of them if you will, and tuen back to the ancient model of salvatiom found in the writings of St. Ignatius the Martyr (who was fed to lions in AD 90), St. Irenaeus, the Cappadocians (Sts. Gregory the Theologian, Basil of Caesarea and Gregory of Nyassa) and especially St. Athanasius, since it was actually St. Athanasius whose canon of New Testament scripture wound up becoming universally accepted. Its because of him we have Revelations, the three epistles of John, 2 Peter. Jude, James and Hebrews, and the Pastoral Epistles, and at the same time, we lack in our new testaments such spurious apocrypha as 1 Barnabas and the Shepherd of Hermas.