What’s your opinion on this story?

[iter itineris]

Hi everyone,

I’m hoping that I can get some opinions here. I have been working on a story called “A Wizard’s Tale” for many years. I created a Web site to host the chapters online so that anyone can read them. Currently I have 12 Chapters listed.

I have felt lead to create a Christian “fantasy” story. I have grown up with a high appeal for fantasy stories and the real life messages they can get across. I always admired C.S. Lewis’ Narnia to be a wonderful way to symbolically get Christianity across to many young readers. It truly impacted me.

I know everyone has only so much time in the day, and life in today’s word is busy. But I would truly appreciate insightful and honest assessments of the story. And any feedback with where it’s going, how it can be improved, and if it is fun and exciting to read or boring and not worth continuing.

I would truly appreciate any feedback. Please visit my site at www.awizardstale.net

 

[judoka]

I was just going to take a quick look, but wanted to look longer...wanted to keep reading. That's good!
I'll think here and try and give more feedback later....God bless you...

 

[iter itineris]

Great! Thank you for your help, much appreciated!

 

[iter itineris]

Anyone find time to read up on this yet? Any and all feedback is much appreciated!

 

[Grl4Christ987]

That was an excellent book, thus far at least. Keep up the good work and use your gift for the Glory of God.


In Christ,

Kimmie

 

[iter itineris]

That was an excellent book, thus far at least. Keep up the good work and use your gift for the Glory of God.

Thank you very much! That is my #1 hope for this story, is for God's Glory.

 

[iter itineris]

Wow, this was an old thread. Just going back to let people know that this book has finally been released!

For the Kindle, click here: Amazon.com: Traphis: A Wizard's Tale eBook: James D. Maxon: Kindle Store
For the Nook, click here: BARNES & NOBLE | Traphis: A Wizard's Tale by James D. Maxon | NOOK Book (eBook)