Web page, feedback please

[Michael Snow]

This is a preview (not published) of a webpage for one of my books. Any feedback (esp. helpful negative comments) would be appreciated...or suggest a better template, whatever you think would be better. Also the title, not sure about that. http://wix.to/j4C_AA4

 

[mark kennedy]

The layout seems fine, I would be interested in see more content. The white fonts on a black background is kind of easy on the eyes but I've always had a thing for white space.

 

[Michael Snow]

The layout seems fine, I would be interested in see more content. The white fonts on a black background is kind of easy on the eyes but I've always had a thing for white space.

Thanks, Mark. Yes, I planned on adding more content on the reviews. And I should note on the page that following the amazon link (the b&N link seems not to work now) there is a "look inside" feature for more content. Not sure if that takes care of content concern or better to put webpage content.

 

[Spiritlight]

Can't see it on a mobile for some reason.

 

[FutureAndAHope]

This is a preview (not published) of a webpage for one of my books. Any feedback (esp. helpful negative comments) would be appreciated...or suggest a better template, whatever you think would be better. Also the title, not sure about that. http://wix.to/j4C_AA4

I would suggest change the title of the book, so it reflects the pacifism element, at the moment when seeing the title screen I think it is a book about how God walked with a person through war.

I am actually a website designer, so I know a bit about the Website side of things. To be brutally honest it does not scream buy me. The content is good and concise, and motivates me to explore the book. But the lack of visual professionalism makes me think it is a backyard job.

I suggest you use a graphics program to modernise the images you have used. I.e the hand drawn image convert it to vector line art.

I have a page describing some of the principals of visual design here Graphic Design Principals