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[AnointedPoetess]

Living life for the one,
Who saw me thru,
The good and bad days
Of my life,
Not knowing when it is to end,
But hoping to make a difference
in someones life,
So that they can see his beauty,
Ever so much clearer,
My God, My Saviour, My Friend .

 

[Love&Pain]

Great but you need to keep going. Keep on going... continue to express your thoughts on how you feel. It doesn't matter how long a poem is but I feel as though you could of wrote more. Right when you began to think about what you said, it is shortened.

 

[jobstears]

Annointed Poetess,

This was awesome...in its brevity it spoke volumes. Praise be to God!


blessings,
jobstears