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[ewq1938]

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nothing lives that dies

in questions never asked.

the soul that has no size.



the silence gives disguise

for countless lifetimes last.

nothing lives that dies.



the vessel born with eyes,

that's seen three quarters past

the soul that has no size



this small, fought lies

that slew the truth so fast.

nothing lives that dies



or calls out without cries,

the final protest cast.

the soul that has no size



unless its counted in demise.

the growing depth's so vast

nothing lives.....that dies,

the soul that has no size.

 

[teresa]

this is the best I've seen so far from you

 

[ewq1938]

this is the best I've seen so far from you

Can you explain why? I am curious...

 

[teresa]

sure, I've not seen anything else of yours before except the last few poems you've posted as I'm new to reading this forum.

I loved the rain one, and I'd love to post an image to go with the words and what they say to me as part of my response.

Also, I loved the cow one and thought it was fun.

are readers allowed to add on to that one or to others works in general?

in fact, an idea I have is to have a group poem, where we write a poem one line at a time, with forum members jumping in to help finish it, as they will.

thoughts?

 

[ewq1938]

sure, I've not seen anything else of yours before except the last few poems you've posted as I'm new to reading this forum.

I loved the rain one, and I'd love to post an image to go with the words and what they say to me as part of my response.

Also, I loved the cow one and thought it was fun.

are readers allowed to add on to that one or to others works in general?

in fact, an idea I have is to have a group poem, where we write a poem one line at a time, with forum members jumping in to help finish it, as they will.

thoughts?

I don't see anything wrong with posting things to others poem's if they inspire you as such. These aren't the samne as discussions with certain topics like in other areas of CF.

Do you know what this poem was about?

 

[teresa]

^No, but I would love to know what meanings you had in mind when you wrote it

 

[ewq1938]

It's a protest against abortion.

 

[teresa]

^thank you, its very deep to me.
That little soul starts out so small
then blooms
into its beautiful flower

 

[ewq1938]

^thank you, its very deep to me.

Thanks!