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[BioLeap]

Yesterday afternoon

I tried to forsake you

From my mind

From my heart

I thought It was time

To let you go

Since it seemed so clear

That you'd rather not have me in your life

So in one go I let it all go

And divorced all my thoughts of you

That you were not my child anymore

It seemed so easy at first

Until a deathly spell fell upon me

And I became pale as a ghost

And my whole body went into shock

And there I lay on my bed

Totally disconnected

My stomach churning & churning

For a whole hour

Until I couldn't take the pain anymore

And staggered to the bathroom

And violently threw up

Then my head was hot all over

Like I was going to black out

So I lay back down

Feeling like I was going into a comma

But I fought the urge of sleeping

Until about another hour passed

And my mind just couldn't take the thought

That I never loved you

And my heart just couldn't take the sense

That it would never feel you again

And in a flash, there I was again

In the bathroom

Vomiting up all over again

As if this was never going to end

Until I realised I had to plug myself

Back into you.

 

[crossnote]

Your last Forum visited?

 

[BioLeap]

Your last Forum visited?

Huh?

 

[crossnote]

Huh?

Just a wild guess at the metaphor in your poem.

 

[BioLeap]

Just a wild guess at the metaphor in your poem.

Everything in that poem occurred on the 26th of May 2019 in Brisbane, Queensland at about 1.30 pm. Lasted about 3-4 hours & is type specific, it's not a metaphor.

 

[rainingviolets]

Wow...you make the reader feel like an active participant instead of a silent spectator. In this case I'm not sure that's a good thing!! Great writing!