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  • CF has always been a site that welcomes people from different backgrounds and beliefs to participate in discussion and even debate. That is the nature of its ministry. In view of recent events emotions are running very high. We need to remind people of some basic principles in debating on this site. We need to be civil when we express differences in opinion. No personal attacks. Avoid you, your statements. Don't characterize an entire political party with comparisons to Fascism or Communism or other extreme movements that committed atrocities. CF is not the place for broad brush or blanket statements about groups and political parties. Put the broad brushes and blankets away when you come to CF, better yet, put them in the incinerator. Debate had no place for them. We need to remember that people that commit acts of violence represent themselves or a small extreme faction.

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Hello, I'm new to this website, so I'm sorry if my formatting is wrong. I have just finished a essay on the Jewish people and how it relates to the Bible, Christ, etc. I was hoping someone could skim it over to make sure there isn't any major flaws in it. Thanks.
 

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Hello, I'm new to this website, so I'm sorry if my formatting is wrong. I have just finished a essay on the Jewish people and how it relates to the Bible, Christ, etc. I was hoping someone could skim it over to make sure there isn't any major flaws in it. Thanks.

The intro and conclusions are both wrong. The intro doesn't do what an intro does and the conclusion, the same. Those are major rewrites. I didn't get to the middle.
 
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You have conflated the house of Judah and the house of Israel. You must keep them separate and distinct. The Jews; the house of Judah; rejected Jesus, so he went to the house of Israel. "I am sent only to the lost sheep of the house of Israel." By this statement it is clear that he knew beforehand that the Jews as a whole would reject him.

See Matthew 4:14-16
 
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You have conflated the house of Judah and the house of Israel. You must keep them separate and distinct. The Jews; the house of Judah; rejected Jesus, so he went to the house of Israel. "I am sent only to the lost sheep of the house of Israel." By this statement it is clear that he knew beforehand that the Jews as a whole would reject him.

See Matthew 4:14-16
Thank you. This is exactly the type of advice I want.
 
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