scream till i choke

[xxxlovexofxlifexjcxxx]

i am screaming
screaming in pain
my soul is cring
physicaly dying
what more is left
but to rip me apart
break me in two
tahts what you should do
broken am i who
screams and crys
deep in the night
i open my teary eyes
and your not here to
kiss me asleep
kiss me goodnight one last
time
entrance my soul
please, pleas my heart pleas
to you
my heart would break in two
just to see you smile
so please, kiss me
one list time, let me fly away
fly away one last time
i will never come home
goodbye....

 

[Marie]

Very powerful- I like your word choice.

The first 11 lines really hit me upside the head, until it got to the love part, hehe. The first lines really applied to my life, but I'm not in love, and I haven't lost it, so I don't know the feeling. It's really good though; I like it.

 

[GaulishScot4Christ]

I know that I don't have the right to ask, but I somehow would like to know who or what caused such pain. To experience that at so young an age . . .
I can honestly & sincerely say that I would be in at least that much pain without the Lord; without my wife. To have absolutely NOTHING to live for . . . I don't even want to TRY to imagine that. That is what this person feels. Inside, I weep for that person. Truly.

 

[delicate_flower]

Oh man, all I can say about this is that I am feeling this poem completely. The moment I read it, I felt the buried emotions leak through the surface again... I cannot be too sure of what situation you could be talking about, but I can relate with what you are saying. There are some things that I am running away from but when I read this poem, they all are coming back into light. You have a way with words and it's amazing to me...