Rate this rap verse I made

[Chilldogg77]

I give it a 6/10. It's tough to rate rhmes by reading them though, cause you can't really tell how it's supposed to sound.

Christian rap, it's no oxymoron, can't stop me, I go on, I must put the show on, with Jesus I flow on
Cause I call it faith, but you call it wreckless, my only bling bling is the Virgin on my necklace!
Cause there's a certain strength and a certain mystique, when you hit me with all you have and I turn the other cheek.
There's not a lot you can say to that son, so walk with me cause I walk with the strong one!

Sorry, got a little inspired there. Rhymes are fun.

 

[HotRhymez]

By the way, thank you Freak4Jesus for that compliment...It's really great to know that there's at least one person in here with a mind of their own!

 

[absolutely_lost_86]

hmmmm

 

[twosteppin]

I give it a 6/10. It's tough to rate rhmes by reading them though, cause you can't really tell how it's supposed to sound.

Christian rap, it's no oxymoron, can't stop me, I go on, I must put the show on, with Jesus I flow on
Cause I call it faith, but you call it wreckless, my only bling bling is the Virgin on my necklace!
Cause there's a certain strength and a certain mystique, when you hit me with all you have and I turn the other cheek.
There's not a lot you can say to that son, so walk with me cause I walk with the strong one!

Sorry, got a little inspired there. Rhymes are fun.

LOL.
rhymes are fun!

 

[Infernal Freak]

Matthew 7

1"Do not judge, or you too will be judged.

I just thought that might be a nice imput!??!? [It just seems right when you're conversing on a COMPUTER lol]



-Heather

 

[Infernal Freak]

thanks SlimShadyJB...be blessed!

 

[New Found Glory]

*Sarcasm on* Sorry JB I must have missed the part where I "questioned your salvation" in this thread, I guess that I really picked a bad first time to start condemning people to hell. I know that you would never lie as you have always been a pillar of virtue in the past and have never been known for exaggerating or embellishing things at the expense of others in order to benefit yourself. *Sarcasm off*. Hopefully this will end this little spat we are all having as I am not really enjoying my continual participation in this thread. My final point is that you have got some talent with your verse JB. Just use your gifts to the best of your ability and for the right purpose, good luck in everything that you do.

 

[Western Deity]

1.5

 

[blackwasp]

Let's take scripture in context: The verse about judging, if taken in context, refers to judging other christians according to scripture. Just a rant...

 

[mnmcandiez]

6/10

 

[TerabyTe]

Lmao...dude where do you people keep getting this idea that I have "anger"? I'm not angry at all at anyone or anything. I just wanted to rap a few lines and see what happens. I'm not that great at rapping yet I'm still practicing though. But I'm getting better. Jeez, quit taking me so seriously and making snap judgements.

Hmm I dunno, seemed like a bit of an angry verse. Music is a good way to relieve your anger. It's a good release. But if that's not why you're doing it that's cool too, everyone has different reasons for making their music.

Keep rapping man, if you keep at it maybe you'll be big someday.

 

[welshkarl]

JB, for what it's worth I think your rap is very good I'd give it 8 outa 10.

 

[jacksoncharvel61]

I wish I could rap period, the only thing I can w"rap" is paper towels!

 

[theFijian]

I'm slightly confused...why are we being asked

Rate this rap verse out of 10...

then being told...

Do not judge

 

[Western Deity]

I thought it was kinda odd that the only person with a mind of their own was the person who gave the "Verse" a 10 .

I just decided I wouldn't be willing to buy a CD with that on it, and I listen to Christian rap as well.

 

[Bulldog]

3/10

Not quite a fan the style of rap used.