Poetic Works

[TheRedFox]

no i know that people will not always telling me i'm good, but the way he said it was realy rude and mean

The world has two faces, one a frown and one a smile - both of which will look upon you all throughout your life.
You take the smile well, it seems - don't we all. You appear to be a strong and talented girl - when you see the frown, smile.

<3

 

[SimplyUnique]

ok well thank you for your advice

 

[SimplyUnique]

Poem for Alex #2



When others bring me down
And spit in my face

I think of you

And your sweet kind words

I think of your love

When others show hate

I think of your touch

When others push me around

No one can discourage me

As long as I have your love

No one can bring me down

As long as I’m yours

No one can make me feel anything

Except you

 

[TheRedFox]

Poem for Alex #2

I wrote something quite similar to this a long, long time ago. This poem evokes for me a sad, but happy memory.

<3

 

[BohemianChris]

no i know that people will not always telling me i'm good, but the way he said it was realy rude and mean

I can't help it that your poetry is horrible. Don't post if you don't want feedback. My first intent was NOT to be mean, but to give you an intelligent response.

Keep writing, maybe you'll write a poem I like. Remember, I am just a critic. Take my critique with a grain of salt or with a hammer, your choice.

I'm a published poet, are you?

Best,
Chris

 

[iaertehbest]

Hmmmmmm, not sure what to say, how about i am ginger and therefore win, is that ok?

 

[SimplyUnique]

no but i'd like to be a published poet...